Doubled Elements

By draninator

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The story of the girl behind it all. More

1| Doubled Elements
2| Avatar
3| Departure
4| Canoe
5| Attacked
6| Captured
7| Blue Spirit
8| Admiral
9| Saved
10| Scarred
11| Family
12| Agni Kai
13| Flame Change
14| Lightning
15| Teacher
16| Honor
17| We Meet Again
18| Family Reunion
19| Truth
20| Fun
21| Departure
22| Berries
23| Old Secrets
24| Water Tribe
25| Clothes
26| Bloodbending
27| Puppetmaster
28| New Friend
29| Enemy Reunion
30| Freedom Fighters
31| More Friends
32| Exposed
33| Liar
34| Desperate Times
35| Ice Sculptures
36| Ba Sing Se
37| Husbands and Whatnot
38| Xen and Yen
39| Marshmallows
40| Bison
41| Discussions
42| Just Jin
43| Spilled Tea
44| The Kyoshi Warriors
45| The Split
46| The Crystal Catacombs
47| The Death
48| Enemy Territory
49| My Cabbages
50| Messages
51| Meteor Shower
52| The Swordmaster
53| Face to Face
54| Named
55| Decisions
56| Royal Premesis
57| Best Friends For Life I Think
58| Smoothing Stones
59| The Truth Comes Out
60| Twinfuries
61| Karma
62| Decisions
(Important Author's Note)
63| Distraction
64| Crash
65| Doubled Elements
66| Run
67| Bells of Grief
68| Eclipse
69| Baby Shoe
70| Echo, Echo
71| Prisoner
72| Straight In the Eye
73| Spirit World
74| Lost Powers
75| Giant Roots
76| Always
77| The Boiling Rock
78| Escape Plan
80| Revenge
81| Lies, Plays, and Promises
82| Beach Parties
83| The Avatar's Place
84| Stop, Drop, and Man Up
85| Ready Or Not
86| Here I Come
87| I Believe
88| Beads On A Necklace
89| Beginning of The End
A/N My Life Is Over
A/N The New Era Link
A/N Ever After Link
Lumos
FANART COMPETITION!

79| I'm Letting Go

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By draninator

I backed away from the door.

"Mei, are you okay?" Zuko reached for me, but I didn't let him touch me. It was her. That monster. That evil thing.

Ty Lee dashed up the wire the gondola hung from while Azula's inferno neared us. She grabbed onto the rope, swinging across. I heard her boots slam into onto the roof, the entire thing shaking.

"You stay here, Ayame," Zuko said, swinging out the window. What did he think I was—five?

I watched as Suki and Sokka climb out, Hakoda holding onto the Warden to make sure he didn't escape. I tried to follow them, but Hakoda told me to stop.

"Ayame! Stay here," he said.

"Why?"

"Because Zuko ordered you to. Always listen to orders."

The gondola rocked back and forth, making me loose my balance. I slipped, crashing onto the Warden who took the chance to sit on top of me, sliding the dagger out of my pocket.

"No!" I yelled. Too late. He cut off the rope tied to his hands and hopped up, ripping off the gag. Hakoda grabbed him before he could do any further damage. The gondola rocked again.

"Hakoda, I need to be up there," I said. He nodded.

"Do what you have to."

"Hold on to that guy," I pointed at the Warden, and then I stood on the edge of the window, pulling myself up, my legs swinging. I turned around, my eyes scanning the battlefield. Suki and Ty Lee were perfectly matched. On the other side was Zuko against Azula, Sokka backing him up.

Azula whipped her leg in the air, delivering a roundhouse kick that was so fast, it hit Zuko in the chest. He fell back with the force, while Sokka lunged out with his meteorite sword, almost slicing her throat. Azula landed on the edge, hanging. She pulled herself with her arms, twisted her legs around, and started to kick blazing bolts of blue fire.

I leaped onto Sokka's back, pushing him down as it skimmed his shirt, the sleeve catching on fire. He yelled, "get it off me!" He waves his arm around. I looked around frantically for a source of water.

There is water all around you. Hama had said those words, closing her eyes.

I closed my eyes, breathing in softly. And then I felt the water droplets hanging loosely in the air. I rotated my arms in a fluid movement, pulling all the mist out of the air, and soaked Sokka's sleeve. Using the water, I spun around, bracing my legs, and aimed it at Azula. The water froze, turning into a sharp icicle. And I pushed.

Time seemed to freeze. She leaned sideways slowly, unsuspecting, and I found myself—at the very last second—flicking my wrist. It changed course completely, turning at a ninety degree angle.

Zuko looked right at me, surprise. The milisecond of his surprise cost him his balance. Azula bent down, swiping her leg across the floor. electric blue fire dropped Zuko to his knees. Her smile made a shiver run down my spine.

"Azula. Don't you dare touch any of my friends," I warned.

"Or what?" she asked. "What are you going to do about it? You've already shown that you can't defeat me. Tears won't help this time, sweetheart."

"Hya!" I yelled, triple-punching and ending it with a double kick. She dodged every single one of these. Zuko stepped forward, but I raised my hand. "This is my fight."

Zuko didn't argue. He stayed behind me as I focused on Azula, breathing heavily. Her dark hair spilled over her shoulders, her painted lips stretched into a sadistic smile. She was beautiful—a beautiful nightmare.

At one time, I had called this mess my friend. She was related to me. We played pranks on each other—attended meetings together. We talked about guys. We destroyed things together and then helped build them up, better. She'd given me advice. I loved her as my sister. Looking at her now hurt me.

I'd fallen into her current, letting her drag me out into the ocean and then leave me there to drown.

"I hate you," I said. "That is all I'm going to say."

Her smile disappeared. Her fists came up, and then I didn't know what was coming from where. Fire smashed into me from all sides, and I cut through a few of them, barely making it out.

"You deserved it," she said as I neared the edge. She came closer. "I thought you were going to stay. I trusted you, in a way I never trusted anyone," she said, her face menacing. Her fingers curled into fists at her sides. "You betrayed me."

And then I tripped. I let out a cry of surprise as I dropped, my foot going through air instead of stepping on solid ground. My fingers scrabbled at the roof of the gondola, desperate to get a firm grip on something. Below me, a voice shouted, "Cut the line!"

I hung from one hand, knowing that this could be the end. With Azula standing above me, there might've been no chance of survival. Zuko . . . Sokka. Help me.

My fingers slipped, and then I was falling.

And then a feminine hand slipped around my wrist, holding me tight.

"Suki," I breathed, a sigh of relief escaping me. I was pulled up, and to my disbelief, Azula stood in front of me. I wanted to say thank you, but I was so shocked that my lips froze, losing their ability to form words.

"You can't die that easily," her smirk returned as she took a few steps back. "I'm not done with you yet." I ducked as her fist connected with the empty air my head head been seconds ago. I grabbed her legs, slamming her onto the ground wrestler-style.

"Azula!" Ty Lee yelled. "They're cutting the line! This thing is going to drop!"

Azula's wide eyes met mine. She flipped me over onto my back and got to her feet. "It's time to go," she said, backing away. The mocking smile hadn't disappeared, which meant she wan't done just yet. And my point was proven when she pointed her fingers at Sokka. Lightning.

She was going to shoot Sokka.

I screamed, "Don't you dare, Azula!"

She smiled over her shoulder. And as it left her body, I did the one thing that I could do at that point. I stretched my hands towards her, and then closed my fists. The sudden movement caused Sokka's reflexes to kick in, and he rolled to the side.

Azula's arms snapped to her sides, and then I brought her to her knees, shaking with anger. She tried to kill Sokka.

She tried to kill Sokka.

The second gondola was about to pass ours. Azula was fighting the power I held over her. I felt so strong, all of a sudden. There was so much emotion in her eyes. She fought against the restraints—the restraints inside her. I could've killed her right there. I could've frozen all the water inside her, and she would've dropped. But seeing Azula so hopeless for the first time in my life brought me back to focus on what I was really doing.

I was bloodbending.

When Hama had taught me this, the first thing I thought was that this was a very, very powerful ability to have, and that I was, in some way, lucky to have learned such a thing. That it would come in handy someday. I wasn't afraid of taking control of someone if my life depended on it.

But while taking Azula down so simply, the anger flooding my veins with every movement I realized, this wasn't a power. This was a hideous loophole; a cheat. That look in Azula's eyes made me wonder who was actually the monster.

I wanted to curl my fingers inwards and crush her soul. "Don't you dare hurt my family again," my voice sounded thunderous. Her face contorted into a look of rage, and I let my fingers loosen, letting go just slightly. She was powerful. She ripped off the invisible strings then, sending a tornado my way; one so strong that it pushed me back as I cut through it. The white hot heat was so close I thought it was freezing my skin instead of burning it.

And then she easily flipped onto the next gondola, her lips pursed in wicked rage. This was definitely not the end of her. Ty Lee stood next to her, cartwheeling to reach her destination.

I looked around me to see Suki and Sokka standing close, their heads together, deep in conversation. Zuko was looking at me with a new kind of wonder. I mean, he'd seen me do it before. But to have somebody on their knees that fast—it scared me at the strength I'd been given. I was a danger.

I collapsed to my knees. "I really hope this thing floats," I said. Zuko set his jaw.

"Both of you, get in right now," he said, pointing at Suki and Sokka. They nodded, following orders. "if this thing falls," Zuko turned to me, "save them. I know you can."

"Oh, it's not going to fall," I said, feeling faint, "Don't ever use this against me, but you have a good taste in girls." I pointed at the scene going on down. The guards were pinned to the wall, and our gondola restarted. Mai had saved our lives, risking her own.

So this is what you do for love.

~~~~~~~

This is actually my favorite episode (2 episodes) in the entire Avatar series just because one day, I sat in front of the television screen and watched this episode. I was around 9, a major, major avatar fan, and that part where Suki acts all amazing and runs up the side of the building, I thought exactly this, "It would look so cool if my character did that." Just randomly. And this was way before I started writing.

And then I started thinking.

"What if my character was special? What if she was could bend two elements, because hey, I love fire and water and I really can't choose so I'll give her both. And she'll be even cooler than Suki, prettier than Suki, because Suki is really special. And Mei has to be special." Yes, I'd named her Mei with an 'e', not Ayame, because I'd always loved the name Mei.

So then I sat down and opened my drawing book and drew a character with a fire nation emblem on her shirt standing in the middle of ice. I wrote her story on the back - all this seven years ago. SEVEN.

And just last year, I wrote my first chapter, naming my character and bringing her to life . . . the way I wanted it to go.

The power of writing is very, very special. Whatever you want, if you're good at it, can be illustrated using words. So I encourage you all to write. No matter if you think you're good, or if you're bad, because if you compare MY first Avatar chapter with my latest chapter, you will see how terrible my writing skills used to be. Practice makes perfect, always rememeber that. I still have a lot of room for improvement. I've only discovered a drop of water in an ocean so far.

Another thing I want to let you all in on - This story is slowly coming to an end. I have very few chapters left to write, and so, this being my favorite (2) episode(s), I extended it into three chapters. The last four episodes of ATLA are basically one long movie, so I'll split it into like three chapters or maybe more, because I really, really love this series and don't want it to end that fast! But at the same time, I want to start my Legend of Korra series and let you all in on more secrets ;) because . . . I don't even know I'm tearing up because how has this story gotten so far already? I mean, a SEQUEL! I didn't even dream about that when I was 9!

Thanks for sticking around.

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