SmackDown: Back to Our Roots

由 LayethTheSmackDown

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Our previous two SmackDowns were both massive successes, and it's high time for another. You might remember t... 更多

Back to Our Roots
Round 6: And So, It Begins - @painebook (WINNING STORY!)
Round 6: The Beginning Is the End - @Wuckster
Round 6: Array - @sacredlilac
Round 5: The Rise of the Fire Dragons - @jinnis
Round 5: There is No Air in Space - @painebook
Round 5: Albatross - @sacredlilac
Round 5: Endlessly Stretches the Nameless Sand - @Wuckster
Round 4: Carrot Pie - @jinnis
Round 4: Fitting Food - @sacredlilac
Round 4: Only a Northern Story - @Wuckster
Round 4: Bigger than Jesus - @painebook
Round 3: The Block - @Holly_Gonzalez
Round 3: Man Lost - @TEBramble
Round 3: Coffins Have No Place in Paradise - @WilliamJJackson
Round 3: The Old One Awakens - @CJG1988
Round 3: The Children of Tin Hinan - @jinnis
Round 3: Rite of Passage - @painebook
Round 3: Pirating Bilge Rats - @sacredlilac
Round 3: Field Day in Hell - @Wuckster
Round 2: Anger - @HardeeBurger
Round 2: The Man JC - @Holly_Gonzalez
Round 2: Martin Luther King Jr. - @TEBramble
Round 2: Glitch - @jinnis
Round 2: Following Orders - @Wolfwhistle
Round 2: The Gaul is Cast - @WilliamJJackson
Round 2: All One Thing - @CJG1988
Round 2: Fractured Curie - @sacredlilac
Round 2: The Rise of Caesarion - @Wuckster
Round 2: The Bard - @painebook
Round 1: Testimonial in Vintage Chrome - @WilliamJJackson
Round 1: Swarm - @Holly_Gonzalez
Round 1: We Are Many. We Are One - @CarolinaC
Round 1: Transciety - @HardeeBurger
Round 1: We Do Not Forget - @Wolfwhistle
Round 1: We Are Many - @TEBramble
Round 1: Rooted Dreams - @sacredlilac
Round 1: The Game - @CelestriaUniverse
Round 1: Lullaby - @jinnis
Round 1: Raindrops Rising - @minusfractions
Round 1: Clitter Clatter - @Sephuran
Round 1: We Are Many - @Wuckster
Round 1: Kalavathi Burns - @CJG1988
Round 1: Taken Aback - @painebook
Qualifying Entry - @Wuckster
Qualifying Entry - @CarolinaC
Qualifying Entry - @TEBramble
Qualifying Entry - @WilliamJJackson
Qualifying Entry - @trfoxtrot
Qualifying Entry - @CJG1988
Qualifying Entry - @SallyMason1
Qualifying Entry - @Sephuran
Qualifying Entry - @minusfractions
Qualifying Entry - @HardeeBurger
Qualifying Entry - @jinnis
Qualifying Entry - @painebook
Qualifying Entry - @sacredlilac
Qualifying Entry - @OutrageousOllo
Qualifying Entry - @Holly_Gonzalez
Qualifying Entry - @Wolfwhistle
Contestants/Judges
In-Depth Judging Criteria
Qualifying Round
Round 1: We Are Many
Round 1 Results
Round 2: The Second Coming
Round 2 Results
Round 3: The Merge
Round 4: Bigger than Jesus
Round 5: The Final Four
Round 5 Results
Round 6: The Final Round
Round 6 Results & The Sole SmackDowner is Revealed!

Qualifying Entry - @CelestriaUniverse

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由 LayethTheSmackDown


"Mr. Ronan. I didn't expect to see you again."

Mr Ronan's stood at the front desk with his hair long and knotted. His teeth looked like rotten fruit, and his eyes were red and raw. Standing in the lobby of MISS-STORY AR Games, his dishevelled, haunted appearance gave the receptionist the same feeling he got whenever he went home to his grotty apartment in Region 47; that even the exterminator wouldn't solve anything.

"I'll always return." His eyes stared past the receptionist, past the wall, to something only he could see. A slight smile graced his lips. "This is where I belong."

"Well then, what can I do for you?"

The young receptionist was a little worried. Mr Ronan didn't need to come back; he'd completed every game they offered.

"I'd like to play Captured in Transit please."

"Again, sir? You've been through every possible storyline, every possible weapon. You've explored..."

"I know what I've done. I played it. Just give me the pass and set it up for the beginning again."

The receptionist was flustered, but entered the commands anyway. He took a card from the rack beside him and slid it over the polished white desk. "There you are, Mr Ronan. Fifth booth on the left"

Mr Ronan nodded almost imperceptibly. He turned to head to the booths.

"Oh, um, Mr Ronan?" the receptionist called after him. "I just wondered, for the feedback forms. My boss loves hearing from the feedback forms. Since you're such a valued customer, our very best..."

You were a valued customer until you looked like you'd been left to rot outside for a month.

"...I just wondered, why do you want to play it again?"

Mr Ronan stopped and sighed. The card in his fingers trembled by his side. A single tear dropped and splattered on the floor. "She's so real."

"Excuse me, Mr Ronan? Can you repeat that?"

"Magistrate Captain Faye Lionne. She's so real. More real than real. I just want to... to hold her again. One more time."

He staggered through the doors. The receptionist frowned. Strange thing to say, but that's what he'd report. The boss would love it.

When they found Mr Ronan dead of a heart attack a few hours later, the receptionist remembered those words. 'One last time.'

"Tragic way to go," the boss said. "Clutching on to an imaginary woman. Still; at least we know she's lifelike." He turned the receptionist away, who couldn't stop staring at the hanging tongue and bulging eyes that were strangely relaxed and calm. "Come on, m'boy. Go tell Vivie up in Character Design what he said. She'll be delighted with such a glowing review." 

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