So, after lots of rereading through the first few chapters of my story I realized that I had forgotten to write in what All for One was doing that would leave him vulnerable to be attacked. So, for any of you that noticed it I went back and fixed it.
Well I'm glad I'll be able to help," you said nervously. "So what exactly is the plan?"
"Well, exactly three months from today, we know that, All for One will be disembarking on a private ship to visit the island of Okino-Shima for some unknown business. There will be limited guard to keep everything hushed," Nighteye declared.
"So that's the perfect time to strike," All Might declared, "We'll take down All for One Once and for all." His normal smile was nowhere to be seen, instead his jaw was clenched, radiating a dull anger.
I also changed the timeline of three weeks to three months, as that seemed like a more reasonable amount of time, and also went back and changed it so the skin color of the main character was left blank so that the story was more inclusive! If I missed anything in my editing please let me know!
I still left her hair as white though, because I think that's cool and spooky!
Thanks! <3