(This isn't a continuation of the story, I know it sucks.)
Soo... I wanted to know how my writhing is and what I could do better. Since I am still in grammar school I don't expect my story's to be that good but I wanted to know..
-How you like the plot
-How good the writing is in your opinion
-What I could do better
Please comment your answers.
(Don't worry another chapter will be coming out)