A Tad Bit Weird
Okay. So you want to write about an ugly bloodsucking, both gender raping demon. You have your plot. And then decide to go all BDSM on the storyline. Okay. I get that. It's you, it's what you want to write... But then BAM! You advertise this story on some kids website- hold up a minute there. I know you want read/votes/comments. But seriously? Go to a corner and think about it. Go on. I'll look after your computer for you.