⤷ interesting plot (10)
the start "lilypadpaw was infected." had me on the edge of my seat already! loved it.
+ 10 points
⤷ organization (10)
the story was very organized! everything flowed nicely.
+ 10 points
⤷ detail (5)
it was very detailed and descriptive! your descriptions of the illness were awesome!
+ 5 points
⤷ amount of words (5)
the limit was somewhere between 1,000-1,500, and you nailed it!
+ 5 points
⤷ turned in early (2)
got it!
+ 2 points
in total, you have received 32/30! good job!