Hello! I got these scores like a week ago, sorry I'm just now posting them! I've been really busy. School just started back up, but without further ado let us begin!
There were two judges for this category so scores were averaged, the average score will be what determines placing.
So, our participants were,
Phantom Calls by Broomstick21362
Violet Blues by Kihi-98
I am Dreaming by kathyverne
Listen by brighteverafters
And
What Once was Perfect by _WildVixen22
The scores for third place,
Grammar: 19.5/20
Plot: N/A
Character Opinions: N/A
Planned Out: 7/10
Book desc., title, cover all fit: 3/5
Follows: 0/2
Enjoyment: 8/10
Vocab: 8/10
Total: 45.5/52
Review: This wouldn't be categorized as a short story. It was a one piece, a standalone. The flow was good, and everything in general. I really liked it, the simplicity. Nothing too fancy.
That goes to, I am Dreaming by kathyverne
I'll pm you the link to the sticker, and here's your certificate.
Total Overall~ 40.25
The scores for second place~
Grammar: 18.5/20
Plot: 5/10
Character Opinions: 6/10
Planned Out: 6/10
Book desc., title, cover all fit: 4/5
Follows: 2/2
Enjoyment: 6.5/10
Vocab: 3/5
Total: 51/72
Review: It started out well, the flow was great, I didn't feel like stopping in between. Unnecessary swearing. Overdone theme. The end was abrupt, I was thinking there would be a twist now, but there wasn't. If the end is fixed, and the story lengthened a bit, I feel this could be a lot better. I have faith in the writer.
It is, What Once was Perfect by _WildVixen22
Your sticker link coming soon, certificate~
Total Overall~ 46.5
And so, first place could go to, Phantom Calls, Violet Blues, or Listen... The scores~
Grammar: 15/20
Plot: 7.5/10
Character Opinions: 7/10
Planned Out: 8/10
Book desc./title/cover: 3.5/5
Follows: 2/2
Enjoyment: 8/10
Vocab: 4/5
Total: 55/72
Review: The fact that it's a short story which is also nonfiction made it quite powerful. I found it very inspiring. I think, with just a teeny bit of edits here and there, working on the book description, it'll be greater than it is now.
It is... Drumroll please 🥁🥁🥁...
Listen by brighteverafters
Sticker link, coming soon, certificate~
Total Overall~ 55.5
Congrats!
As for the other two, here are the scores!
Grammar: 16/20
Plot: N/A
Character Opinions: N/A
Planned Out: N/A
Book description/title/cover all fit: 2/5
Follows: 2/2
Enjoyment: 3/10
Vocab: 2.5/5
Total: 25.5/42
Review: It was a short part, more of a rant of 100 words.
Total Overall~ 24.25
This was Phantom Calls by Broomstick21362
Certificate
Grammar: 14/20
Plot: 7/10
Character Opinions: 6/10
Planned Out: 7/10
Book desc., title, cover all fit: 4/5
Follows: 2/2
Enjoyment: 8/10
Vocab: 3.5/5
Total: 51.5/72
They were one shots. So I averaged it out. They were short, sweet. One of them caught my attention in particular called cemetery. Good job, entertaining.
Total Overall~ 26.25
This was Viotlet Blues by Kihi-98
Certificate~
Congrats everyone! We hope to see you back again next time!