Title: a day in limbo
Genre: short story
Author: Belle_Dowson
Judge: CathrineRajkumar
Cover/title: your cover is simply superb and your cover itself makes me to read your whole story. And about title "one day in limbo" it's just amazing and out of the box not something cliche.
I would love to give 1.8/2
Description: your description is sweet and simple and it also increase the curiosity how she lost her everything in one day.
I would love to give 0.8/1
Storyline: the concept of your story is awesome, from the start till the last I loved the way you write. Though there are some small mistakes that you can edit it.
I would love to give 1.7/2
Total score: 4.3/5