I recently got this comment on one of the chapters for this book: "Yeah, you've lost me now. The story was amusing and funny but it moved way too quick. I laughed a lot and I enjoyed it while it lasted but now she's pregnant with Johnny Storm's baby while she is with Steve Rogers Im just gone. Sorry amigo. I enjoyed it while it lasted. Good job for the previous chapters though. :)"
Just wondered if anyone else felt the same way? Did I move to quickly? Because I was thinking of going down a differant storyline route (in the sequel that I've already posted quite a bit of) where, somehow, they turn back time and April doesn't end up getting pregnant? I dont know...
But please, help me out. I need comments... :)