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First is third place.... Here are the scores...
Plot~ 7/10
Character Opinions~ 7/10
Planned out~ 9/10
Cover, title, desc. All fit~ 5/5
Vocab~ 4/5
Follows~ 2/2
Enjoyment~ 8/10
The book is, drumroll please.....
The Urban Mantra by peachyindy
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The Overall Score~ 61/72
Review~ "I liked the set up for your book where they both are in a band and there three rules (One of which will obviously broken (: loved that part by the way), but I feel like it happened to fast. Andrew and her started the band a little bit too quickly for my liking, but that may just be me. Additionally, your vocab and grammar was fine, but you've got a tiny problem with flow. Some of your sentences don't flow together and sound skeletal if that makes any sense. I loved your cover and the title is perfect for your story. Hope you continue writing!"
Next is second place! Here are the scores!
Grammar~ 20/20
Plot~ 9/10
Character Opinions~ 9/10
Planned out~ 9/10
Book title, cover and desc. All fit~ 5/5
Vocab~ 5/5
Follows 2/2
Enjoyment~ 10/10
This book is, drumroll please.... Epoch in Time by zhinched
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The Overall Score~ 69/72
Review~
"I absolutely loved this book. It wasn't like the other basic/cliché romance stories you see on Wattpad everyday which I though was really amazing. On top of originality, your cover was so pretty and so well put together which I really appreciate since I'm a graphic designer myself. The only minor problem I'd say there is (Keep in mind this is my opinion and it may be wrong) I felt like some parts of your writing were more descriptive than others which messed with the flow a little, but I wouldn't sweat it. Overall, great storyline and love the characters and Jamie and Nic <3. Hope you keep writing!"
Congratulations you two! There are still 3 contestants left! Double Mara by sibylMelanie
Falling for her Lipstick by Lizismagical
And A Little Harmony by SkullantacySmith
First place... The scores...
Grammar~ 20/20
Character Opinions~ 9/10
Planned out~ 9/10
Description, title, and cover all fit~ 5/5
Vocab~ 5/5
Follows~ 2/2
Enjoyment~ 10/10
The Winner is.... Drumroll please... 🥁 🥁🥁
A Little Harmony by SkullantacySmith
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The Overall Score~ 70/72
Review~
"Your writing style is one of the best Ive ever seen on Wattpad. I'm surprised you don't have more reads and votes considering how good of a writer you are. The attention to detail is something that I think always really stands out in romance stories mainly because so many of them have the same plot line. I like how the characters and their story lines aren't cliché and overall you story seemed so original. If I had to give some negative feedback, the only thing I'd say is that in some places of the story, the descriptions aren't needed because it just seems unnecessary, but it doesn't take away that much from the story. Additionally, I also loved how your cover was simple yet fit with the title and story. Hope you keep writing! :)"
Congratulations! 🥳
Don't worry for those of you who didn't win! You get something too!
Double Mara by sibylMelanie
Here's your scores!
Grammar~ 18/20
Plot~ 8/10
Character Opinions~ 8/10
Vocab~ 3/5
Follows~ 0/2
Book, desc. and title all fit~ 4/5
Enjoyment~ 8/10
Here's your certificate~
Overall Score~ 59/72
Review~ "I think the idea for your story was great and original, but as I got further into it, it started turning into the other books out there. Your cover and title are really good and they fit with each other especially since the cover was so well put together. If there's one thing I'd say that needs to be fixed, is that some sentences in your writing weren't needed and felt like they were put there on accident because they just didn't fit or weren't needed. Overall, just work on the writing part and I'm sure it'll be good!"
Falling For Her Lipstick by lizismagical
Here's your score~
Grammar~ 19/20
Plot~ 7/10
Character Opinions~ 8/10
Title/desc./cover all fit~ 3/5
Vocab~ 4/5
Follows~ 2/2
Enjoyment~ 7/10
Overall Score~ 58/72
Review~ It's really long so I'm gonna put in the original picture from discord...
Finally, thank you to our wonderful judge,
SugaQuackson
Don't worry, you get something too!
Congratulations everyone! 🥳