u are my lovestory

By 12343r

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hy guyss.so here u go with another story on avneil.its a story of two broken hearts who have got lots of pain... More

introduction
chapter 1-(avni's life)
chapter 2-(neil's life)
chapter 3-(avni dancing in bar)
chapter 4-(neils pain)
chapter 4-(AvNeil cross path)
chapter 5-(avni is auctioned)
part-(b)
chapter 6-(avnis fate)
chapter 7-(alis demand)
chapter 8-(sunheri and avni convo)
teaser
chapter 9-(neils decision)
chapter 9- part (b)
chapter 10-(neil again felt avnis presence)
teaser 2
chapter 11-(neil at avni's bar)
cover page
chapter 12-part (b)
chapter 13-(neil got some clue)
chapter 14-(neil saw avni)
chapter 15-(dil ibadat)
part-(b)
chapter 16-(avni and truth face to face)
teaser
chapter 16-part (b)
chapter 17(avneil face to face)
part (b)
chapter 18(all ok between avneil)
chapter 19(unconsious avni)
chapter 20(truth getting success)
chapter 21(fixing apointment)
teaser
chapter 22(meeting with dr)
chapter 23(meeting past)
chapter 24(avni is suffeeing from disease)
chapter 25(neils decision)
chapter 26(telling truth)
chapter 27(broken avni)
chapter 28(neils situation)
chapter 29(avni's wish list)
chapter 30(injections)
chapter 31(wish no.1)
chapter 32(wish no.2)
chapter 33(wish no.3)
chapter 35(wish no.5)
chapter 36(wish no.6)
chapter 37(wish no.7)
chapter 38(wish no.8)
chapter 39(wish no.9)
chapter 40(wish no.10)
chapter 41(avneil convo)
chapter 42(avni hospitalised)
chapter 43(formalities)
chapter 44(operation)
chapter 45(critical)
chapter 46(breathe)
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chapter 47(my life is back)
chapter 48(immotions)
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chapter 34(wish no.4)

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next day.........

neil gave her injection when
she was sleeping....then after
sometime she woke up and
freshened herself....and saw
a cradle in the room....neil was down...she stepped towards it....and heard baby
cries....she was shocked...she
then saw a baby doll in the
cradle....who was crying...

she smiled seeing the doll....
and took the baby doll in her
arms and started playing with
it...she was making her calm
down....

avni- awle...awle...kya huya
          mele babu ko??....kyun
        ro raha hai mera baccha?

neil was seeing her from the
door....he was having tears
in his eyes....

neils pov:-
       "ek din mein hum babies
kaise la sakte haina avni??
isiliye tumhe baby doll dia
meine...taki tumhari wish
adhuri hi sahi lekin poori ho
sake..."

he wiped his tears and smiled and stepped in...

neil- awle...mele babu ko kya
         huya??...kyun ro raha
         hai pillu??....

avni- dekho na...yeh chup hi 
          nahi ho raha hai...

neil hold the doll and turned
the switch off of it without the knowledge of avni...and was acting as if he was calming down the baby....the doll was silent...

avni- aree tumhare paas chup
           ho gaya??....

neil smiled....

avni- sayad mumma ko pasand nahi karta...

neil(seeing the baby)- aisa hai kya baby??....mumma ko aap
zarur pasand karoge...becoz
she is the best....

she was looking at neil with
teary eyes....neil sat beside her holding the doll in his hands...avni was caressing the doll's head...

neil- humara baccha kitna cute hai na??

avni- haan bilkul apne papa ki tarah.....

neil- nahi nahi... mera pillu toh apni mumma ki tarah hai...gore gore gaal...yeh chotu
sa naak...yeh badi badi aankhein....bilkul apni mumma ki tarah....avni yeh zarur bada hokar mumma's
boy banega...

avni(teared)- haan....

neil kept the doll in the
cradle and avni hugged him
tightly....

avni- thanku....thanku so much...

neil was caressing her hair...
avni looked into neils eyes
and told...

avni- maa banana mere kismat mein nahi hai neil....
nahin hai...mein best mumma toh kya...maa hi ban paungi...

neil- shh.....aise mat bolo
hamara future pillu sun lega...
aur tum world ki best maa
banogi...i know...

avni again hugged him and
neil also reciprocated back...

neil- and aapki fourth wish
is also completed my lord....

avni smiled and wiped her
tears....

avni- i love u so much....

neil- i love u more my to be
         pillu ki hone wali mom...

avni punched his stomach...
and neil smiled at her....

so how was it??
enjoyed it??
do tell me...
love u all....

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