Book: ORPHANED...???
Author: Khwaish1
Judge: _tedarkprincess_
Title: (7/10)
The title is appropriate to the story but many authors use it.
Blurb: (8/10)
Short and catchy but still it needs some work.
Cover: (8/10)
Fits the storyline perfectly but small work is needed to make it perfect.
Plot: (10/10)
Unique but I didn't read the story with this plot.
Character development: (8/10)
Son, dad and mom (Author didn't keep the names for characters but well explained their role.) For me, the author didn't give more role to mom and son.
Grammar : (8/10)
Easy and understandable but some errors are there so the story needs editing.
Flow : (8/10)
Flow is moderate I felt it breaks in mid.
Dialogue / Expression: (7/10)
Not many dialogues but used and the used ones are superb.
Creativity/ Originality : (8/10)
Perfect but I would be happy if you even add more scenes.
Overall: (8/10)
Overall I loved this story, good time in reading it, editing is must then the story will be the perfect one.
Total: 80/100