Rejection Once Is Enough|Fantasies-N-TeaIn20s
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Design{Title, Cover, Blurb}
Title; The title makes me ask questions, such as Who was rejected? Why were they rejected? And other things. I think you've picked a really eye catching and interesting title.
Cover; The cover looks very professional, like something you would see at a bookstore or a library. It gives me a peek of what the book is gonna be about and is not misleading at all.
Blurb; I think that your description is way too revealing, it'd be better if you left some stuff out so that us, the readers, could just read about it inside of the book. Also, the very first part was very confusing to me. I think it needs some rewording and commas.
Plot; I think you have a great plot. It is very disipate.
Character Developmemt; I would've liked to know a little more of their background, but besides that they are well developed.
Language; There are unwarrented capital letters in the middle of a sentence, and I believe that they are not names. Also, it is in need of some rephrasing so that it makes a little more sense and seems a bit more natural.
Miscellaneous; Your descriptions are wonderful and very visual.
Overall; Overall I think that with a bit of editing then it'd be super. Great story line, nice title and good characters. I think you have done a fantastic job. Excluding all the other errors, I really did enjoy reading it even though books with a lot of errors usually push me away. Keep on writing and growing your talent.
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