Love a Bully ᯽ Vkook

Love a Bully 2.0?

Hi! So, I've *really* been thinking about something over the past several months. I've known that this story definitely has it's flaws - the weird punctuation, the bad grammar, really choppy writing and script-like style, of which I completely changed midway through. This story is just not cohesive at all, and that made me wonder, would anyone, who has read this through, be interested in reading a Love a Bully 2.0 of sorts? Basically, it would be the same story, but it would be a way to see what this story could have been like if I had written it in my style today, over 2 years later. I would fix the grammar, the punctuation, the plot holes, and maybe even add some new stuff that I have always wished that I had. I dunno. I wouldn't take down the original or anything, I just thought it would be interesting for the people who had read all of love a bully to see what it would be like now that I'm a little more experienced. Just a thought though, but if you're interested, please do let me know so I can consider it! if I get no feedback, I'll just take that as a no.