WOCA 1st Edition - Chapters 1-18
WOCA 2nd Edition - Chapters 19 - 37
WOCA 3rd Edition - Chapters 38 - 54
☆ Here, all the winners and judges of the World of Champions Awards will be listed, from the first place to third and for the special Categories...
🥇The different shades of life by mahira_gazal- Total: 81/100🥇
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Score:
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Summary: 3/5
Grammar: 8/10
Aesthetics: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Interest: 8/10
Main Character: 9/10
Side Character: 8/10
Continuity: 4/5
Plot: 17/20
Review: I really liked the story. A bit of editing is required. But the story kind of took a long while to get started. In the first few chapters, try to give a glimpse of what was to come; try hinting at the future, it will keep the readers on the edge of their seats.
SECOND PLACE (Runner-Up)
🥈Petals of a flower by queenfauzy - Total: 71/100🥈
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Score:
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Summary: 4/5
Grammar: 6/10
Aesthetics: 7/10
Originality: 8/10
Interest: 8/10
Main Character: 6/10
Side Character: 5/10
Continuity: 3/5
Plot: 15/20
Review: First of all, I'd advise editing the book since there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I really like the plot. There are some instances of discontinuity but that is mostly because of lack of editing. One major mistake is that you are telling, not showing. The characters are not able to connect with the story. I'd advise reading other books (ones that you are absolutely sure you can use as reference) to see how they're being written and try to incorporate their tricks in your book. Event description has a lot of scope for improvement; again, this is a problem of show vs. tell.
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