From an Editor: Common Writin...

By StephiCham

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As a content and copy editor, I see mistakes that many writers make. I've compiled these into some quick tips... More

Where the book begins
General World-building
Adverbs and nonverbal language
What the narrator knows
Common grammatical mistakes
When everyone but the reader knows
Character development
Writing realistic dialogue
Query letters and pitches
Following characters' leads
Creating unique, believable characters
When to show and tell
Filling in the spaces of your novel
Building and defying expectations
Pacing
Finding and exploring your writing voice
World-building descriptions
World-building: Economy

Using tags and beats

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By StephiCham

Tags, or attribution tags, identify the speaker of a quote.

A common problem among writers: overusing tags.

Here's an example of overusing them:
"How are you today?" asked Simon.
"I'm okay," muttered Mark.
"Just okay?" questioned Simon.
"Yeah," replied Mark.

Tags don't have to go with every phrase, especially in dialogue between two characters. Use them effectively, and your story will flow much better.

See this:
"I was thinking of you," John whispered to Elle.
"Why?"
"It just seemed like something you'd like."

Even without tags for the last two, it's clear who's speaking.

On a similar note, people often under-use beats. Most communication happens nonverbally, and you should show that in conversations.

Check out the difference between these:
Example 1:
"I'm not scared," she said.
Example 2:
She raised her chin and looked him in the eye. "I'm not scared."

One tells you what's being said; one gives you insight into the scene and the character's attitude.

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