201 READS!!!
This makes soooo happy and it seems that just yesterday (more like three weeks ago) I was writing one for 100 reads!!!
My little pathetic heart is singing!
I love you all so much!
So... I feel like the story has slowed down a considerable amount. Instead of writing a couple of days into a chapter and I write a couple of hours. In one case it was more like ten minutes! Should the plot be moving faster or is the slowness okay?
And with that
I feel like I bombard you guys with new information every chapter....
BOOM - VIRGIL HAS A TWIN
BOOM- DECEIT ISN'T AS EVIL AS
WE THINK
BOOM- PATTON IS THEIR FATHER
BOOM- HIS BROTHER IS
DEPRESSION
Like.
BOOM BOOM BOOM ALL THE WAY HOME!
Do I need to add more backstory? Or maybe some more filler between information?
I like explaining how things look, like Roman's sword or the trait marking book. Is that okay or is that boring?
Does Logan being a college student make sense?
I need to write Logan's depression back in somehow....and LoganIsRelatable has given me a fantastic idea. (From your comment on the last chapter, if you're wondering.) Thank youuu!
If Patton and Virgil both love Logan, than that means a father and son duo loves Logan. Ew. O.o
But. Spoiler. That is gonna change, friends. Although it was implied in the story...
I have a new theory on trait age, btw.
Anyways, without further ado....
STORY FACTS
1. All of Logan's letters were written in cursive. Behold:
2. Logan signed the letters in specific ways. Even the characters don't currently understand their true meanings (or given much thought to them.)
3. Here's a list of current or possibly soon to be current characters and roles as of chapter 17:
Thomas (Sub)
Logan (Main)
Hawk (Sub) (....Yes. The dog is a Sub-
Main Character. He's
kind of important.)
Patton (Main)
Roman (Main)
Virgil (Main)
Deceit (Minor)
Depression (Minor)
Landon (Minor)
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4. Death! Yes.
5. It's obvious, Logan knew that this was a possibility from the moment Roman first slapped him.
One last thing.
Should I name the chapters instead of simply putting chapter numbers?
Thank you for reading, commenting, and voting! See y'all later!
♥️
~JessieBear020