SOCHA NA THAA

By abhivanya

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A plot from my crazy mind.What if swayam fall for someone else.someone who is sweet and cute.sorry swaron fan... More

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By abhivanya


S was descending the stairs.

S: Mujhe zabardasti nikal diya,kya hota agar mein bhi dekhta toh film.

S sits inside the car

S:Acha hua hema hein un dono ke saath varna mein toh dar gaya tha

S stops realizing

S:Yeh meine kya kiya

S remembers being angry at P and R

S:Mujhe kyun itna gussa aaya ki vo dono saath hein, kuch teek nahi ho raha hein,ho kya gaya mujhe, pragya ke baare mein itna fikar kyun karta hoon,yeh mein kya kar raha hoon vahan Sharon mera intezar kar rahi hein aur mein yahan pragya ke paas. Nahi nahi I should focus on Sharon,Sharon is my girl friend,haan pragya is a friend. So keep distance from pragya

It rains

P:Mein kapde leke aati hoon

P goes to balcony and see S sitting in the car thinking

P:Hey ganeshji yeh ab tak nahi gaye,gaadi kharab hue kya

S looks and see P

P actions what

S blinks saying nothing

P shook her head and actions to go

S smiles

P raise her eyebrow and action go.

S nods.S gets a call.S see its Sharon,S come back to sense

S:Phir se pragya ke chakkar mein lag gaye

S takes the phone

S:Haan Sharon I m on the way

S little upset drives and think about his behavior to pragya and rey after sharon's confession.

S:Rey ko bura laga hoga na I scolded him,shayad do din pragya se nahi milege toh teek ho jaunga mein

S reaches the club ,dance and enjoy with all.

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R:Acha mein chalta hoon

P:Bye

R:So eager to send me

P smiles

R:Acha hema kal mere ghar treat

H:Haan

P:Treat kyun

R:Arre humare mission d3 success party, hema ke bina kaise hoge isliye toh itne din nahi kiya

H:Haan krithika darshan sabko mil bhi loonga mein

R:Haan shivam ko bhi bulayenge

P:Kya shivam, bilkul nahi

H:Arre par kyun bechara help kiya na toh banta hein

P:Kya banta hein, bahut risky hein agar koi aa gaya toh

R:Kaun

P:Aapke dost, specially vo,pata nahi jahan hum shivam se milenge vahan tapak padte hein mera mann keh raha hein

H:Tum aur tumhara mann, chup raho tum, rey tum shivam ko bulao, aur krithika darshan ko mat batana mein aayi hoon, surprise karenge

P:arre mere baat suno

R;Relax pragya, kal simmi rinni sab film dekhne jaa rahe hein, swayam aur Sharon lunch out, so koi nahi aayega khush

P:Agar gadbad hua toh mein kuch nahi karne vali pehle se bata raha hoon

R:Ok

R goes after sometime,Megha didi comes and pragya introduce her to hema.P H goes to sleep

H:Arre simmi rinni nahi aayi

P:Vo shayad Sharon ke vahan soyenge tum so jaao

P H lying on the bed

H:Prayu

P:Hmm

H:Ab toh bata de kya hua chacha ke aane ke baad

P:Mujhe pata tha tum yeh jaane keliye yhan aayi ho

H:Toh batao

P:Vo chachi ne maa se shaadi ke baat ki

H:Kya tumne nahi bataya nahi aunty se

P:Mein batane vale the par

H:Kya kaha chachi ne

P:chachi ne kaha itne saal vo sab milke dadimaa ke khayal rakha aur lagta hein vo sab daulat humein dege aise kuch

H:Kya?Aise kaise keh sakte hein vo,thank God aunty ne vahan rehna mana kiya,

P sighs

P:ab maa keh rahi hein ranveer bhaiya ke shaadi keliye jaane ke zarurat nahi hein

H:Haan

P:Kya haan ab dadimaa ko mein kya bolun

H:Bol jo tere chachi ne bola

P:Arre aur problem hoga

H:Haan toh hoga

P sighs:maa mujhse bahut naaraz the aur yeh sab mein isliye

P closes her eyes

P:Unhe bhi pata nahi kya kya kaha gusse mein

H:Unhe? Usse yaad aaya tumhara vo itne hyper kyun the

P:Hyper? Pata nahi, shayad Rey nahi gaya na party isliye, bahut possessive hein dost ko leke , kaise gussa hua na,

H thinking

H:Possessive toh hein (par kis dost keliye vo nahi pata)

P:Chalo so jaao

H:Hmmm

Next day

H P reach R's home

R:Aa gaye tum log

H:Haan

H gives a cover to R

R:Yeh kya hein

H:Kisike bhi ghar khaali haat nahi jaate na isliye

R:Kya hein iss mein

H:Khud hi dekhiye

P controls her smile.R sees it and frowns

R opens the cover.It was egg

R look wide eye at eggs and H.P laughs

R:Yeh gift?

H:Aap toh body builder hein toh kaam aayege na

R shook his head

They come in.

P:Acha krithu aur darshan ko bataya hema aayi hein

R:Nahi un logon ko nahi pata

P:Hmm

R:U guys sit

H:Acha ghar hein aapka

R:Thanks

P:Toh lunch mein kya hein

R:Jo bhi tum banao

P:Kya

R:Haan hum log saath milke banake khayege bahut maza aayega

P:Kanjooz makhichooz,bahar se khareed nahi sakte, humse kaam karva rahe ho ghar bulake

H:Arre vo teek hi toh kehta hein maza aayega, chalo na

They go to kitchen, P looks for ingredients.

Just then door bell rings

R:Krithika and darshan hoge

H smiles naughtily

H:I have a plan

H tells to P R

P:Arre nahi

R:Wow maza aayega

H:Chalo

R opens the door

D K comes in and see P.

P smiles

D:tum kuch surprise ke baare mein keh rahe the na

R:Haan khaas kar ke tumhare liye

D:For me?

H comes from a room

H:Darshu baby kitne saal hue, ohh I missed u

D look wide eye at H. K too looks at H and then D.

H goes beside D and take his hand in hers.D looks at K nervously.K give angry glare

H:Aise kyun khade ho jaise pehli baar dekh rahe hein mujhe.

D:Haan mein apko pehli baar hi dekh raha hoon kaun ho aap

H faking shock

H:Tum mujhe nahi pehchane, hey bhagvaan kaisa din aa gaya.2 saal tumse dur kya ho gaya apne ex girlfriend ko bhool gaya

K:What?Ex girl friend

D:Arre ka kaunsi ex girl friend

H:Kaunsi? (gasp) huuuh Matlab apko aur kai girl friends the?

D look wide eye at the interpretation and at K.

D:Nahi mera koi ex girl friend nahi hein apko koi galat feimi hui hogi

R:Par vo toh tumhare saare baatein jaante hein

K look suspiciously at H

H:Ohh tum apne girl friend ke saamne admit karne se darte ho, ok fine

D:Krithu mein usse nahi jaante

K:Jhoot mat bol,tu janta hein na I hate lies

D: Nahi krithu sachi

K goes near H

K:Tu aise kaise usse pehchane se inkaar kar sakta hein

H P R get tensed seeing K's anger

P: (kuch zyada hua kya)

K:Arre how can u not recognize

K pulling H ear

K:Hema

D:Hema? U mean pragya ke

H:Waah partner jaldi pehchan liya

K:Apne partner ko kaise nahi pehchante

K hugs H.

D: Dara diya tumne mujhe dis is not fair yaar, aur pragya tum bhi iske saath mile hue the, ek pal mein heart beat ruka tha

They all laugh,H hold her ears

H:Sorry

H shake hand with D

K:what a surprise, achanak yahan kaise

All move to kitchen

H:Bas sabko dekhne ka mann kiya toh

K:Tum yahan pr bhi in kitchen?

P:Sirf mein nahi hum sab, 6 log keliye khaana banana hein

K:6?

R:Haan shivam bhi aayega

D:Shivam

R:Mission d3 ke success party hein toh banta hein

H:Lekin mere liye toh d2 ke success hein

K:Mereliye bhi

P:Tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta

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S:Aaj kuch problem nahi hein, dekha no thinking of pragya no confusion haan, Sharon ke saath bahar jayege toh teek ho jaunga

Sh calls S

S:Haan Sharon I m ready

Sh:Sorry swayam aaj hum nahi jaa payege vo kya hein na mujhe kuch kaam tha karne keliye mom ne diya so, I m sorry

S:Acha its ok , we will go someother time

Sh:Thanks

Sh cut the call

S:Arre yeh kya hua yaar

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R:Acha tum log yahi raho mein nahake aata hoon

H:Tum abhi nahane jaa rahe ho, kya hein yaar.

P:Bahut chaalak hein yeh, isliye ab nahane jaa rahe hein taaki kaam nahi karna pade

R:Whatever

R goes

K:Acha koi gaana lagan a yaar.

Just then bell rings

H opens the door.

H:Arre itne late kyun ho gaye aap, sab aa gaye

Shi:I m sorry

H:Its ok anthar aake maafi mangiye

H turnd to go

Shi:Mein isliye sorry nahi maanga

H:Phir

Shi:I don't know u toh

H:Anthar toh aayiye shivamji

Shi:Shivamji? I don't need itni respect

H:tankh kheech rahi thi aayiye

Shi comes in frowning

K D P sees him and calls him to kitchen

P:Aa gaye aap, aaj bhi church gaye kya late hua

Shi:Nahi vo kuch kaam that oh

P:Hmm

Shi:Tum log cook kar rahe ho Rey kahan hein

P:Nahane gaye hein

Shi:Ohhh

H comes and shows knife at Shi,Shi get afraid and moves back

Shi:Oh my God what the hell are you doing

H:Chaaku de rahi hoon

Shi:Kyun

H:Arre sabji kaatne

Shi:Mein kyun kaatun

H:Toh hum log kaam karenge toh aap bhi kaam karenge na

Shi:Yeh kaisa rule hein

H:Yeh rule nahi manners hein

Shi:Manners?

H:Haan

Shi:Pehle yeh batao tum ho kaun,yun aake aise chaaku donge toh kya samjhun mein

H: Aap dar gaye kya,chaaku dekhe dar gaye

H giggles

K D P look at both

Shi:Excuse me, mein nahi dari ok, vo toh bas mein

H:Thodi khabra gayi

Shi:Haan, nahi mera matlab, God ho kaun tum

H: Bhagvan se kya pooch rahe ho mujhse pooch mein kaun hoon

Shi:Kitne baar pochun , tum jawab nahi diya na

H:Toh kya bhagvan kahege aapse, hey balak

P look wide eye at H, K D too looks

Shi:What palak?

H:Arre palak nahi balak, matlab ladke iss apsara ke naam hema hein

Shi: apsara ke naam hema kaise ho sakta hein apsara ke naam apsara hein na, agar hema hein toh apsara kyun bulaye

P hits her head

H:Kya

P:Chup kar tum,

P turns to Shi

P:Shivam yeh hein mere friend Hema

Shi:Ohhhh hema

P:Haan

H:Yeah Ohh Hema kya hein

Shi:Nothing

H:Ab toh naam jaana na

H again forward the knife

Shi get afraid and again moves back

Shi:Hey hey dur rakho usse

H frowns and moves her hand back,Shi slowlt takes knife from her hand,H forward onion

Shi:Onion kaatna hein

H nods

After kitchen work,H go and sit on the couch.Shi on another.K D P in kitchen doing last minute work

P:Yeh Rey ab taka aye kyun nahi, itna time bath

H:Arre sirf 15 minute hue hein

K plays music Shayrana hui last para

P dances to it

Kahe jo sakhiyan

(P shows H)

Sune jo thakiyan

(H throws the pillow)

Tu hein vo kahani

(P catches the pillow and pulls down)

P smiles and goes to K

Kahe jo sakhiya sune jo thakiya

(P puts her hand on K's shoulder and hit pillow at K)

tu hein vo kahani

(P throws the pillow to H)

Daude jo naz mein rehna bas mein tu hein vo ravani

(P puts hand around D's arm and walk with him)

Shi goes to washroom smiling.

S opens the door and enters and see the scene and was looking at P.

Mein jispe fida hoon adaa ban gaya tu

(P acts as if faint on K's shoulder and point at the photo of Rey and Swayam)

Jo sach ho gaye vo dua ban gaya tu

(P leans on the slab smiling dreamily)

Ke haaye re subah bhi fisalne lage

(P turns to K D act like slipping)

K D H laughs, P twirls and see S.P stops and look shocked,seeing P's shocked expression H also look shocked,K D also see S

K D H:Swayam

S: Vo mein Rey ko milne aaya tha tum log yahan

K:Hum vo bas chota get together

P turns to other side bite her tongue and hit her head

P: (kyaa ganeshji kya timing hein,kahin unhone kuch dekh na liya ho, yeh Rey kahan gaye aur shivam ) P shocked (huuuuh Shivam satyanaash ab inhone shivam ko dekh liya toh, meine kaha tha mat bulao shivam ko ab kya karenge)

S: (waah kya timing hein, socha mann ko distract karne keliye Rey se milunga aur maafi bhi maangunga kal ke rude behavior keliye, aur yahan toh phir se ,God)

P looks at S tensed

H frowns and action P kya hua

P actions washroom where Shi went

H frowns not understanding

P give "impossible" look

D:Swayam kahan kho gaye

S:Nahi kuch nahi

H:Aap beitiye na

D:Yeah

S: (ab achanak jaa bhi nahi sakta kya sochege yeh log thodi der beittha hoon)

S sits

S:Rey kahan hein

P comes with water and offers to S.S look at P,P smiles nervous

S: (aise behave kar rahe ho jaise yeh iski ghar hein, Rey ke ghar hein yeh toh yeh bhi mehmaan hein meri tarah aur Rey ke photo dikhake kya tha fida ho gaye)

S closes his eyes

S: (damn swayam just stop it. Iski marzi vo jo chahe karoon)

H notices S expression

H:Kya hua pani nahi chahiye

S:Huh

H:Pani nahi chahiye

S:Haan nahi chahiye,Rey kahan hein

P goes and stand between K H

H:Rey naha rahe hein , pichle aadhe ghante se beauty bath

Just then they hear sound from the washroom Shivam went

P look wide eye

S frowns

S:Dusre bathroom mein kaun hein

D:Vo toh

P:Rey

All look at P,P looks at H,H understand

H:Haan Rey

S:Par Rey ke karma toh vo hein yeh toh guest room hein

P: (bahut khub saare disha jante hein Rey ke ghar kea b kya karoon)vo vo Rey uss toilet pe naha rahe hein , hein na

S:Acha par vo toh apne toilet mein hi comfortable

P: (low voice)hey bhagvan agar shivam yahan aa gaya toh, ab tere galti meine kaha na gadbad hoge

H:Tere mann na,bahut bure hein isliye yeh hua

P in high voice:Kya

S looks at P

S:Kya hua

P looks at S

P:Hmm Kya apko aisa lag rahe hein ki mein jhoot bol rahi hoon

K D H frown at P

S wide eye

S:Meine aise kab kaha

P:Toh aap aise shak ke nazar se kyun dekh rahe hein

S:What

P:aap chaliye mere saath abhi dikhate hein ki vahan Rey hi hein

H wide eye:What, tum pagal ho gaye ho kya

P:Nahi aap ayiye

S:Lekin mujhe nahi aana mujhe koi shak nahi hein

P:Nahi apko aana padega

P drags S

S:Arre ajeeb zabardasti hein

S gos with P

P goes to room and shout from outside

P:Rey yeh dekho kaun aaya hein

Shi frowns and goes to reply

P:Aapke best friend aaye hein apko milne

S:Pragya tum chilla kyun rahi ho

P:agar teek se nahi suna toh

Shi wide eye: Ohh no Swayam. Ab kya kare

P:Mein toh sirf aapko kehne aaye the aaram se nahake aayiye ok

K D H stand at the door facing P S

H: (low voice)Prayu toh kamaal ho gaye situation samhalne mein

D (low voice )Experience

S folds his hand and glares at P.P sighs and turns to S

P:Ab chaliye Rey aa jayege.P sees S standing still

P:Kya hua

S:Anthar kaun hein

P:Bola na Rey hein

S:Acha toh yeh kaun hein

S points outside the door

P turns to the door :Kaun vo

P get shocked,D K H also turn and get shocked

R comes drying his hair and frowns at them

R:Kya hua guys

P: (satyanaash ab kyakare, yeh Rey ko bhi abhi aana     

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