When two hearts become one(Shadow x pinkie pie)

Should i change a few words?

I am not that confident in this book and even though I want to delete it or ignore it, I see some people who are still wanting to read this and I feel very guilty in saying that I want to give this story up. So I might just edit some chapters from the beginning to fit the story that I want. I can definitely see that shadow doesn't act like himself so I'll change that. And I hope you guys will be ok with the sudden change sin this book but I'll do my best to try to post chapters as bets as I can.
So I'll be busy editing chapters and having new ideas. Also whoever said they wanted a OC in the story, I'm sorry but I won't think I can. I can only add two OCs that I already added so I'm really sorry about that and hope you forgive me for that.