Tanhaiyan-shraman version

By priyadarshini_198_

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mohhabat nazdeekeon se nahin tanhaiyon se badhti hai Tanhaiyan-a great love story portrayed amazingly by bar... More

Character Description {EDITED}
MEET SHRAVAN AND SUMAN [Chapter-1] {EDITED}
More of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
terrace romance [Chapter -2] {EDITED}
hospital rush [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
Flower of Love Blossoms [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
what's hidden [Chapter-3] {EDITED}
The garden surprise [chapter 3 contd.]
sometimes its good to fight [chapter-4]
suman's past story [chapter 4 contd.]
Shravan to rescue [chapter 4 contd.]
namik's question
new cover!!!
Is that a new danger??[chapter 5]
Misha-happening [chapter 5 contd.]
misha's unveiled [chapter 5 contd.]
Together Forever?? [Chapter---6]
MIS-UNDERSTANDINGS!! [CHAPTER 6 Contd.]
BREAKING DOWN!! [CHAPTER-6 Contd.]
IS THIS IT??! [Chapter 6 contd.]
THE UNKNOWN THREE MONTHS [CHAPTER 7]
DEV BANERJEE?? [Chapter 7 contd.]
RECONCILING!!! [Chapter 7 contd.]
FACE TO FACE [Chapter 7 contd.]
TUG OF WAR!💢! OR LOVE?♥? [Chapter 8]
REAL IDENTITY??[CHAPTER 8 CONTD.]
ENGAGEMENT [Chapter 8 contd.]
ESCAPING UDAIPUR [Chapter 8 Contd.]
OFF TO MUMBAI👋🏼 [Chapter 9]
Pieces of evidence?-1 [Chapter 9 Contd.]
A Short Reunion [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Guess what!!!
dev in Mumbai? [Chapter 9 Contd.]
HELLO?! [Chapter 10]
Suman's wedding! [Chapter 10 contd.]
ARE WE BREAKING UP? [Chapter 10 contd.]
Giving up?! [chapter 10 contd.]
Re-kindling Relations [chapter 10 contd.]
Mehendi ceremony [Chapter 11]
Where's shanaya? [Chapter 11 contd.]
All well that ends well! [Chapter 11 contd.]
Happy Ending [Epilogue]

Sweet Late Night Talks [Chapter 9 Contd.]

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Recap-Off to Mumbai

on the flight,

Rohan and shanaya were seated together and suman was behind them

Rohan-babes, you're ok there right? else you can come here

Suman-oh Mr.thoughtful human, thanks for your concern, but main yahan theek hun. you guys enjoy

Shanaya-bhabhi, I think you should talk with bhai, Warna he'll be restless

Rohan-yeah babes

Suman-don't worry, I am still in touch. you guys get some rest, I will be watching something

a message popped on suman's phone

ping

Shravan-sumo, you ok?

Suman-(Seen)

ping

Shravan-sumo look, don't ignore me

Suman-(seen)

ping

Shravan-ok fine, I accept I was wrong. I beg you, please reply

Suman-(seen)

ping

Shravan-sumo I am sorry, like really sorry, ab toh Maaf kardo, please

Suman-(seen)

ping

Shravan-acha baba, wait

Suman received this and was surprised. just then Rohan turned back and saw her smiling like an idiot

Rohan-eh, tujhe kya hua? aise chudailo jaise daant kyun faad rahi hai?

Suman-tu na chup hi reh, gadha kahinka

Rohan-yaar Maine kya kiya ab?

Suman-(ignoring rohan)-shanu tumhare bhai se na koi zyada der take naraz nahin reh sakta

Rohan-woh kyun?

Suman-yeh dekh!

suman showed the pic to them 

Shanaya-(pouting)-he really knows how to make someone smile when the person is mad

Suman-jealous?

Rohan-oh hello, excuse me, i can apologize better than this. he's so old school

Shanaya-(hitting Rohan)-how dare you call my bhai old school

Rohan-sorry, sorry

Suman-guys, behave! goodnight

Rohan-good night

Shanaya-goodnight bhabhi

Rohan and shanaya cuddle and doze off. sumo was peeking out of the windows when there was another message

ping

Shravan-dekh ke bhi reply nahin kar rahi? fine I'll send something, agar who seen hua, then I'll assume ki i am forgiven

Suman-(mumbling)-aisa bhi kya bhej rahe hain janab? whatever, I'm not seeing it

ping

Shravan-(3 video)

ping

Shravan-hope these things keep you company tonight, my cute and angry baby girl. 

Suman saw there were 4 messages from shravan.

Suman-(holding herself back)-no sumo, you will not see. but bheja kya hai usne? but if i see these its same as forgiving him,no I'll not see. what if its something important? Sumo, don't be a fool, you'll not see that's it

An old lady accompanied by another lady came and sat near her seat.

Suman-aap log bhi Mumbai jaa rahe ho?

Young lady-ji haan, aap bhi jaa rahe ho?

Suman-haan... (smiling towards old lady)... auntie ke checkup ke liye jaa  rahe ho?

Old lady-nahin beta, meri beti ki operation ke liye

Suman-oh sorry, operation kis liye?

Young lady-woh mere brain mein ek tumor hai, uska hi operation hai

Suman- i am so sorry, mujhe pata nahin tha. aur aapke husband?

Young lady-i am not married. Actually mera boyfriend tha, jiske saath i was in a relationship for ten years, but jab mujhe pata chala ki i have a tumor, i broke up with him. Shayad who mere life ki sab se badi galti thi.

Suman-kyun? I mean I am sorry if i am being too involved but medical science mein tumor is curable right? he should have resisted it

Young lady-he did! but i was not in a mindset to hear to him. Maine uske messages, calls, letters Kisi ka reply nahin Kiya. and after a month it suddenly stopped. mujhe laga ki he moved on, but i was wrong. (smiling sadly)... He met with an accident. severe internal injuries thi, he was on the ventilator for nearly a week, and then he passed away. mujhe bas isi baat ka bura laga ki i wasn't even able to see him for the last time.

Suman-i am really really sorry. shayad mujhe puchna nahin chayiye tha

Young lady-its ok. shayad uski hi duaon ka asar hai, i was able to survive so long, doctors ne toh Sirf 1 month ka time diya tha, its been four months now, and i am able to get it out now.

Suman-toh iske baad?

Young lady-apne parents aur uske parents ko ek achi si life dene ka plan hai

Suman-nice

Suman gets a message again.

ping

Shravan-goodnight, angel

Suman smiles seeing this

Young lady-husband? boyfriend?

Suman-boyfriend

Young lady-jhagda hua hai? aap tab se reply nahin kar rahe?

Suman-no its just he's too caring

Young lady-believe me, you're lucky, aise ladke kam hi hote hai

Suman-i hope aapko bhi koi dusra zaroor milega, life gives everyone a second chance. oh by the way i am suman

Young lady-i am yasmine

Suman-nice name

Yasmine-thanks. I think aapko reply kar Dena chahiye, Warna who poore time disturbed rahenge.

Suman-even I think that now, excuse me

suman goes to the washroom and calls Shravan

suman-(in a fake angry tone)-kya Hua? disturb kyun kar rahe ho??

Shravan-sumo I am sorry like really sorry

Suman-pata hai...(playful tone)...tabhi toh call Kiya

Shravan-mujhe pareshan karne main bada maza aata hai na tumhe?...tumhe toh main kal dekhta hun sumo ki bachhi

suman-haan dil bhar ke dekh Lena Abhi go to sleep, bye

Shravan-love you

Suman-hmm bye

Shravan-arey, tum bhi bolo

Suman-goodnight 6 foot 4-inch ke Qutub Minar. sweet dreams, bye

Shravan-Sara kuch bol diya, par mujhe jo sun na tha woh nahin bola😟

Suman-ekdum bacche ho tum, achha baba i love you too, bol diya ab khush?

Shravan-bohot, goodnight

Suman-bye

Suman hangs up smiling and goes to her seat

Yasmine-smile se to lag Raha hai problem solved, hai na??

Suman-(blushing)-haan

Yasmine-oh god aap kitni cute lagte blush Karte Huye, I bet aapka boyfriend bohot lucky hai

Suman-thanks. waise aapke operation ke liye good luck, I wish everything goes well

Yasmine-thanks

they both doze off with beautiful smiles on their faces.

TO BE CONTINUED..........................................................................................................

Hey Guys

I know I am very very irregular

But please bear with me

I'm trying my best to upload regularly but all the things are just jumbled up

just some more time, ill be clearing up all the mess and uploading it back

till then ill be uploading randomly whenever I have time

sorry for the inconvenience

LOVE

PRIYA

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