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hy guyss.so here u go with another story on avneil.its a story of two broken hearts who have got lots of pain... Mer

introduction
chapter 1-(avni's life)
chapter 2-(neil's life)
chapter 3-(avni dancing in bar)
chapter 4-(neils pain)
chapter 4-(AvNeil cross path)
chapter 5-(avni is auctioned)
part-(b)
chapter 6-(avnis fate)
chapter 7-(alis demand)
chapter 8-(sunheri and avni convo)
teaser
chapter 9-(neils decision)
chapter 9- part (b)
chapter 10-(neil again felt avnis presence)
teaser 2
chapter 11-(neil at avni's bar)
cover page
chapter 12-part (b)
chapter 13-(neil got some clue)
chapter 14-(neil saw avni)
chapter 15-(dil ibadat)
part-(b)
chapter 16-(avni and truth face to face)
teaser
chapter 16-part (b)
chapter 17(avneil face to face)
part (b)
chapter 18(all ok between avneil)
chapter 19(unconsious avni)
chapter 20(truth getting success)
chapter 21(fixing apointment)
teaser
chapter 22(meeting with dr)
chapter 23(meeting past)
chapter 24(avni is suffeeing from disease)
chapter 25(neils decision)
chapter 26(telling truth)
chapter 27(broken avni)
chapter 29(avni's wish list)
chapter 30(injections)
chapter 31(wish no.1)
chapter 32(wish no.2)
chapter 33(wish no.3)
chapter 34(wish no.4)
chapter 35(wish no.5)
chapter 36(wish no.6)
chapter 37(wish no.7)
chapter 38(wish no.8)
chapter 39(wish no.9)
chapter 40(wish no.10)
chapter 41(avneil convo)
chapter 42(avni hospitalised)
chapter 43(formalities)
chapter 44(operation)
chapter 45(critical)
chapter 46(breathe)
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chapter 47(my life is back)
chapter 48(immotions)
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chapter 28(neils situation)

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neil screamed.....

neil- avniiii......(screamed)

sunheri and neil got panicked and neil went towards avni running....he kept her head on his lap and patted her cheecks and called her name..

neil- av..avni...plzz avni utho..plzz avni...avni ankhein kholo...dekho tumhara neil parshaan ho raha hai...plzz avni plzz mujhe chhodke mat jao...mein nai jee paunga tunhare bina...avni plzz...

sunheri was shocked seeing neil...

neil- su...sunheri avni nahi uth rahi hai...us...usse kaho na
aankhein kholne ko....plzz

he was crying badly...he was
talking and behaving like mad...he hugged her unconsiouss body and cried badly....

neil- avni plzz....ankhein kholo...tu...tum mujhe itni jaldi nahi chhodke ja sakti...plzzz...uth jao..

after sometime avni stirred in his hug....neil opened his eyes..he saw avni openeing her eyes slowly...he became happy aad smiled widely....

neil- av..avni...tum thik ho na?

avni(slow voice)- i..i am ok neil....i am ok.....

neil picked her up in bridal style and went to her room...
he made her sleep on the bed..and called juhi..

on call.....

neil- he...hello dr??

juhi- haan bolo mr.khanna...

neil explained her everything
and she said...

juhi- nei..neil calm down...yeh
sab cheezein ek brain
tumour patient ke liye
common hai...woh kabhi
bhi behosh ho sakti hai..
its just instant...so u have
to be careful...iska koi b
ilaj nahi hai neil...avni ko
hamesha apne aankhon
ke saamne rakho...as it is
her last stage now...try to
make her happy...

neil said yes and hang on the call...he went down and brought her bf...he feeded her
with his hands...she was smiling seeing his care...neil
was busy feeding her...and she was only staring him with lots of love in her eyes...

avni- neil marne ke pehle sab cheezon mein kitna sukoon milta hai na??

neil looked up and said...

neil- tum yahan marne ki baat kar rahi ho...air mein har
pal marta ja rahan hun avni...
tumhe khone ka darr mujhe jeene nai de rahi hai avni...

avni hugged him to calm him down...she kissed his forehead...

avni- mujhe yeh aansu nahi balki meri inn aakhri palon mein kuch khusiyan chahiye neil...

neil- tumhe har woh cheez karne doonga jisse tumhe khusiyan mile avni...and...and i promise u that..

avni(excited)- sacchiii???

neil(smiled)- mucchiiii!!!

avni went somewhere and came up with a list...

neil- yeh kya hai??

avni- yeh meri wish to-do list hai...inmein likhi har wish mein tumhare saath puri karna chahati hun...

neil opened it and started reading...

so how is it??
do tell me!!!
love u alll......
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