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Note : We are particularly not impressed with the way we got the results and outline so we will be posting the score sheet for those who have no reviews due to last minute judging, and some big mistake on our part. Accept our apology please.
In no particular order, the results :
Gabriel
HeraHarker
• Title : 3/ 5
• Cover : 3/ 5
• Story Description : 5/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 2/5
• Characters : 9/ 10
• Originality : 10/10
• Writing style : 8/10
• Pace : 8/10
• Plot : 13/ 15
• Grammar : 19/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 3/ 5
Total : 83/100
The Progress
rykimchi
• Title : 3/ 5
• Cover : 4/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 5/5
• Characters : 8/ 10
• Originality : 10/10
• Writing style : 7/10
• Pace : 7/10
• Plot : 13/ 15
• Grammar : 19/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 3/ 5
Total : 83/100
Mafia Entanglement
Foxylady22
• Title : 5/ 5
• Cover : 1/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 3/5
• Characters : 7/ 10
• Originality : 6/10
• Writing style : 6/10
• Pace : 8/10
• Plot : 13/ 15
• Grammar : 16/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 4/ 5
Total : 73/100
VALENTINA
uniqueme65
• Title : 5/ 5
• Cover : 3/ 5
• Story Description : 2/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 2/5
• Characters : 6/ 10
• Originality : 7/10
• Writing style : 5/10
• Pace : 6/10
• Plot : 10/ 15
• Grammar : 14/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 2/ 5
Total : 62/100
Ocean Storm
VictoriaLachac
• Title : 3/ 5
• Cover : 5/ 5
• Story Description : 4.5/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 5/5
• Characters : 10/ 10
• Originality : 10/10
• Writing style : 9/10
• Pace : 9/10
• Plot : 15/ 15
• Grammar : 18/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 4/ 5
Total : 92.5/100
• Title : 2/ 5
• Cover : 2/ 5
• Story Description : 2/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 3/5
• Characters : 7/ 10
• Originality : 9/10
• Writing style : 10/10
• Pace : 10/10
• Plot : 14/ 15
• Grammar : 18/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 3/ 5
Total : 80/100
Cloak And Dagger
BooksAndSugarSpice
• Title : 4/ 5
• Cover : 2/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 3/5
• Characters : 9/ 10
• Originality : 9/10
• Writing style : 9/10
• Pace : 9/10
• Plot : 14/ 15
• Grammar : 17/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 3/ 5
Total : 83/100
Partners In Crime
4everSherlocked
• Title : 4/ 5
• Cover : 3/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 5/5
• Characters : 10/ 10
• Originality : 9/10
• Writing style : 10/10
• Pace : 9/10
• Plot : 15/ 15
• Grammar : 19/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 4/ 5
Total : 92/100
The Cold Hearted Warrior
Mystic_Writer97
• Title : 4/ 5
• Cover : 3/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 5/5
• Characters : 9/ 10
• Originality : 10/10
• Writing style : 10/10
• Pace : 10/10
• Plot : 14/ 15
• Grammar : 19/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 3/ 5
Total : 91/100
Bosque's Outlaws
Zidhi_the_Zebra
• Title : 3/ 5
• Cover : 2/ 5
• Story Description : 4/ 5
• Opening Chapter : 5/5
• Characters : 10/ 10
• Originality : 10/10
• Writing style : 9/10
• Pace : 10/10
• Plot : 14/ 15
• Grammar : 18/ 20
• Personal Enjoyment : 5/ 5
Total : 90/100
Realm Of Gristonium : Lost Tiara
avdutt
88 /100
I think I am in love with your writing style. The blurb and the first paragraph were enough to get me hooked. I love how you described each and everything making sure not to miss out any detail. Your work is full of imagery and I that that's what most new authors including me struggle with. Your characters are perfectly weaved and I think you are going well with the pacing. Maybe try slowing down it a bit. I am not sure if it will make your book better but I feel it's worth a try. And work on your paragraph formation a bit. Some paragraphs are a bit too short and some are a bit too lengthy making it unpleasing to look at. And remember, that every dialogue needs to be started from a new line so be mindful of that. Apart from that, you are on the perfect track to write a story ❤❤
Greys III
TierneyDanae
80 /100
Okay so, I am not satisfied with the cover and the blurb. They did not do justice to the book. Cover seems plain and it's like no effort has been put into it. Blurb needs to be edited too. Too short. I suggest use proper separators to separate the actual blurb from the achievements and the warning. It looks too messy. I love the opening chapter. Your writing style is fabulous too and thankfully, you have formed proper paragraphs. For some reason, bad paragraph formation irks me XD. I also like how you wrote every character and the chapter titles are pretty good and interesting too. Keep it up! Good luck with the Wattys ❤
A Tomboy Whose Favorite Color Is Pink
loveursalf
60/100
Your title is too long, way too long for me and it's not very catchy either. Your cover looks really plain and doesn't really have any relations with the story except for the pink part. The boxing thing is quite hard to see because the text covers most (if not all) of the cover. A cover change should do no harm to your book, so that would be my first suggestion for your book. Now talking about your description, it's not comprehensive enough. I think I got a little idea about it after reading it like thrice, and I gave someone else to read but I wasn't the only one who didn't understand it. It needs major refurnishing as it has some grammatical errors, missing Capital letters and punctuations.
Based on the first five chapters I read, Your male lead, Briar, seemed quite girlish and didn't have a solid personality. I thought he was a girl until I got to the middle of chapter one. Your dialogues are also confusing because at times I don't know who is talking, or who is being referred to, so you should definitely work on it. Grammar wise, you tend to use lower case letters to start your sentences, and you switch tenses quite a lot. I think if you work on these aspects of your book, it will definitely be better to the judges of future awards you will enter.
Lies Of The Valley
SierraStyx
89 / 100
I did not find any problems but I found out that the character and the ploy were not good for me, but again the story was good!
78 /100
Starting with the cover and blurb, I don't like the fonts of the cover. They don't give off the vibe of the story. The background picture however is bomb XD. Blurb reveals the right details. I like it blush. The pacing is perfect but you need to work on your writing style. It's a bit amateurish but that's fine considering you are an amateur. And form proper paragraphs, please. Paragraphs should at least contain 5-6 sentences. Yours barely had 3 or 4 XD. It actually makes the book unpleasing to read, at least for me it does. Plus, maybe try to use more literary devices in your work specially imagery. I had a hard time imagining things. Apart from that, I enjoyed reading the book. Looking forward to read more chapters ❤
The Last Clue
BookQueen422
77/100
Your title was short, explanatory, and catchy. Your cover was a different case. I didn't like it, because it looked too plain, and cut out the main texts. Your blurb was simple and something that was easy to understand. It didn't have too much explosive grammar in it, but I still noticed some things that could be changed e.g how it would be better as 'friends' and not 'friendships'. Your book was really okay but I would have liked it, or I would have been better rather, if we had gotten a character introduction and not just you throwing them in. There were times you over spaced, and some grammatical errors were found, but all in all, it was a good book and would definitely do better with some editing
The Assassin
AvengerAssemble117
94 / 100
The story was great and the characters too. The title really suits the story also!
A Marine And His Experience With Tankery
MilitaryPro1
93 / 100
The story is great, I really love it too but the author said that it is not his / her original story but still it's good and the partner with the story is also good.
Ice Portal Interval Two
oldpuzzle
90 / 100
The title did suit the story but I don't think the story was an original idea because its like the story of the "Escape Room"
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Lost (Parrlyn)
Sorrynotsorry29
91 / 100
The story is nice, the grammar and writing style is cool and the title also suits the story!
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The Assassin — AvengerAssemble117
S E C O N D P L A C E
A Marine And His Experience With Tankery — MilitaryPro1
T H I R D P L A C E
Ocean Storm — VictoriaLachac
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