Story's name : 7 months
Author's name : magicglow11111
Starting with the cover.... I really liked the picture but I think it could be a little creative. Overall the story plot is really good! Do update the next part soon.
Two things to remember that:
1) I feel that the chapters were a little short! You could add a 100 words
Tbh I also used to write short chapters initially but now, I write up to the mark. All over the chapters are very good.
2) there were a few errors. Grammatical. Like in the hindi portion it would be
Mera baby hai.
Also after the punctuation marks you didn't start with capital letters.
The positives in the story:
1) The story line is really good and unique. Usually people write on Rikara's married life, but yours is unique since you wrote on the problems during her pregnancy
2) Also I liked your interaction with the readers. Like asking if the readers would like Gauri to have a boy or a girl. So that is a plus for me.
Also not to forget, you could just write a small introduction of the characters specifically the character sketch of Rikara's daughters.
For the description I would say, it perfectly serves the plot of the story, but you could add 2 lines more.
Since this story has 25 parts it may take a little time to read, but guys trust me this story is totally worth the time!
I would rate this book:3.5/5 stars.
I was really pleased by the book and please update as soon as possible. Hopefully I wasn't rude. Guys do follow lavanya, she writes awesome stories. My favourite story till date is dil diya gallan. So guys go give her books a try. Lastly don't forget to tag your friends in the comments. Love ya! XOXO ❤️😘