Star-crossed Lovers (✓)

By cerysmichellelinda

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A STORY INSPIRED BY SHAKESPEARE'S ROMEO AND JULIET Based on the classic story of Romeo and Juliet, set in a t... More

Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Thirteen

Chapter Twelve

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By cerysmichellelinda

Juliet didn't argue with the Nurse's choice of clothes for the wedding, nor did she complain about the incessant chatter about how wonderful Paris was. 'Yes, yes, Nurse,' she said. 'I agree with you: these clothes are best.'

It seemed that the Nurse was going to take forever to lay them out. When she had finished at last, she went into the anteroom where she had her own bed. Juliet followed her and sat on the bed. 'Please, Nurse,' she said, 'Leave me to myself tonight. I'm going to spend the night praying that things will turn out better. You know what a mess it all is.'

Lady Capulet appeared at the door, 'You've been busy,' she said. 'Are you all ready or do you need my help?'

'No thanks,' said Juliet. 'We've done everything. 'Please let me be alone now. And take Nurse with you – she can stay up and help you: I 'm sure you all have your hands full with everything that has to be done before tomorrow.'

When they had gone Juliet wondered when she would see them again. She went to a little cabinet and took out the bottle the Friar had given her. There was a dagger in there as well and she placed it on the cabinet's top, Then she drew the curtains around the bed and lay down.

As she thought about what she had to do fear began to take hold of her. It spread through her veins like iced water and almost paralyzed her. She wanted to call them back and actually opened her mouth and formed the word 'Nurse' before pulling herself together. What could the Nurse do for her now? She was alone.

She was clutching the bottle She opened her hand now and looked at it. What if it didn't work?. Did that mean she'd have to be married tomorrow? She reached for the dagger and placed it beside her on the bed. She'd use it if she had to. She lifted the bottle again. What if it were some poison that the Friar had given her because he wanted her dead? In case they should blame him for her marriage to Romeo? She was convinced of it when she thought about it and yet it couldn't be: everyone knew he was a holy man.

What if she was in the tomb and woke up before Romeo came to fetch her? That was too horrible to think about. She'd suffocate in the vault – choke in the stench of death – and die, strangled, before Romeo came. Even if she didn't die there wouldn't she go mad? Just to think about all those dead bodies: all those corpses! It was a vault where her dead ancestors had been packed for hundreds of years. Tybalt. He was there. Not so long dead. He would be decomposing! And they say that at certain times of night ghosts visit the newly dead. She sat up and looked fearfully at the thick curtains.

She was sure that if she woke earlier than planned – with those loathsome smells and the shrieks of the dead – she would go mad and she would do some desperate things: she would play with her ancestors' remains and pull the dead Tybalt out of his shroud, and even perhaps take one of her great ancestor's bones and bash her own brains out with it.

Even here in her bedroom, she was starting to see things. Tybalt 's ghost was walking about, looking for Romeo.

'No,' she shouted. 'Don't Tybalt. 'Stop.'

She uncorked the bottle and raised it to her lips. 'Romeo! Romeo! Romeo!' she cried. 'I drink to you!'. She flung the bottle from her and fell back on the bed.

Everyone was rushing about. Lady Capulet stopped the Nurse in full flight and gave her the keys to the pantry with instructions to fetch more spices. The Nurse was being run off her feet: she had been sent by the cooks to get more dates and quinces for the pastry. Capulet was going around telling everyone to hurry. It was three o' clock.

'How were the baked meats coming on? Don't worry about the cost.'

'Go to bed now,' the Nurse told him. 'You'll be ill tomorrow if you don't.'

'Never,' he said 'I've stayed up all night for less important reasons and never been ill.'

He poked his nose into everything, although it was all going like clockwork.

Eventually he saw the sky growing light and realized that the wedding day had dawned and that Paris would be along any minute with music to greet his bride.

When he heard the music he was even more excited. 'Nurse, Wife. Wake up Nurse. Come here.'

When the Nurse came in she was as excited as he was.

'Go on,' he said. 'Go and wake Juliet. Get her ready. I'll keep Paris occupied.

'Hurry. He's here already. Go on. Hurry.'

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'Mistress. Wake up... Juliet?'. The Nurse stood in the middle of the room with her hands on her hips. 'Juliet!'. The child was fast asleep behind those curtains. 'Hello lamb. Lady. Shame on you, you lazybones.' Still nothing. She'd try the soft approach. 'Lo-ove. Madam. Sweetheart. Hey bride!.' 'Nothing to say? Ho ho ho. Get your money's worth of sleep for a week. Because I'll bet Paris has no intention of letting you sleep tonight.' She giggled. 'God forgive me, stop it now, Nurse.'

But it was strange how sound asleep Juliet was. She had to wake her, though. 'Madam... Madam... Madam! Well, the Count will just have to take you in your bed. He'll wake you up with a big fright, won't he?'

She pulled one of the curtains aside. 'What's this? Dressed already? And gone back to bed?' The Nurse put her hand on Juliet's shoulder and shook her. 'Lady. Lady... Lady.'

She stared.

'Oh no,' she said softly. 'Oh no.' Then, louder: 'Help.' Then she turned her head and screamed. 'Help! My lady's dead.' She looked at the pitiful sight on the bed and shook her head. 'I wish I'd never been born.'
She ran to the door. 'Some brandy here! Hurry! My Lord! My Lady!'

Lady Capulet came rushing up the stairs and ran across the hall. 'What's all the noise?' she said.

The Nurse moaned and pointed at the bed.

'What's the matter?' said Lady Capulet.

'Look, look! Oh heavy day'

Lady Capulet gasped. She ran to the bed. 'Oh... oh... my child. My only life. Wake up please, please, wake up, or I'll die with you.' She turned her tear stained face to the Nurse, 'Get help. Quickly!'

Capulet came into the room. 'What's going on? Come on! Bring Juliet down. Her husband's arrived.'

The two women began wailing. 'She's dead, she's dead, she's dead,' they repeated.

'Ha,' said Capulet. He strode to the bed. 'Let me look at her.' He stared at her for a long time. Then he put his hand on her forehead. 'She's cold.' His voice sounded as though it was miles away. 'Her blood's stopped flowing and she's stiff. She's been dead for hours. How pitiful to see her. So young. Death has taken her like frost takes a beautiful flower.'

The Nurse and Lady Capulet knelt beside the bed and wailed. Capulet dropped to his knees too but couldn't say anything now. There was a knock on the open door. Friar Lawrence and Paris stood there with a troupe of musicians, waiting for the signal to serenade the Count's bride.

'All ready to go to church?' said the Friar.

'She's ready to go and never return,' said Capulet. He got up and went to Paris. 'Oh son, Death has beaten you to it. He slept with her last night.' He put his arm round the young man's shoulders and guided him to the bed. 'There she is,' he said. Death is my son-in-law: Death is my heir: he has married my daughter. I will die now and leave him everything. Everything belongs to Death now.'

'How I've looked forward to this morning,' said Paris. 'And what a sight it brings me.'
Lady Capulet's wailing grew louder and more heartrending. The Nurse was beside herself and wailed even louder than her mistress.

Paris bent over Juliet and took her hand. 'Tricked,' he said. 'Divorced, wronged, destroyed. She's been tricked by death,' He kissed her hand. 'Oh life,' he said, 'No, not life. This is love in death.'
Capulet broke down now, and gave himself up to his grief.

Friar Lawrence's satisfaction at the success of his plan was tempered by the grief all around him. For a moment he was sorry for what he had done but then he remembered what would have happened if he hadn't done it. 'Be quiet, all of you,' he said 'You should be ashamed of yourselves. You can't bring her back by behaving like this.'

They all took notice of the holy man – stopped their wailing and listened.

'She wasn't yours entirely: you shared her with heaven. And now heaven's got everything. But she's better off for it. You could never have kept your share of her from Death but heaven can give her eternal life. You wanted to do well by her and now you're crying when she 's gone to heaven. You don't love your child very much if you go mad when you see how well she is. And in any case, long marriages are never happy: it's just as well to die young.'

The Friar put his hand out to Lady Capulet and raised her up. 'Dry your tears and put rosemary on this beautiful corpse. Dress her in her best clothes and take her to church. It's natural to cry but not sensible since she's gone to heaven.'

'Everything,' said Capulet, sobbing. 'Everything that we've prepared for her wedding will mark her funeral now. Our musical instruments will be changed to mournful bells, our celebration to a wake, our hymns to funeral dirges, our bridal flowers to a wreath – everything has become its opposite.'

Friar Lawrence took his arm. 'Come on, Sir, you must go now. And you too, Madam.' Paris lingered and the Friar waited for him. 'Come on, Sir Paris,' he said. 'All of you go and prepare to follow this corpse to her grave. The heavens are frowning on you for something you've done. Don't make things worse.'

They went sadly from the room, leaving the musicians staring at Juliet. One of them stopped the Nurse. 'I suppose we might as well put our instruments away and go home?' he said.

'Yes, lads,' said the Nurse. 'Put them away, put them away, because you can see what a sad case this is.'

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