So... Like I said in my comment on the previous chapter, I've been procrastinating about continuing this story. But since it seems to be in such high demand I'm going to start working on it immediately. :D
But you must realize that this story, being a fan-fiction, is not something I plan to publish. So I'm not planning on going back and fixing it up, I'm just going to continue it with better writing than I started out with. And I probably won't be updating a lot, because I'm working on a story (Redemption Road) that I really do want to get published. But I will try to update this one as often as I can. :)
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I just went back and read the other three stories, and I had to laugh at how Sylvia started out as a major Mary Sue. But she got a little better as the stories went on, I think. A little better.
So, since it's been about two and a half years since I last wrote on this story, let us hope that Sylvia has had time to grow up a little more. ;)