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Hi guys, this story is about Avneil and Riyali. How these four different people end up becoming a team ..alt... More

Intro & Characters
New Relations- good & Bad!!
Questions?
Challenges- 1
Challenges-2
All have their own plans
STRUGGLING BENEATH -1
STRUGGLING BENEATH-2

Reality Differs!

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By Madhu-123

Hi I am back with another episode. Please read, vote and comment!

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NEXT DAY MORNING:

PAREIKH MANSION:

Neela is getting ready for her meeting. Juhi was getting ready to leave to Khanna's Mansion. Riya also secretly planning to leave this home. She has only few jewellery, clothes & her phone with her.  Avni came early morning to pareikh Mansion.

Ali enters Pareikh Mansion. 

Ali: Oho. Neela Ma! Maine dekha aapka cab bahar wait kar rahi he!

Neela: Oh No! Mujhe late hua sab Avni ki wajah se. Subah subah aake mujhe utaane ki bagair wo bhi achhi se so gayi. Thank god Riya ne time pe utaaya.

Ali: Wow, Woh kab se itni jaldi utne lagi. Riya heard this but she leaves from there.

Avni & Ali: See that at a time.

Avni punches Ali & says

Avni: Ali, Dekh ke baat kar yaar. Use bura lagega!

Ali: Yaar! Ok fine main maafi maang loonga.

Neela: Accha main ja rahi hoon.

Avni: Bye maa! (Hugs & kisses her) All the best Maa!

Neela: OMG! jaise keh rahi he ki main kuch exam dene ja rahi hoon.

Ali: Bye Maa! ( He loads luggage into the cab)

Here Riya thinks to share her thoughts to Avni:

Avni: Riya! Sorry Yaar! Woh, Ali mazak kar raha tha thume bura nahi lag na?

Riya: No Avni. Nothing at all. ( after lot of thinking) Avni actually...

Just then ali interrupts their Conversation thinking that Riya might share her thoughts to Avni & says

Ali: Riya ! I am Sorry yaar!

Riya: Its Ok Ali.

Ali: Chalo isi baat pe Dosthi ho jaye!

Avni: Wow, Ali Mere saath rah kar bohot samajdhar ban gaye

Ali: Very funny( riya smiles)

Avni: Chalo Riya Haath milao!

Riya thinks......Suddenly she remembers all those where they fought from childhood, where he supported her while her marriage was fixed with Neil & how she manipulated him to love Avni.

 Reality hits her hard.

Riya: Main tho dosthi karungi Ali. but kya thum log humare past ko bhool paoge. I dont think so.

Avni: Kyun nahi bhoolengi zaroor bhoolengi aur thum bhi bhool jao.

Riya shakes hand and avni also joins them.

Ali:  Ha! Hum bhool jayenge par iss baar Dhokha mat dena!( little seriously)

Avni: Ali! CHH!! 

Ali: Yaar! Avni. Mazak tha.. ab dosth ban gayi tho mazak karna tho bantha he .. he na Riya?

Riya smiles lightly.. still with doubt whether he really meant it or not!

Avni: Achha, Ali! Aaj main juhi ke saath he time spend karna chahthi hoon! Tho Cafe aa nahi paungi!

Ali: Arey! Aaj cafe ki chutti he. Kuch renovation ka kaam pada he.. Chotu ko wahan ka kaam sambaalne rakha. Shaam ko thum, neil, Juhi aur Me , Hum sab kahi chalthe he! Kya kehthe hoo!!

Avni: Hmm! Achha idea he! Riya thum bhi aana humare saath!

Riya: Nahi, Avni I am not feeling well. Main Ghar par hi rahungi, thoda weakness lag rahi he!

Avni: Oh! kya hua Doctor ke paas chale!!!

Riya: No. main medicines li. I'll be fine!

Ali shrugs thinking all this is acting..!

Avni: Ok take care! Hum phirse koi aur din chalenge!

Riya smiles!!!

Avni leaves with Juhi!!!!!

Ali: Riya, maine thumhe pehle bhi bharosa kiya! per uss baar thumne avni ko hurt karne ki koshish ki, mere kamzori ko use ki. Iss liye thujhe phirse bharosa karna mere liye bohot mushkil he..! Actually impossible he..! Tho better ab koi khel khelna ki ya dhokha dene ki soch bhi mat lena!

Riya: I know Ali! I totally agree.. But iss baar i promise main Avni aur Neil se dhoor rahungi. Please mujhe trust karna, Aakhri baar hi samaj kar!

Ali: Thats better! Uske baare me sochna bhi mat!! (turns to go but again turns back) Avni ke liye hum dosth he par thum mere dosth nahi ho! thujhe kuch bhi chahiye tho mujhe poochna sirf mujhe hi!!Avni se kuch bhi nahi baath karogi, Ok.

Tears flow in her eyes, but she controls and nods as Ok and leaves from there.

Ali leaves from there! But he forgets to ask her about her college!

AT KHANNA MANSION:

Juhi enters khanna Mansion..! Shwetha expresses her genuine concern and awkwardness of her being in the same house where Avneil are there!

 Juhi  promises to leave the house soon.  in her mind she is confused as to what she does if she goes out of this house and also she has to find her daughter, Mishti.

AT EVENING:

Avni keeps on calling Neil but all in vain. 

Avni ( to herself): Ye NEil bhi na! Call kabhi answer nahi karthe... subah se try kar rahi hu! patha nahi kahan he kab aayega! Aur upar se Ali tho das baar phone kar di ki kab hum cafe ko aayenge.. Maine plan bhi bathaya, neil. per unhe tho meri baath ka koi importance hi nahi he!!

Ali calls her( to avni):  Yaar! Avni kab aoge? Neil aaya ki nahi? 

Avni: wohi tho Neil ko kabse call kar rahi hoon. woh tho answer nahi kar raha he!

Ali (giggling): Dont worry Agar chaho tho main mera dosth ko bula lunga . Woh mera call zaroor answer karega! 

Avni: Just Shut up. Koi zaroorat nahi. Me hi call karthi hoon!  Kahna bhool gayi, Riya ko thum leke aana, ok?

Ali: Me hi kyun, arey yaar! ( thinks for a while & says ) actually unhone kaha ki use bohot weak lag rahi he.. woh aa nahi paayegi!

Avni: Oh, Per ek baar manaane ki koshish karo. woh akele kya karegi ghar me.. Maa bhi nahi he wahan!

Ali: Woh choti bachhi nahi he Avni.. 

Avni: Ali!! thum na!!

Ali: Ok OK me use phone kartha hoon!

Ali calls her but it says not reachable.

Avni calls DD & knows that he is in Sanjivani Hospital and leaves.

AT SANJIVANI HOSPITAL:

Avni enquires in the reception about Neil and leaves to meet him.

she was about to enter the room when she hears Neil

Neil: she is just like my Wife! Hunterwali!

Avni(Eyes wide open): Hunterwali!(loudly). what do u mean by that Neil? Do i control u? Am I that harsh on u? what..

Neil: Avni thum yahan! I didnt mean that way, wifey! I am sorry, Ok! I meant u r very strong! 

Avni: Shut up Neil! I know in what sense u made that comment!

Neil: Yaar Avni, I am sorry yaar! Really! Waise thum yahan kya kar raho ? Thumhe kaise patha ki me yahan hoon?

Avni: when husbands like u doesnt care about themself and doesnt respond to calls then wives has to be everywhere and anywhere to take care of them, right DD!

DD: sir wo Bhabhi  ne bahot zid ki .. isiliye bathaana pada!

Neil glares at him with " i'll deal with u later" look.

Avni: Maine apne plan ke baare me bathaya aur thum phir bhi..

Neil: Avni, shanth ho jao. Dekho kaun he yahan. The famous Neuro-Surgeon, Dr. Shashank ! Uncle ye meri wife, Mrs. Avni Neil Khanna !

  Avni realizes the surroundings and closes her out of embarassment and qiuckly bows down and takes blessings from Shashank. Shashank blesses her. Neil whispers to everyone like 

Neil: bolana ! Hunterwali he!

Shashank: waise achha hi hua! kam se kam apna beti se mulakat hui!

Avni smiles at him.

Shashank: Chalo! aaj thum mere saath time spend karna hi hoga!

Avneil could not reject him, so they follow him.

SHASHANK'S CABIN:
Anjali watches Shashank entering hus cabin with police( Neil in bis uniform) and avni and worries. So she follows them!

Anj: Dad! Sab teekh tho he na? I mean police?

Neil recognizing her!

Neil: Nahi Madam! iss hoapital me kuch galat ho rahe he! (winks at shashank & latter smiles)

Anj: Officer! I am Dr Anjali. Sorry to say this but humare Sanjivani me kabhi kuch galat nahi hotha!Waise complaint kya he?

Neil: Complaint aap pe hi he Dr. Anjali! Maine suna hey ki yahan patients kum aape ki khubsurthi ki deewane zyaade he!

Anj: Excuse me! ( she sees his name badge and realizes who he is!) Neil Khanna! Dad, ye prakash uncle ka beta he na? ( shashank signs yes!) Tillu! U stupid! Ye kya mazak tha! Thu kab police ban gaya?

Neil: Arey mazak nahi tha di! Its fact! 

Shash: Waise thune mere pareshani samaj gayi. kya bathaadu thujhe aaj kal me yahi soch raha hu! per ye tho shaadi ke liye maan hi nahi rahe he!

Anj: Dad! please abh shuru math ho jaana?( looking at avni) ye kaun he?

Neil:  ye meri Wifey, Mrs Avni Neil Khanna! aap tho mere shaadi ke time pe bahot busy the na london me! 

Anj: Hi Avni! waise sorry ! thumhare shaadi pe aa nahi payi. ( avni about to take blessing) Nahi yaar! ye kya kar rahe ho! mujhe bhudiya mat banao! aao jhappi de!  ( they hug ) waise mujhe ched rahi ho! per bhai! mujhe lagtha he kuch dher ke liye yahi rahogi tho meri nahi thumhare biwi ke deewanre bahot milegi thujhe! Avni bahot khubhsurat he! ( avni blush) Tera tho choice nahi hoga, zaroor !

Neil: Ha! Bhagwaan ka choice he!  

Just then Rishabh comes there and calls for Anjali. Anjali leaves fro the work biddibg goodbye to Avneil.

Later avneil have coffee with Shashank and leave from there. 

OUTSIDE SANJIVANI:

Neil( to DD): Achha DD! aaj liye gaye petitions ko kal court pe submit kar dena. Thum ghar jao, Jai Hind !

DD: Jai hind Sir!

Avni: Shashank Uncle aur Anjali di bahot accha he. he na! kyun na hum unhe ek din ghar bula le? 

Neil: Hmm! idea achha he! Plan karthe. pehle aaj ki plan kya hua?

Avni: shut! bhool gaya! Jaldi karo Neil! Bahot late hua! Ali tho 100 baar call kar chuka he! Ek kaam karthe he, hum pareikh mansion jaathe he! wahi pe time spend karenge, Riya ke saath!

Neil: good one! per mujhe fresh ho na he! aur mera dress?

Avni: yaad he na , thumhara woh shirt mere paas hi he, jab pehli baar jungle me mili thab thumne mujhe diya tha! ( both avneil lost in there memories of their first meet)

Avni : aur dusri baar jab thumhari accident thab bhi thumne DD se thumhare kapde laaya woh bhi hey! ( avneil remember that incident too)

Neil: Wifey, thumhari yaaddhash tho bahot thez he!  ( comes little close to her whisper) aur aaj bhi bahot khubsurut ho especially blush karthe waqt ( avni blushes listening to this, but Neil says this leaves from there)

Avni (seeing his naughty smile, comes to reality ): Me Ali ko call karke bathatha hoon!

neil smiles at her and goes to bring his car taking keys from Avni.

Avni calls Ali.

Ali: Yaar Avni! AAj ki plan he ya nahi?

Avni: plan me thoda change hey! Hum cafe pe nahi pareikh mansion me milthe he!Thum abhi niklo hum wahi directly aathey he!

Ali: aur Juhi?

Avni: Unhe kuch kaam he, woh nahi aayegi!

Ali: teekh he! Bye! Jaldi aana!

Avni: ok!

Ali leaves with food to pareikh Mansion.

 PAREIKH MANSION:

Ali entering the gate, watchman gives him the Keys to Ali.

Ali: Kaka! yeh chaabhi kyun. Andar Riya nahi he kya?

Guard: Woh tho chali gayi beta, mujhe laga...

Ali: Koi baath nahi kaka! Chod dijiye 

Guard: Per woh tho luggage ke saath chali gayi

( Ali doesn't listen to it & thinks she would return later)

Ali gets inside & he arranges the food  waiting for Avneil)

Avneil arrive.

Neil: Ali! Bhai! wow thum bahot acche ho yaar! Dosth ho tho aise, aane se pehke hi khaana thayyar!

Ali: I know Bhai! Biwiyon se tho better ho na! ( both give high-five to each other)

Avni glares at them where Neil signs sorry & leaves to fresh up. Avni gives Neil his clothes ( one DD brings after his accident as she is so possesive of the one which he gave on her first meet.)

Avni comes back to Dining Room.

Avni: ali, Riya kahan he ?

Ali: Guard ne kaha, bahar gayi he! Aathey hi honge!

Avni: Par unhone kaha ki unka health teekh nahi he! unhe rest karni thi!

Ali: itna bhi care mat karna yaar! she doesn't deserve this much! lagtha hey use humhare saath nahi rehna. Tho gay hogi bahar! 

Avni: par..

Ali: Yaar mujhe ye khaana garam karne me help karo! wo aajayegi!

Avni: Ok!

Neil freshens up & attends his office calls. while he is on phone he enters Riya's room and finishes his call  and drops his phone on the bed and leaves without noticing a letter at the bed lamp .

Neil:  Yaar! Where is Riya?

Ali: Bahar gayi! aathey hi hogi!

Neil : ok

They wait for her. Avni calls her but Riya doesn,t answer the call.

Ali asks them to have dinner saying she might be stuck up with something. Avni reluctantly agrees to Ali. They finish their dinner.

AT CHAMKO CAFE:

Riya gets down from Auto. She slowly enters cafe to see if Ali is there? She calls a boy and hands over a letter to him saying to give it to Ali and leaves from there.

Just then Riya gets Avni's call but she disconnects it. 

Riya( to herself): I am sorry Avni! I need to leave, please frogive me!

She boards back into Auto and leaves.

PAREIKH MANSION:

Avneil are tensed fro Riya. Ali thinks ( what game is she playing now?)

Avni informs guard to not to close gate as Riya is not home yet! 

Guard says what he saw to her.

Avni tensed with Information she heard, informs Neil about it.

Neil thum daro mat! me kuch kartha hoon! 

 Neil comes to Riya's room to take his phone, he sees the letter and calls avni & Ali there.

Avni reads the letter: 

I am leaving. me jaa rahi hoon. wapas nahi aane wali. mujhe itne din tak shelter dene ke liye thanks per me aapke saath nahi reh sakthe. me independent hona chahthi hoon. isi liye mujhe doondne ki koshish mat karna! please! Waise Dadi ka case bhi Khatam ho gayi tho abhi mere zaroorat bhi nahi he! please mere baare me bhool jao! mat doondhna!

                                                                                                                    -- Riya

Avneil & Ali looks on.

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PRECAP:

Riya's letter to Ali.

Riya's  bad experiences in her college and her part time job.

Mishti- Avneil's Mission!

Ali to see something!

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