Haunted Palace & Police Offic...

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A task force comprising Avneil, Swasan, and Abhiya, distinguished police officers, embark on a challenging mi... More

Introduction
Part 1: BUILD STRONG TEAM
PART 2: BOYS &GIRLS OPINION
PART 3: FAMILY PLANNING
PART4: GHOST WARNING
MAHINDRA MEMBERS
PART 6:MYSTERY START👣
PART 7: LOVE OF AVNEIL
Ranking
PART 8:SUICIDE OR MURDER💀?
watty 2019 award
New story
Mynew Manan story
My New Lazada Shop

PART5:MR.PATEL'house &KISS

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Investigative Night

The team, still reeling from the shocking incident with the ghostly warning, decided to explore the surroundings. Neil and Sanskar took the lead in analyzing the area, trying to find any traces of human activity. Abhay, ever ready with his camera, began capturing every detail of the scene.

Avni, equipped with forensic tools, carefully collected fingerprints from the car's screen. Meanwhile, Piya and Swara, armed with a night camera, scanned the surroundings for any signs of life. The night camera, sensitive to human body temperature, displayed an empty scene, leaving the team perplexed.

After half an hour of investigation, the team regrouped at the car, sharing their findings.

Neil: "Did you find anything?"

Swara: "No Neil. There was no trace of human activity. We even checked for any human body temperature using the night camera, but the results were negative."

Abhay: "From this warning note, we can conclude that the murders here are based on revenge. Piya, please spare me the talk about ghosts and all."

Piya: "No, I didn't imply that. I was thinking that maybe someone with knowledge of IT, related to Princess Maithili and Ali's case, created this 3D animation. And Abhay, just because I research ghost stories doesn't mean I believe in them. Understand?" (Abhay was left speechless.)

Avni: "Guys, I've collected fingerprints from the screen. To identify whose fingerprints they are, we need to compare them with others. I suggest we go to the old Mahindra place tomorrow to investigate further. Are we all in agreement?" The team concurred, and the car set its course to enter the Mahindra Kingdom.

In just 20 minutes, they arrived at Mr. Patel's old house, greeted by villagers with flower garlands and smiles. The team, now in character, experienced a humorous twist when a girl confronted Neil.

Girl (G): "Neil, by the heavens, you married her? You promised me you'd marry me!" She dramatically adds a touch of almost-crying tone, causing Avneil and the rest of the team to be utterly shocked.

Others compose themselves, attempting to suppress laughter, while Abhay takes this golden opportunity to tease Neil. He gives Neil a sly look and points at Avni, who responds with a glare that could rival a tiger's.

Neil (N): "Sorry, but you see, Avni is like the Love Guru 2.0, teaching me the real deal. And, to top it off, our parents were the ultimate besties who dreamt of a grand wedding for us. Can't go against that movie plot, right? So, here I am, just following the script they wrote. Forgive me?" Neil adds a fake guilty expression to his dialogue, creating a hilarious scene.

The girl, not entirely convinced, decides to accept Neil's Bollywood-esque explanation. She gives him a cheek kiss, gracefully exits the scene, and shoots an exaggerated angry glare at Avni.

Neil (in hushed tones to Abhay): "Well, I guess that's the price you pay for being a rom-com hero. But hey, at least I got a cheek kiss out of it."

After sending everyone out, the team, now recovering from the unexpected rom-com twist, enters the mansion with the ever-unfazed servant leading the way.

Servant (See): "Chote bhaishab (little master), Swara baby's room is on the left side of the stairs. Abhay sir's room is on the right side of the stairs. Your room is on the left side below the right side. It's like navigating through a treasure hunt, isn't it? Oh, and by the way, dinner is served in the dining room. We've got a whole feast ready. Tomorrow, my wife and I will join you at the bright and early hour of 8:00 am to start our adventure. We'll wrap it up by 8 pm, sir. Here's my number; call me if you need anything. Now, enjoy your comedy of errors, I mean, stay!"

The team, now in high spirits and thoroughly entertained by the unintentional humor, bursts into laughter.

Avni (with a mischievous grin): "Well, well, Neil, looks like you're starring in your own rom-com. You're the hero caught between two worlds, and I'm the misunderstood heroine. Our supporting cast includes the love-stricken girl, the dramatic exit, and a servant who thinks he's in a comedy movie. I wonder what happens in the next episode!"

The team, now in stitches, decides to explore the mansion, wondering what other comedic surprises awaited them in this mysterious Mahindra Kingdom.

All: yes, we agree. We also coming with u.

Living room


Kitchen

Dinning room

Study room

Gaming room

Bathroom

Avneil room

Swasan room

Abhiya room

Guest room

As the team settles into their assigned rooms, Abhay raises the critical question of room arrangements.

Abhay (Ab): "Alright, guys, let's discuss the elephant in the room, or should I say, the elephant in the bedroom. Who's staying where? We've got my room, Swara's room, and Neil's room all ready to roll. We're playing happy families for the villagers, so let's avoid any nighttime sitcom misunderstandings."

Swara, already engrossed in devouring her dinner, doesn't seem bothered by the impending room-sharing discussion.

Swara (SW): "I don't mind rooming with Sanskar, but let him know if he crosses any lines, his junior will be on the chopping block. I'm issuing a preemptive warning. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a date with this plate."

Abhay, looking around at the rest of the team, decides to open the floor for opinions.

Abhay (Ab): "So, what about the rest of you? Sanskar, Neil, Avni, and Piya, spill your thoughts. We're a family now, whether we like it or not."

Neil (N): "I'm cool with whatever." He says with a scared face, possibly reflecting on the recent girl encounter.

Avni (Av): She replies with an angry glare, making her stance clear.

Sanskar (Sa): "I'm happy to share a room with Swara, but I'm also a bit terrified after her warning."

Piya (P): "Abhay, no issues from my side, but I do tend to kick in my sleep. Can you handle that?"

Abhay (Ab): "Alright, but no ninja kicks, please. I'm not married yet."

With room arrangements sorted out, the team heads to the dining room, only to find Swara immersed in a feast.

Abhay (Ab): "LIONESS, save some for the rest of us!"

Neil (N): "How are you so slim when you eat like you've been stranded for ten days?"

Swara (SW): "DEVIL, I eat fast and get angry when I'm hungry. Don't disturb me, or you might become prey for my gun. Go get your food."

The team, used to Swara's eating habits, complies with her wishes.

Abhay (Ab): "Okay, I surrender. Sanskar, be prepared."

Neil (N): "Sanskar, better start working overtime to afford her food."

After dinner, the team heads to their rooms. In the Avneil room, Neil attempts to explain himself, but Avni shuts him down with her straightforward style.

Neil (N): "Avni, you sleep on the left side of the bed."

Avni (Av): "Okay."

As Neil tries to apologize, Avni dismisses him.

Neil (N): "Avni, it's not my fault. Please don't be angry. I didn't expect she would kiss me."

Avni (Av): "Mr. Neil Khanna, did I ask you? No, right? So shut your mouth and go to sleep. Who am I to forgive you, and why are you asking for my forgiveness?"

Neil, with a touch of anger in his tone, asserts his feelings, but Avni remains unperturbed, turning her back to him to conclude the night.


As the night deepens and the Mahindra Kingdom envelops itself in an eerie silence, Avni and Neil find their thoughts intertwining in the realm of dreams.

Avni's Thoughts:

Avni, lying on her side of the bed, stares into the darkness. Despite her apparent annoyance, her mind betrays the facade. Images of Neil, his charming smile, and the countless moments they've shared flash through her mind. The way he handled the unexpected encounter earlier in the evening plays like a replay button in her thoughts. A hint of a smile plays on her lips as she secretly appreciates his efforts to make amends. Deep down, amidst the irritation, there's a fondness that she finds hard to ignore.

Neil's Thoughts:

Neil, on his side of the bed, gazes into the shadows cast by the dim moonlight filtering through the window. The stern expression on Avni's face during their room confrontation replays in his mind. Yet, the memory doesn't overshadow the countless times she's been his pillar of strength. He recalls her unwavering support during challenging cases, the way she smiles when they celebrate victories, and the comfort he finds in her presence. Despite the seemingly cold exterior, he senses the warmth that she holds within.

As both Avni and Neil drift into the realm of dreams, their thoughts weave a tapestry of shared memories and unspoken emotions, creating an intricate connection that transcends the complexities of the waking world.

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Stay tuned for the thrilling continuation of the Mahindra Kingdom saga! As the team grapples with new challenges and uncovers more mysteries, the story promises to take unexpected turns, revealing the secrets that have haunted the kingdom for years. Abhay's condition, Piya's nerves, the discovery of the deceased woman, and Avneil's first flashback are just the beginning of the gripping tale that awaits. Join us for the next installment as the team delves deeper into the heart of the Mahindra Kingdom, where every revelation brings them closer to the truth.

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