By: yoongirius
Title: Mysterious, like it, love it read it.
Cover: hottie. perfect cover for a mysterious and thriller story. :D
Plot: Not much has happened yet, so lemme just talk about the highlights and downfalls (if any Downfalls really) of this story.
Okay so one, YOURE WRITING IS AMAZING. Such perfect, word choice and description. Your detail to not only characters and the setting is literally one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
(Le questions)
The hook: A perfect beginning to get readers interested into your story. I'm loving it.
Do the characters relate?: If you mean can I relate to the characters and their feelings well, then yes I do haha.
Description: I really love it. It explains perfectly on what the story is about and it helps bring people into the story well.
Do I feel what le characters feel?: I literally felt pain in my ribs and my head when the accident happened in the first chapter.
So.....
Love it?: uHm YEs whAt tHe heCk
Suggestion: Writing is amazing of course, only some small grammatical mistakes like extended sentences, and spelling errors. But everything else is really good!
Recommend: yEs please! Go read this book and it's beautiful writing!
Ending note: thank you for requesting! Sorry for the really late review! Good luck with your book! It deserves so much credit and so much attention! Can't wait to read more!
- UYENNIE
PS I KNOW YOU SAID ITS OKAY BUT I WANTED TO SAY SOWEY UWUS❤️