Title: Chasing Bliss
Author: oceanbae20
Genre: Romance
Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 17/20
Plot: 18/20
Character Development: 19/20
Original: 20/20
Total: 90/100
Honest Review:
What an intriguing story! I've never read anything like this and I found that the name brings the storyline out! The cover is well designed and has a sophisticated feel.
The actual story starts off a little bit too slow for my liking. Minimal grammatical and punctuation errors were found.
The characters were strongly characterised and had defining personalities. I feel like you over describe a little bit in certain areas however, that really helped paint a picture of what was going on in my head.
Your blurb could use some work. It was a little bit too short and too vague for my liking. I know a blurb is hard to write but think about what your end outcome is and potentially include some foreshadowing. Or, share an interesting scene that is sure to grab your reader's attention. Overall, this story was amazing and I can't wait to see how it ends. I suggest you go edit your old chapters and fix up those minor grammatical errors.
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Thank you Sapphire_TGA for the amazing review!