Let the Wind Blow

1 Part Story 205 Reads 21 Votes
RoanAsher By RoanAsher Completed
This is a semi autobiographical tale I just needed to write and get off my chest. It is supposed to be nonsensical and it's okay if the sentences don't really make much sense. It's raw and that how I wanted it.
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)
Ok, I'm going to try and do a comment thing. And I'll try to do more then "it's good" kind of thing. So let's see. First of all, people suck! And I know you took creative liberties on some of it but that doesn't change the bare bones of the matter, a girl broke your heart and used you at least in some small way. And for that, I apologize on behalf of my female species!
                                    
                                    Onto the actual writing. It was solid. Absolutely solid. I'm not good with grammar so if there are any errors the only way I'd see them is if they're blatant. You capture the emotion well and really conveyed it through the text.
                                    
                                    So there's my comment. Sorry I'm not better at it :)