Tanhaiyan-shraman version

By priyadarshini_198_

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mohhabat nazdeekeon se nahin tanhaiyon se badhti hai Tanhaiyan-a great love story portrayed amazingly by bar... More

Character Description {EDITED}
MEET SHRAVAN AND SUMAN [Chapter-1] {EDITED}
More of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
terrace romance [Chapter -2] {EDITED}
hospital rush [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
Flower of Love Blossoms [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
what's hidden [Chapter-3] {EDITED}
The garden surprise [chapter 3 contd.]
sometimes its good to fight [chapter-4]
suman's past story [chapter 4 contd.]
Shravan to rescue [chapter 4 contd.]
namik's question
new cover!!!
Is that a new danger??[chapter 5]
Misha-happening [chapter 5 contd.]
misha's unveiled [chapter 5 contd.]
Together Forever?? [Chapter---6]
MIS-UNDERSTANDINGS!! [CHAPTER 6 Contd.]
BREAKING DOWN!! [CHAPTER-6 Contd.]
IS THIS IT??! [Chapter 6 contd.]
THE UNKNOWN THREE MONTHS [CHAPTER 7]
DEV BANERJEE?? [Chapter 7 contd.]
FACE TO FACE [Chapter 7 contd.]
TUG OF WAR!💢! OR LOVE?♥? [Chapter 8]
REAL IDENTITY??[CHAPTER 8 CONTD.]
ENGAGEMENT [Chapter 8 contd.]
ESCAPING UDAIPUR [Chapter 8 Contd.]
OFF TO MUMBAI👋🏼 [Chapter 9]
Sweet Late Night Talks [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Pieces of evidence?-1 [Chapter 9 Contd.]
A Short Reunion [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Guess what!!!
dev in Mumbai? [Chapter 9 Contd.]
HELLO?! [Chapter 10]
Suman's wedding! [Chapter 10 contd.]
ARE WE BREAKING UP? [Chapter 10 contd.]
Giving up?! [chapter 10 contd.]
Re-kindling Relations [chapter 10 contd.]
Mehendi ceremony [Chapter 11]
Where's shanaya? [Chapter 11 contd.]
All well that ends well! [Chapter 11 contd.]
Happy Ending [Epilogue]

RECONCILING!!! [Chapter 7 contd.]

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hey guys, its my birthday special update.....followed by a bonus update....two updates in a row♥ enjoy reading☻

recap-dev banerjee

shravan-(shocked)-what??...(making suman calm)...sumo relax main hoon na??

suman-shravan but woh yahan aa kyun raha hai??...what if he got to know about us??...agar usne tumhe kuch...no no no...woh yahan nahin aa sakta

suman was getting restless. seeing this shravan hugged her tightly to calm her down.

shravan-(rubbing her back slowly)-shss... kuch nahin hoga....na mujhe na tumhe....now calm down....(breaking the hug)...kab aa raha hai woh??

suman-kal subah...shravan woh humein milne nahin dega..usey expose nahin karne dega...agar mamiji ne meri shaadi uss se...shravan main uss se shaadi nahin karungi...please do something

shravan-sumo....baba tumhari shaadi sirf mujhse hi hogi....so don't worry...now come let's go to the party

shravan stood up and he started walking suman held his hand and made him sit back

shravan-kya hua sumo??

suman-shravan mujhe party mein nahin jaana....tum ruk jao yahin...please??

shravan-main toh ruk jaunga but tumhari mamiji ko kya bataogi tum??...aur tumne dinner bhi nahin kiya na sumo....come let's go

suman-shravan....pakka na we'll expose him??

shravan-(kissing her palms)-i promise....now get up...come

both of them went to the garden. preeti and naira was surprised seeing them together. rohan was just around when he saw shravan with suman. he was hell angry on shravan for hurting his sister. he went directly towards them.

rohan-sumo??

suman turned around to find rohan standing there. he handed her some starters and was leaving when she stopped him

suman-rohan rukk

suman made shravan turned and stood in between both of them

suman-yeh kya chal raha tum dono ke beech....shravan aata hai toh tu chala jaata hai..tu aata hai toh yeh...what's the matter guys??

rohan-(rudely)-matter yeh hai sumo ki tu isey maaf kar sakti hai but not me....isne meri behen ko hurt kiya hai....i'll not forgive him very easily

rohan went away angrily. suman stood there helplessly glancing at rohan and shravan both. shravan was feeling guilty

suman-shravan i am sorry...he's just

shravan-he's hurt sumo....aur uska naraz hona bhi jayaz hai....agar shanu ke saath koi esa karta toh main bhi shayad ese hi react karta

suman-(hugging him sideways)-phir toh tumhe family se pehle doston ko manana padega....not just rohan but pushkar, kartik, anaya and mainly preeti

shravan-yeh kis gadhe ka idea tha ki rohan tumhara boyfriend bataye??....i swear main  jaan le lun uski

suman-(laughing)-really??...great then jao pushkar wahan hai

shravan-no....is it really pushkar??

suman-ahan

shravan-aaj toh gaya woh

shravan took his phone out and messged in the group.

*guys there's something urgent to discuss. meet me after the party in sumo's room*

he forwarded it to shanaya saying to forward it to rohan

suman-mere room mein??...aur tumhe konsi important discussion karni hai shravan woh bhi aadhi raat ko??

shravan-kya hai na madam...woh aapka fiance kal subah yahin tapakne wala hai so we need a full proof plan...got it dumb head

shravan hit her head lightly and they went near naira

naira-(smirking seeing both of them together)-some people were not a couple anymore!!

suman-shut up yaar nayu...acha sun jhanvi kahan hai??

naira-woh toh tabhi nikal gayi....her husband is arriving here tomorrow

suman-(murmuring to herself)-woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai

naira-(suspiciously)-kuch kaha tune sumo??

suman-nahin toh...acha sun iss bande ko ideas chahiye the how he can calm down our angry gang...tu ise kuch ideas bata main abhi aayi

suman left hurriedly to pushkar

suman-pushkar jaldi sunn...

pushkar-tu bolegi toh sununga na??...ya phir teri bhi khamoshiya hi bolti hai...(dramatically)

suman-idiot i am serious

pushkar-(still laughing)-acha bata baat kya hai??

suman-do news hai...pehli ki tere horoscope mein aaj pitna likha hai aur dusri yeh ki woh kamina kal subah yahan tapak raha

pushkar-(confused)-main kyun pitunga??....aur kaun pitega mujhe??

suman-dekh mera kaam tujhe inform karna tha ki tere horoscope mein hai yeh....ab tujhe maan na hai toh maan warna nahin

soon the garden party was over and everyone was in suman's room. everyone sat there in total silence. seeing this shanaya spoke

shanaya-guys we're here to discuss something important aren't we??...bhai start na

shravan-(lowering his head)-guys....look i know ki maine na sirf sumo ko but tum sabko bhi hurt kiya hai....i am ready for any punishment you guys give me but yaar please can we be the same group we used to be three months back??

pushkar-(coldly)-not everything is as same as it was three months back shravan

kartik-aur tujhe koi hakk nahin banta ki tu sumo ya kisi ko bhi ese hurt kare

preeti-sorry sumo.... but main isey itni jaldi maaf kar nahin sakti

rohan-sumo tujhe maine garden mein hi bata diya tha phir yahan bulane ka fayda kya??

naira-let him speak guys....tum sab log toh ese react kar rahe ho jaise usne koi murder kar diya ho

rohan-(sadly)-he did  nayu....isne meri uss sumo ka murder kiya hai jo humesha smile karti thi

shanaya-rohan please just let him explain

pushkar-shanu don't get between us....he deserves this

preeti-he does....woh sumo jo itni strong thi aaj iski wajah se itni weak ho gayi hai....and he is just asking shamelessly for another chance??.....mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahin thi shravan

kartik-and why are you even behind her??....uski sagai ho chuki hai aur shaadi bhi....

suman-(shouting)-GUYS STOP IT....JUST STOP IT....koi ek word bhi nahin bolega ab

suman was quietly enjoying shravan being blamed a bit but when it was about their relation she just couldn't take it anymore. everyone was shocked seeing sumo react like this. everyone kept quiet and let her speak

suman-now quietly listen to me....pehli baat stop blaming him for that incident....aur pushkar tu....tera hi idea tha na ki hum shravan ko na bataye ki rohan mera bhai hai??....tu bata preeti ke saath agar rohan flirt karta aur tujhe pata na hota ki woh preeti ka bhai hai toh tu jealous nahin hota??

pushkar held his head low. he knew was at fault too but when suman pointed it out he started feeling guilty. shravan just stood and looked on how his sumo fought for him. his sumo

suman-ab kya hua bolna??.....aur kartik tu....tu toh mujhse jealous ho jata tha meri jagah agar rohan hota toh tujhe bura nahin lagta??....come on yaar guys grow up....that was just a human instinct

rohan-fine but hurting you was not a human instinct

preeti-right....uss din tujhe kitna bukhar tha phir bhi usne teri halat tak nahin puchi and he started fighting with you

suman-puri baat suni tune??...pata hai tum logon ki problem kya hai??...tum log adha adhura sun ke hi react karne lagte ho.....teri shaadi wali raat jab main room mein thi aur rohan aur naira dono mujhe dekhne aaye the maine unhe jane ko bol diya tha....he came with food and medicines aur mujhe warn kar ke gaya tha ki main kha lun but

naira-but sumo toh sumo hai na....isne toh usey haath bhi nahin lagaya

suman-haan aur shravan mujhe isi wajah se daant raha tha....now dare anyone of you talk to him rudely....i'll show you what rudeness is!!

everyone were  getting some senses in their tiny heads. all of them just at lowering their head and not even spoke a single word.

suman-shravan sabko sorry bolo

shravan-(holding his ears)-i am really sorry guys

suman-good....ab sab milke shravan ko sorry bolo

rohan-i am not saying sorry

suman-(warning him)-rohan?

rohan-fine

all-sorry shravan

suman-so can we discuss why we are here for??

pushkar-haan tu bol rahi thi kal dev aane wala hai

preeti-kya??

naira-woh kamina kyun aa raha hai??

kartik-maine invite kiya tha usey

all-what??

kartik-kyun kya hua??

shravan explained them each and everything and all of them were too shocked to react except preeti and pushkar. all were boiling with anger

rohan-(with utter disgust)-how dare he....aur mamiji ko toh obviously pata hi hoga na...its all her plan...that bloo...

suman-rohan language

rohan-sorry

kartik-shit...kyun bulaya usey maine

shravan-bhai teri gati nahin hai.....even when i met him for the first time mujhe bhi woh kaafi innocent laga tha.....acha shanu did you managed to get his file??

suman-is she assisting you in this case??

shravan-ulta hai sumo....i am assisting her in this case....isi se toh mujhe case forward hua hai

suman-i didn't knew main lawyers ki family ke saath rehti hun

shravan-actually yes mera pura family law mein hi interested hai

shanaya-bhai woh file kal subah tak aa jayegi

shravan-who's getting it??

shanaya-amol bhai

anaya-now who's this amol??

shravan-tujhe koi aur nahin mila tha.....why him??

anaya-bhai nobody was home aur he is the only person left behind....woh toh ese bhi aate hi na??...anu di he is my bhai unfortunately

suman-kyun??...rohan aur shravan se bhi zyada irritating hai kya??

shanaya-bohot

rohan and shravan just rolled their eyes at their respective sisters. suman and shanaya just chuckled looking at their faces.

preeti-guys we have another matter here...(eyeing shraman)....in dono pakka private time chahiye hoga which we have give them and make sure nobody finds out

pushkar-(shocked)-preeti are you serious??

preeti-pushkar i was just hurt shravan didn't talk it out but now he did na....toh i am good...but shravan i am warning you phir se agar meri sumo ko hurt kiya na then i'll not give you another chance

shravan-i won't i promise

suman-thanks meri pretty preeti

preeti-tere liye kuch bhi☻

rohan-maine bhi maaf kiya

shravan-thank you

pushkar-fine jaa maine bhi maaf kiya tujhe

shravan-(picking up a pillow)-maaf kiya ke bache

shravan started chasing pushkar with a pillow all around the room. pushkar ran for his life. he held suman in front of him as a shield

pushkar-(hiding behind her)-sumo bacha le apne bhai ko....tera boyfriend mujhe maar dalega

suman-tujhe maine garden mein bataya tha....hum sirf bhavishyavaani kar sakte hain bacha

pushkar further ran behind preeti hiding behind her

pushkar-preeti tera pati shaheed ho jayega...tu widhwa ho jayegi...bacha le yaar mujhe

preeti-woh pillow se maar raha hai handpump se nahi...(mimicking him)...shaheed ho jayega...aur main mere bhai ko rokne nahin wali

pushkar-(standing up with a sulking face)-yeh sahi hai...behen ko bolo toh woh apne pati ka side le rahi hai....wife ko bolo toh apne bhai ka side le rahi hai...koi toh meri side lo yaar

shravan-(coming and standing in front of him with the pillow)-yeh pillow lega na teri side

he started hitting him with the pillow and both of them fought like kids. all stood laughing at them. after some time they stopped fighting and everyone hugged each other. their gang was reconciled again

shravan-so guys abhi bohot raat ho gayi hai....kal subah uss dev ka kuch sochenge

preeti-dekha naira yeh humein abhi se bhaga raha hai!!

suman-(embarrassed)-stop it guys....chalo good night

all went out singing "good night sumo, goodnight shravan"

suman stood there smiling like an idiot. she turned back to see shravan sitting on her bed.

suman-(surprised)-tum gaye nahin abhi tak??

shravan-woh main preeti ne jo kaha uske baare mein soch raha tha

shravan got up and started walking towards suman 

suman-(stepping back)-ki...kis ke baare mein??

shravan-(pulling her to him and whispering in her ears)-alone time!!

suman was shocked hearing this. she got out of his hold and stood at a safe distance

suman-shravan you need sleep....chalo go to your

shravan-nahin ab toh main yahin rahunga

suman-(whinning)-shravann...get out right now

shravan-no babes

shravan lifted her up in bridal style and made her lie down on the bed. he got over her and started caressing her face

suman-shravan what ...

shravan-shss....i know my limits sumo...but i want to make up for all the three months we were apart...you trust me??

suman-khud se bhi zyada♥

he started placing kisses on both her cheecks. then he moved upwards to her forehead. he saw her lips and leaned further against her body.her breath was getting uneven. she slowly let her hand move on their own on his body. shravan couldn't resist anymore as he was longing for this since three months. he missed her presence around him. he just attacked her lips hungrily yet the kiss was deep and slow. his one hand was holding his weight up and another was exploring suman's back, waist and abdomen area.

her hands had mind of their own. her fingers was in his hairs racking them with love. he released her lips when they were breathless. he then moved down to her neck. she started giving him more access by tilting her head sideways. he slowly lowered the strap of her gown and started placing tender kisses on her shoulders.she was loving this feeling. although it was new to her but still she felt that this what she needed.

shravan was resisting himself of removing her gown and loving every inch of her body. they were lost in the desire land. shravan was just going to unzip her gown when she held his hand and spoke with much courage which came out as a mere whisper

suman-shravan please...i can't

shravan-(whispering and stopping himself)-i know....(zipping her gown back)...i love you

he kissed her forehead and she hid her face in the crook of his neck and both of them slept like that. they knew there was much more thing which has to be dealt with but they were on the way of taking one thing at a time.

TO BE CONTINUED..............................................................................

so guys how's the chappy??

i know you all are waititng for dev's entry since long but this was needed....after all friends give us strength to fight with everything right??

so sure read, vote and comment

next update will bring three new faces and will introduce an existing face

till then

#STAYHOME #STAYSAFE #KEEPREADING

LOVE

PRIYA


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