A MISTAKE (RIKARA) (Complete)

By MickyMajhi

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bhavya... please broke your engagement... his brother is a bad man.. what happen didu... why u say like this... More

Nightmare (part 1)
Nightmare (part 2)
Engagement (part 1)
Engagement (part 2)
wow
rikara face up
the scary past(part 1)
the scary past (part 2)
thank you
arguments
dadi's shocking decision
dadi come up with proposal ...what is gauri's decision
Rikara in pain....rudra find a clue..
gauri's shocking decision
Rikara meeting...ruvya find something..
Rikara's engagement (part 1)
Rikara's engagement (part 2)
gauri's conditions..... ommkara in pain
mehndi....sangeet...rikara painful conversation.
mehndi....sangeet...rikara painful conversation(part2)
Marriage
Rikara in pain...meet ajaya...
the real truth (part 1)
the real truth (part 2) feelings
the real truth (part 3) that scary night
last part

pain....conversations....

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Scene 1

Rivya and ommru are shock...
Their parents stood at the entrance...

"Pa... Papa.. "

Gauri spoke in shock... Their parents stood there like rock...

Slowly tej come to ommru...
Ommru is afraid...

"O.... Oo... Omm... What..... What is bhavya said.... Is right? "

Tej ask in a shaking tone...
Omm gulp his saliva and look down...

"Omm... Answer me... Did.... Did u do that with gauri... "

Now tej said in anger... He skip that word rape... he is in fear... If his son actually  did it...

Omm still look down...

"I said answer me omm.. "

Tej held omm's collar and ask...

Rekha and shankar is still shock...
Rivya stood at their places... Rudy is also silent...

"Tell me damn it"

Janhvi ran to tej and try to free omm from his hold.. Omm still look down...

"Tej... Leave omm please "

Tej leave him but still angry...

Janhvi cup omm's face with teary eyes... She is not believe that her son did something wrong... He is the best son in the world for her...

"Omm... Beta.... Please say... It's not true right... I.... I know my omm... He didn't do anything like this... Please tell me that it's not true"

Janhvi ask omm in a crying tone... But omm is silent...

"Mom... Mom please calm down"

Rudy try to calm janhvi... But..

"No... Omm speak up please"

Janhvi shout...

"Yes... Yes I rape her... Yes... I am a criminal"

Saying this omm Cover his face and crying...

Tejvi and gauri parents are stunned... They feel like a bomb blast on their head... Tejvi not believe it...
Rekha and shankar couldn't digest it...

Bhavya hold gauri hand tight... Gauri is weeping...

Tej greeted his teath and slap omm hard... All are shock ....omm close his eyes.. Tej could not believe... He is deeply hurt... His son... Who is his proud... He is a criminal... He destroy a girl's life...

"How could you do this... Don't you have shame... Did we teach u like this... "

Tej said in hurt... Janhvi is crying... Rudy hold her and try to console... Rudy can't say anything to tej because his anger is right...

Rekha come and hug gauri... Gauri and bhavya is crying badly...

"How could you do this omm"

Janhvi said while crying...

*thud*

All listen a sound and see towards the door...

"Papa..... "

Rivya shout...

"Shankar"

Rekha ran...

Shankar fall on floor to hold his chest... Screaming in pain..

Tejvi and ommru also ran while shout...
All are worried...

"May be he had an heart attack "

Tej said in worry...

"Driver... "

Rudy shout and all take shankar to the hospital...

Scene 2

At hospital...
It's evening now...

All are stood outside of the room...

Rivya and rekha is crying while tejvi and rudy try to console them...

Omm stood little far from them and watch them with tear in his eyes...

He is responsible for all this...

After half an hour... Doctor come out...
All rushed towards him.. Omm also but stood at little far..

"He is fine now... But.. Please be careful... It's the second attack... Try to make him happy always... Little bit stress is dangerous for him"

Doctor said... All are little bit relief...

"Doctor can we meet him"

Rekha ask...

"No... He is sleeping... U meet him after half an hour"

Doctor said and go... All are little calm..

"Bring this medicine please"

Nurse said while handle the prescription...

"I will bring it"

Rudy said and about to take that prescription... But bhavya snatch it..

"No need... I m able to take care of my family..."

Bhavya said in anger and hurt... Rudy hurt to listen this...

"It's also my family bhavya"

Rudy said but bhavya ignore and go to buy the medicine... Rudy follow her..

Scene 3

At the medicine store...

Bhavya buy medicines and about to go but someone hold her hand...
She turn and see rudy...

"Leave my hand"

"Bhavya please listen to me once"

Rudra pleaded...

"I don't want to listen a cheater....who support a criminal"

Bhavya said in a crying tone... It's hurt rudy...

It's all notice by omm.. He feel bad for his brother... He sigh and go inside the hospital...

"I know bhavya.. U hurt... But listen once... I feel something is wrong... What is happen between di and bhai... There is something flashy.... "

Bhavya sadly smile to listen rudy...

"U still try to protect your brother"

" No bhavya... Listen... Tell me what gauri di said to you about that incident"

Rudy ask...

"Why... M not telling anything...u r nothing for me"

Bhavya say in anger...

"Fine... M nothing for u... But once we are friends right... For shake for our friendship please tell me"

Rudy said in anger...

Bhavya see him in shock and confusion for sometimes...

"Fine... Then listen"

Bhavya said everything what gauri told her... After listen this rudy is in confusion...

"Now... U know... How your brother destroy my family... "

Bhavya go from there but rudy still stood there in thoughts..

Scene 4

Inside the hospital...

Janhvi sit with rekha... Tej is busy with doctor in discussion...

Omm come there but not found gauri... Tejvi see him but ignore... He hurt to see his parents ignorance.... but.... he deserve it...

He search for her and found her sit on floor... Little far from them... In front of shiva parvati idol.. Teary eyes...

His heart ache to see her conditions.. She is broken... Hopeless... Hurt...and The reason is he... He is guilty... But he also had feeling for her since 6 year...

He wipe his tear and slowly go towards her... He gulp... He had no courage to face her.. But... He have to do it for his brother.. He already destroy her life... And now he can't afford to be the reason of destruction of more two life...

He stood near her... Her back face him.. She still staring the idol.. Lost..

"Ga... Gauri"

He call her with shaking tone.. Gauri come out of her thoughts... She wipe her tears.... stood and turn...

But she is scared to see him... That man who is responsible for all this.. The scream... The pain... The disguest feeling again come to her... His gaze on her feel her so dirty... That night again come to her mind...

She quickly turn...her back facing him...

"Gauri... Please listen to me once"

Omm pleaded....
Gauri quickly cup her ears with her palm... His voice is like a horrible loud sound for her... Now she is weeping...

Omm know she don't want to talk with him. .but he have to...

Gauri about to go from there...

"Gauri please... Not for me... Not for my family... At least for your sister.. Please"

Gauri stop in her path... But not turn and not say a word...
Omm know she can't say anything..
So he start....

"I know... I.... I have no rights to say anything... I know u do not trust in my words... And m not here to ask your forgiveness... Because I know m not deserve it... M here for my brother and your sister"

Gauri listen him silently...

"What I had done with u... It's all my fault... Please believe me my brother is not like me... He is innocent... He didn't know about it... Please don't misunderstood him... He is a good man... He loves bhavya wholeheartedly....... "

"Who knows... That he love bhavya truly... After all he is your brother... Who didn't think once to play with someone feelings and life"

For the first time gauri answer him... Yes... She is scared to him... But... Now she decided to face her fear... To face everything... And not to be a loser...

Omm is hurt to her words... But she is right...

"I know... U wouldn't believe... But please at least think about bhavya.. Just because of me... Please don't separate them..they love each other... M ready to do anything for this... I.... I surrender myself to police and accept my crime... If... If u want then I will go from their life forever... But please... Don't do it"

Omm said it with join hands and pleaded tone..


But gauri not turn to him... She had courage but still afraid to face him...
She know bhavya love rudy so much.. But she can't ignore the truth that he is ommkara's brother who is a monster... If in future... Rudy is also like him... Then...

She not reply anything and go from there... Omm still stood there.. Hurt...

So finally gauri had courage to face her fear... But... Can she think about ruvya...can omm success to convince her about rudy... And waht is the reaction of shankar after he woke up... Can he support gauri or think about the society... And what is rudy thought after listened bhavya... Did really something was wrong there.... And can bhavya listen him... Let's see...

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