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i had been in mystick falls for about 2 days so far undetected .this town was a super natruel playground it had witches wolfs vampires and who knows whatelse i was at the hot spot of the town the grill when i saw a man with hair as black as a crows feather . he was sitting at the bar drinking a bottle of bourben i sat beside him at on the barstool when he noticed me , hey you new to town havnt saw you around and your beautiful face would have remeberd he said with a smirk the devil couldn't even acomplish . i started blushing and lowerd my eyes to the ground the crow haired man picked my chin up with his index finger and smiled. hi im damon , damon salvatore .im silver, silver morgan i said with a giggle yeah im new ive been here a good 2 days what about youy i asked damon. um actualy i have been here my whole life but moved a few years back and traveld around the world for a bit then came back to be with my family damon answerd . oh you have a wife i stated no no no i um i im single just came back for my brother what about you what are you here for he asked me. im just passing through i heard there was a couple of wolf attacks around the area i damonished . it seemed to get damons attention . I knew you were a wolf i smelled you when you came in but tyler comes here often with my brother stefan and his girlfriend elana. so what are you i asked damon you have a sort of aura going on here i joked. im actualy a vampire once damon got the words out i felt a gust of wind flash by me so i turned my head and their before me stood the most gorgeous man id ever seen hello mate ive just been wondering why exactly is it that when i help you out by saving your life that your brother and his friends are trying to kill me the man said with a feathery light but menacing british accent . and who may this be here oh were are my maners im Klaus he said while reaching for my hand a kissing my knuckel i blushed . oh honey not him hes a psychopath not to mention a murder . Klaus dropped my hand harshley and wrapped his fingers around damons throaght . that reminds me damon tell your brother i will kill him and all his little friends if they so much as lay a finger on me and also tell stefan i would like my coffins back if i dont have them back by a week ill kill one of his friends every time an hour goes by he said with a look of seriouseness on his face as for you love i would recomeend you come with me you are the one thats been following me from the pass 2 days are you not klaus acussed me . i sat with my mouth gaping open . ill take that as yes then come along then klaus said while pushing me along by the small of my back gently. we exited the store and got into a black suv and sat in cofortable sileince on the way to were ever he was taking me . im sorry love but i never caught your name klaus said shattering the sileince . its silver i said firmly. are you scared of me he said still facing the road . no im not frankly i dont feel any ill feeling from you so why would i be i said bodly . because im a hybrid im niklaus mikelson the origional vampire people quake with fear at the mere mention of my name he said arogantly . well im not so im sorry to dissapoint you we pulled into a magnificent drive way to se a grand house no squash that mansion it was a beautiful cream color with a forest and river behind it it had balcony set up so you could look out into the forest