All Short-Story scores are here! Let's see the winners:
Group 1
Judge: broilet
Participants: lepus_leporis ; Sim-AntinI ; krismcase ; Yashhal ; Mickey1763 ; Belle_Dowson ; sscott8 ; I-Am-You ; DanielleRGraham ; luciferspinkwings
🏆 Winners:
The winners of the 2nd Edition are..
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FIRST PLACE (Genre Winner)
🥇Don't Break by DanielleRGraham - Total: 93/100 🥇
Score:
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Summary: 5/5
Grammatical/spelling/punctuation: 9/10
Page arrangement:10/10
Originality: 9/10
Interest: 9/10
Mc develop: 10/10
Sc develop: 8/10
Reality check: 5/5
Plot devopement: 18/20
Review: So after reading through all of your book I've come to a conclusion: this book was epic, and very well thought out. It's one of those books on Wattpad that most people won't take a second look at, since they want their cliche happily ever afters, but in real life they may have a big shot at becoming something. The characters weren't all complete clones of each other (like in most stories ) and it was a nice ending, finishing off where it started in a way, so congratulations for writing such an interesting and coming of age shot story.
SECOND PLACE (Runner-Up)
🥈Divided by sscott8 - Total: 92/100🥈
Score:
Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Summary: 5/5
Grammatical/spelling/punctuation: 10/10
Page arrangement:10/10
Originality: 10/10
Interest: 4/10
Mc develop: 10/10
Sc develop: 10/10
Reality check: 5/5
Plot devopement: 19/20
Review: Wow, your story certainly was the black sheep of all the stories I had to judge. This is probably the most real story I've ever read, and I'm pretty sure you could have a career in writing with that kind of skill. Your authors notes were a little unprofessional so it made the story seem a little less serious and scary (I honestly don't know if I should be halp about that or not) but apart from that, great story. I especially liked the last sentence of the story.
Group 2
Judge: GinniKaur4
Participants: Fifty_One ; izatemia ; Sunohn ; Potatowalker ; xkalopsia ; Ztomaaaa ; AB_underhill ; StephRose1201 ; ReynaSeaFlame ; OlgaPinsky ;
🏆 Winners:
The winners of the 2nd Edition are..
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*Clouds rule*
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FIRST PLACE (Genre Winner)
We have another tie!
🥇Two sentence horror story by AB_underhill - Total: 96/100 🥇
Score:
title:5
cover:3
summary:5
grammar:9
page:9
originality:9
interest:9
main character:9
side character:9
countinuity:9
plot:20
Review: A very good book for short horror stories and people who crave horror. I am not a fan of horror, but yeah I still liked it and am seriously going to sleep with my parents today. I think that you should make your cover more atractive and should promote your book as well as write some long horror stories too, people will love them. WELL done.
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🥇The golden flower by StephRose1201 - Total: 96/100🥇
Score:
title:4
cover:5
summary:5
grammar:10
page:10
originality:8
interest:10
main character:10
side character:10
countinuity:5
plot:19
Review: I LOVED IT!!!! A truly beautiful story. A cliche one, but still it is very entertaining and interesting. I really liked it and that's all. WELL DONE GIRL!!!
SECOND PLACE (Runner-Up)
🥈Despair by ReynaSeaFlame - Total: 93/100🥈
Score:
title:5
cover:5
summary:5
grammar:10
page:10
originality:7
interest:8
main character:9
side character:9
continuity:5
plot:20
Review: I liked the book and the stories are really intriguing. This book is best for the readers who crave thriller, mystery, horror and all in all, dark stories. It is well written. I think they are original, and if all of them are original, then mate you have got a really dark sense and you should get this book publish as a paper book. Well done!
Group 3
Judge: Bibliophile005
Participants: r meialle ; Owls1221 ; DeliaMaguire6 ; allisbright29 ; TheTigerWriter ; Soham11 ; ChildOfAthenaX ; BEHaynes ; LightningVibe-Satyr- ; Tristian-Godswill
🏆 Winners:
The winners of the 2nd Edition are..
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*Clouds rule*
*Cinnamon rolls*
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FIRST PLACE (Genre Winner)
🥇I Killed David by ChildOfAthenaX - Total: 98.5/100🥇
Score:
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Summary: 5/5
It's length is short but it provides just enough information. You could try adding some dialogue from your book to make it more interesting.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation Precision: 10/10
Page Arrangement & Aesthetics: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Interest: 9.5/10
The fact that you started the story with a mysterious note made it really interesting. Your way of writing was very good. Your main character is also intriguing. Your story was original and had no cliché in it, a thing that I loved.
Main Character Development & Interaction: 10/10
Side Character Development & Interaction: 10/10
Continuity: 5/5
Plot Development: 20/20
Review: Your story is one of the best short stories I've read so far. It's emotional and has an aura of mystery. Your way of writing makes it easy to read and would help you get more readers. The grammar and punctuation was correct and the tense was also consistent. Your main character sounds like a determined person and is deeply saddened by her brother's death. The chapter length is also appropriate. Overall, you've done a pretty good job.
SECOND PLACE (Runner-Up)
🥈 Birdie Walker and the First Kiss Thief by BEHaynes - Total: 97/100🥈
Score:
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Summary: 5/5
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation Precision: 10/10
Page Arrangement and Aesthetics: 10/10
Originality: 7/10
Interest: 10/10
Main Character Development & Interaction: 10/10
Side Character Development & Interaction: 10/10
Continuity: 5/5
Plot Development: 20/20
Review: I love the character of Birdie. She is sweet and cute and has self respect. TJ is the typical bad boy who becomes thoughtful. I can't deny that his character is clichéd but the way the story develops makes up for the cliché. The story is sweet and cute. You made the starting and ending line match which was an awesome thing. I enjoyed reading your story a lot. Good job!
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