Tanhaiyan-shraman version

By priyadarshini_198_

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mohhabat nazdeekeon se nahin tanhaiyon se badhti hai Tanhaiyan-a great love story portrayed amazingly by bar... More

Character Description {EDITED}
MEET SHRAVAN AND SUMAN [Chapter-1] {EDITED}
More of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
terrace romance [Chapter -2] {EDITED}
hospital rush [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
Flower of Love Blossoms [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
what's hidden [Chapter-3] {EDITED}
The garden surprise [chapter 3 contd.]
sometimes its good to fight [chapter-4]
suman's past story [chapter 4 contd.]
Shravan to rescue [chapter 4 contd.]
namik's question
new cover!!!
Misha-happening [chapter 5 contd.]
misha's unveiled [chapter 5 contd.]
Together Forever?? [Chapter---6]
MIS-UNDERSTANDINGS!! [CHAPTER 6 Contd.]
BREAKING DOWN!! [CHAPTER-6 Contd.]
IS THIS IT??! [Chapter 6 contd.]
THE UNKNOWN THREE MONTHS [CHAPTER 7]
DEV BANERJEE?? [Chapter 7 contd.]
RECONCILING!!! [Chapter 7 contd.]
FACE TO FACE [Chapter 7 contd.]
TUG OF WAR!💢! OR LOVE?♥? [Chapter 8]
REAL IDENTITY??[CHAPTER 8 CONTD.]
ENGAGEMENT [Chapter 8 contd.]
ESCAPING UDAIPUR [Chapter 8 Contd.]
OFF TO MUMBAI👋🏼 [Chapter 9]
Sweet Late Night Talks [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Pieces of evidence?-1 [Chapter 9 Contd.]
A Short Reunion [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Guess what!!!
dev in Mumbai? [Chapter 9 Contd.]
HELLO?! [Chapter 10]
Suman's wedding! [Chapter 10 contd.]
ARE WE BREAKING UP? [Chapter 10 contd.]
Giving up?! [chapter 10 contd.]
Re-kindling Relations [chapter 10 contd.]
Mehendi ceremony [Chapter 11]
Where's shanaya? [Chapter 11 contd.]
All well that ends well! [Chapter 11 contd.]
Happy Ending [Epilogue]

Is that a new danger??[chapter 5]

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Precap-aditya out of the house, shraman spent some quality time

Next morning

Shraman were sleeping in the penthouse.
Shravan got up first..

Shravan-good morning sumo💜

Sumo-hmm.....wapas so jao

Shravan-yaar yeh kya reply hota hai

Sumo-im sleepy Shravan😪😪

Shravan-acha......wait a min!!!

Shravan goes and brings a bucket of water

Shravan-sumo get up or else yeh tumhare muh pe hoga!!

Sumo-do whatever you want.....I am sleepy...So..DONT YOU DARE DISTURB😈😈😈😈😈

shravan-haww!!dekha sab ne yeh apne boyfriend parr kitna atyachar karti hai!itna atyachar toh woh atchyachari saas bhi apni maasum si bahu parr bhi nahin karti!yeh kaisa kalyug hai bhagwan?😱😱😱😱😱

Sumo-oye drama queen apni nautanki bandh karo!!!!!itni bakwaas sunke main so nahin sakti😴😴😴😴😴

Shravan-ab toh uth ja meri jaan!!!!!

Sumo-fine!!le uth gayi mere sweetheart!!and I hate you!💖

Shravan-i hate you too💖💖 ab chalo neeche sab dhoond rahe honge

Sumo-kitne baj rahe hai??

Shravan-8:45 sumo

Sumo-kya??

Shravan-kya hua??

Sumo-idiot 8 bajj gaye aur tum mujhe abhi bata rahe ho.....chalo jaldi

Shraman move down and sneaks into suman's room. Both of them get ready and come down

Preeti-sumo...yaar this is so not done

Sumo-kya hua?? what's not done???

Preeti-sumo you promised ki hum mehendi ke Baad haldi ke liye shopping jayenge!!and you ditched me!!!

Sumo-kya!!😅I ditched you

Preeti-and that too for Shravan!!!!!

Shravan-for me??I mean what???

Preeti-she ditched me for you👉

Sumo-shut up Preeti!! It's nothing like that Shravan!!!

Preeti-it is like that!!Shravan tumhe pata hai tum dono ke Milne se pehle yeh saara time mere saath bitati thi aur ab mujhe bhaw bhi nahin deti

Shravan-this is really not done sumo!!aww look at her! Ok let's do something

Preeti-kya??

Shravan-yes!!sumo ne tumhe meri wajah se ditch Kiya Na so today we will go shopping

Sumo-ditching me??

Shravan-of course.....

Preeti-not buddy!! So Shravan tum dono 5 min ruko main Abhi aayi

Sumo-hurry up

Shravan-chalo madam

Sumo-iski kya zaroo..

Shravan-zaroorat thi sumo.....after all wohh meri behen Jaisi hai and I can't hurt her!!

Sumo-i love you💖💖💖you know na??

Shravan-i do!! Ab chalein???

Sumo-chalo!!

Shraman with Preeti goes for shopping

Sumo-kahan se shuru karein?

Preeti-boys section!!

Shravan-kyun???

Preeti-tum logon ke liye.....

Shravan-designer ghar bhej dega! Aap dono apni jee bhar ke shopping karo I'm waiting outside

Sumo-stay here na.....agar Aditya phir se...

Shravan-sumo kuch nahin hoga...and Aditya is in jail..and moreover I'm here only

Sumo-please na shravan😥

Preeti-rukk jao shravan!!waise bhi bahar kya karoge??akele bore hone se acha hai ki humari hi help kardo

Shravan-fine......chalo fir shuru karein??

Sumo-haan shuru karte hain!!

They purchased clothes and jewelleries for the four of them and went home

Shravan-so ladies agar ijazat ho toh main chalun??

Sumo-kahan??

Shravan-woh.....sumo.....Preeti.....Preeti ke saath Jana hai woh car mein saman reh Gaya hai.....hum aate hain tum room mein jao

Sumo-jaldi aana

Shravan-haan baba abb jao bhi

Sumo-hmm

Preeti and Shravan comes to the lawn area

Shravan-tumne dekha na Preeti??

Preeti-kya Shravan??

Shravan-sumo kitni darri sehmi rehne lagi hai kal se!!

Preeti-woh toh hai.....parr Shravan we can't blame her right.....uske saath jo haadhsa hote hote reh gaya hum nahin expect kar sakte ki woh usey ek hi raat mein bhool jaaye

Shravan-tum sahi bol Rahi ho Preeti par agar woh aise Apne hi ghar mein apno ke beech bhi darti Rahi toh kaise chalega??

Preeti-time..Shravan...time is a great healer as well as corrector......bas sumo Ko thoda sa waqt de do she'll be alright and trust me.....tumhare jaise Pyaare se boyfriend Ko paakar uska waqt toh double speed mein Nikal jayega.....just remember usey kabhi bhi akelapan mehsoos mat hone Dena.....okay na??

Shravan-ill aur sumo ke liye toh Jaan bhi haazir hai waqt cheez hai!!!

Preeti-ab yeh kuch zyada nahin ho Gaya??

Shravan-haan na!!I was also wondering the same

Preeti-nautanki!!

They both laugh their hearts out and suddenly out of nowhere Pushkar popped in

Pushkar-yaar this is not done!!aap log mujhe bhool hi Gaye

Preeti-aur nahin toh kya??kuch sikho Shravan se haldi humari hai aur shopping mujhe woh Kara Raha hai!!!

Pushkar-arey Haan toh Maine hi bola tha na usey??!!!

Preeti-ab yeh mat bolna ki meri choices bhi tumhi ne uss dukaan mein rakh wayi thi!!

Pushkar-aur nahin toh kya??

Preeti-chalo andar bahar khade khade pitoge tum

Misha-hi guys!!

Shravan-misha tum?? Yahan kaise???

Pushkar-woh yeh aayi huyi thi yahan toh Maine invite kar diya isey

Misha-lagta mujhe dekh ke tumhe Khushi nahin huyi haina Shravan??

Shravan-nothing like that.....(his phone starts ringing).....guys yeh important call hai.....excuse me

Preeti-pushkar Hume introduce nahin karwaoge??

Pushkar-arey Haan yeh Misha hai!! Misha yeh Preeti hai,my to be wife

Misha-hi Preeti,

Preeti-hi Misha nice to meet you

Misha-waise mujhe yeh batao tumne iss Bandar mein Aisa kya dekh Liya??

Preeti-kya karein??tab mujhe koi aur Mila bhi toh nahin!!!

Pushkar-ohh toh I am adjust material ??

Sumo-pushkar,Preeti tum dono yahan kya.....I am sorry lagta hai maine disturb Kiya!!

Pushkar-yaar tu bilkul sahi waqt pe aayi hai.....Preeti Ko na ab mujhse pyaar nahin hai toh mere liye ek Biwi dhoond de Preeti namki hi please

Sumo-kya??

Preeti-pushkar ruko main batati hun tumhe.....nayi Biwi chahiye na ruko tum Abhi

Pushkar-yaar Preeti I was joking.....preeti.....gotta go guys woh naraz ho gayi

Pushkar rushes behind preeti leaving Suman and Misha alone.

Misha- hi I'm Misha

Sumo- nice to meet you I am Suman,waise tum kiske side se ho I mean....

Misha-dulhe ki dost

Suman-ohh so groom side!!

Misha-aur tum??

Sumo-preeti ki dost,waise tum Pushkar ke bachpan ki dost ho toh Shravan ki bhi dost huyi na

Misha-han woh aur main ek hi.....

Shravan-.....college mein padhte the

Sumo-shravan tum Kahan the??

Shravan-kyun kuch chahiye tha kya tumhe??

Sumo-woh Kartik bol Raha tha ki designer ne tum teeno Ko Bulaya hai fitting check karne ke liye so

Shravan-ahh sumo usey keh Dena main nahin aaunga

Sumo-kyun??

Shravan-mere sarr mein Dard hai so I'll take rest

Sumo-chalo andar main dawai de dungi

Shravan-haan chalo.....Misha tum bhi chalo na

Misha- nahin shravan woh mujhe kuch kaam tha toh main kal aaungi aaj bas Milne chali aayi thi

Shravan-ok bye

Misha-bye

Sumo-bye Misha

Misha-bye sumo

Misha leaves and shraman goes inside the house

**Misha-shravan tum mere touch karne pe chidhte the aur aaj woh Suman tumhe Sahara deke le jaa Rahi thi toh tumhe problem nahi huyi......aakhir chal kya Raha hai tum dono ke beech??...chahe jo bhi ho tum mere the aur Abhi bhi mere hi ho.....aur agar koi teesra humare beech aane ki koshish karega phir uski haalat bhi same hi hogi

***Shravan-misha wapas aagayi aur Apne saath woh saari kadwi yaadein bhi leke aayi hai.....uska maksad toh pata nahin parr uski wajah se sumo will not suffer like rehan. Main sumo Ko kuch hone hi nahin Dunga

To be continued............................................

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