If you're going to put a Cordelia re-make, do it right. Make Caeldori have an undying love for a guy. Or at least a crush, something like that. You can't have her be a Mary-Sue. Naga forbid, I hate Mary-Sues. Have her have a major flaw other than her lack of confidence in herself. Maybe she's secretly a bookworm and is afraid of being found out and bullied for it. Have one of her supports-I'm going to go with bookworm-supports, optimally the guy she loves, find her reading and she panics (C support). Have the guy ask her why she's been avoiding him and have her panic (B support). For the A support, have the guy finally catch her and pin her against a wall and ask why she's avoiding him. Have her tell him everything and then he reveals he has a secret love of books too. S-support, have the two of them reading together and he gives her a book with the words written on the first page 'Will you go out on a date with me?' (Hey... I should make that....)
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