Title: The Claimed: A Clash Of Copper and Golf
Author: spelunkadunk
Title: 3/5
Cover: 2.5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar: 18/20
Plot: 13.5/20
Character Development: 17/20
Original: 15/20
Total: 78/100
Honest Review:
I really like the book. I'm normally not much of a fan of LGBTQ+ but I didn't mind much and it wasn't cringy. Also, with the way you portrayed and your characters, it was impossible to have any passive feelings towards them. I don't know how you could do that, but it was impressive. I didn't see many places to criticize and that's thanks to your lovely skills as a writer. I did feel sometimes that the interaction between the reader and the story/characters. Sometimes, I literally laughed at some of the character's actions and statements, however, I felt that at some points, I wasn't engaged. I was even bored at some points. I skipped over a part before I realized that I was judging and I'd have to read it all. After that, it was pretty smooth, though. I liked the plot and the pace at which things went.
The book was an overall spectacle. I'm a strict critic from what I've learned thus far, and consider me impressed! To the writer, I'll be reading your beautiful work. Keep writing, as you do it so well.
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Thank you Starrlite101 for the amazing review