Hell's Treasure (Graphic Nove...

By RobertJeschonek

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Meet Shaw Serling, a 16-year-old girl who can tap into the mystic inner power of architecture. A boy named A... More

Hell's Treasure Chapter 1
Hell's Treasure Chapter 2
Hell's Treasure Chapter 3
Hell's Treasure Chapter 4
Hell's Treasure Chapter 5
Hell's Treasure Chapter 6
Hell's Treasure Chapter 7
Hell's Treasure Chapter 9
Hell's Treasure Chapter 10
Hell's Treasure Chapter 11
Hell's Treasure Chapter 12
Hell's Treasure Chapter 13
Hell's Treasure Chapter 14
Hell's Treasure Chapter 15
Hell's Treasure Chapter 16
Hell's Treasure Chapter 17
Hell's Treasure Chapter 18
Hell's Treasure Chapter 19
Hell's Treasure Chapter 20
Hell's Treasure Chapter 21
Hell's Treasure Chapter 22

Hell's Treasure Chapter 8

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Page 46 (7 panels)

Page 46 panel 1

Medium shot.  Shaw keeps gaping.  Aaron finally turns and looks up in the angel's direction.

Shaw: Oh my God.

Aaron: What?  What's going on?

Page 46 panel 2

Same shot as panel 1.  Identical, except Aaron turns back to look at the sketch as if he's seen nothing unusual.  Shaw just keeps gaping at the angel.

Aaron: Oh.  Just one of those things.

Aaron: Bo-ring.

Shaw (caption): I feel like my whole world has turned inside-out.

Page 46 panel 3

Extreme closeup on Shaw's stunned expression.  She is totally blown away by what she sees.

Shaw (caption): I believed in Heaven.  I was trying to go there.

Shaw (caption): But it's one thing to believe in something...

Page 46 panel 4

Middle tier.  Medium shot.  Angle on the angel's face as he beams at her.

Shaw (caption): ...and it's another to have it staring you in the face.

Page 46 panel 5

Wide shot.  POV behind Shaw, shooting over her shoulder as she gazes at the hovering angel.

Shaw (caption): Now, for the first time in my life, I know.

Shaw (caption): I know for a fact that Heaven exists.

Page 46 panel 6

Medium 2-shot.  Shaw still gazes at the angel.  Aaron still stares at the sketch, trying to look like he's not paying attention to the heavenly creature floating in midair before him.

Shaw (caption): Now what?

Aaron: Maybe he's come to take us with him.  Hell of a shortcut, huh?

Shaw: Or not.

Page 46 panel 7

Closeup on the angel as he dons his golden helmet.  His smile takes on a more sinister edge as he slides the helmet onto his head.

Aaron (off-panel): Why?  What makes you say that, Shaw?

Page 47 (5 panels)

Page 47 panel 1

Wide shot.  Shaw and Aaron both look up at the angel now.  They're in his shadow, engulfed by it.  Shaw pulls Aaron back by the elbow, away from the flag and plaque.

Shaw: Get to the stairway, Aaron.  Fast as you can.

Shaw (caption): Even as I say it...

Page 47 panel 2

Medium shot.  The angel, with his helmet on, raises the fiery sword, ready to attack.  The sun blazes behind him, glinting off his armor.

Shaw (caption): ...I realize it's too late.

Page 47 panel 3

Middle and bottom tiers.  Big panel, two-thirds of the page, with insets.  Wide shot of the angel soaring toward Shaw and Aaron, brandishing his sword...still beaming beatifically.  Shaw's POV as he rockets toward her at frightening speed.

Shaw (off-panel): Run!

Page 47 panel 4

Lower left inset over panel 3.  Medium shot.  Shaw and Aaron running toward the hatch of the secret stairwell.  Angel's POV as he swoops down on them from above.

Shaw: Hurry!

Page 47 panel 5

Lower right inset over panel 3.  Medium shot.  Shaw and Aaron running full-tilt toward the hatch as the angel bears down behind them, in the background of the shot.  POV from in front of Shaw and Aaron, as if the camera were in their path.

Shaw: Go!

Aaron: We're almost th...

Page 48 (6 panels)

Page 48 panel 1

Wide shot, big panel.  In the foreground, Shaw's at the open hatch, ready to descend the staircase.  But the angel swoops down and scoops up Aaron, latching onto his ankle and hoisting him off the concrete.

Shaw (caption): I'm almost home free when the angel grabs Aaron.

Aaron: YAAAHHH!

Page 48 panel 2

Middle tier panel.  Medium shot.  Angle on Shaw as she watches the angel from the rim of the hatch.

Shaw (caption): So much for home free.

Angel (off-panel)(unique angelic font): If only you could save him.

Page 48 panel 3

Medium shot.  Angle on the angel as he hovers beyond the edge of the tower, dangling terrified Aaron over the East River far below.

Angel: From falling, that is.

Angel: If only you had the key to his future.

Page 48 panel 4

Bottom tier panel.  Closeup on Shaw.  Focus on the key in her hand, the key she got from the hidden compartment.  She looks at it as sunlight glints on its golden surface.

Shaw (caption): He wants this.  But why?

Shaw: What would you need with a key?

Page 48 panel 5

Small panel.  Closeup on Aaron, upside-down, eyes wide and frantic.

Aaron: Just give it to him, Shaw!

Page 48 panel 6

Wide shot.  Shaw facing off against the angel, who's still floating beyond the tower with Aaron in his grip.

Shaw: But we don't even know who he is.

Angel: My name is Elysion.  Now hold that thought.

Page 49 (7 panels)

Page 49 panel 1

Medium shot.  The angel loosens two fingers from around Aaron's ankle.  Aaron is bug-eyed and panicky.

Elysion: My palm is sweating a bit.

Elysion: Starting to lose my grip, I'm afraid.

Aaron: No!  Please!  No!

Page 49 panel 2

Wide shot.  Shaw, looking disgusted, holds up the key.  We see her in the gap between Elysion and Aaron's leg in the foreground.

Shaw (caption): Butthole.

Shaw: All right, you've made your point.  You can have it.

Page 49 panel 3

Medium shot in the middle tier.  The smiling angel continues to dangle Aaron in mid-air, but we see another finger uncurl from around his ankle.

Elysion: How sweet of you.  Just hand it over, and I'll...

Page 49 panel 4

Medium shot, almost identical to panel 3, except Elysion lets go of Aaron.  He watches him fall, eyes slightly wide in mild (feigned) surprise.  We see Aaron's leg plunge away from him, straight down.

Elysion: Whoopsy daisy.

Page 49 panel 5

Closeup on Shaw, eyes wide, as she watches Aaron drop and realizes he's as good as dead...and so is she.

Shaw (caption): My heart's like a bird beating itself to death against the bars of a cage.

Shaw (caption): I hardly know Aaron, but I can't stand to lose him.

Shaw (caption): He's all I've got.

Page 49 panel 6

Bottom tier.  Medium shot of Elysion swooping down at Shaw.

Shaw (caption): Not that it'll be a problem for much longer.

Page 49 panel 7

Closeup on Elysion making contact with Shaw, plowing into her and grabbing the key from her grasp at the same time.

Shaw (caption): Because it turns out...

Page 50 (8 panels)

Page 50 panel 1

Wide shot, big panel.  Elysion plows Shaw right off the bridge tower into thin air.  He has his head down and his shoulder sunk into the tackle, and we see the gleaming key in his hand.

Shaw (caption): ...I won't be around long enough to miss him.

Page 50 panel 2

Medium shot, middle tier.  Shaw's POV as she falls straight down.  Elysion hovers above her, waving and smiling, silhouetted against the bright sun.

Shaw (caption): The breath rushes out of my lungs.  The wind roars in my ears like a train.

Shaw (caption): This is exactly what I set out to do last night.  Before I was rudely interrupted.

Page 50 panel 3

Reverse angle.  Closeup on Shaw as she plunges toward the distant surface of the East River.

Shaw (caption): And the funny thing is, it's only now that I realize...

Shaw (caption): ...now that it's absolutely too late...

Page 50 panel 4

Almost the same shot as panel 3, but wider, as Shaw continues to plummet away from us.

Shaw (caption): ...that I don't want to die.

Shaw: Help me!

Page 50 panel 5

Bottom tier.  Tight closeup on Shaw's face in profile.  The wind whips her hair upward as she continues to fall.

Shaw: Please help me!

Shaw (caption): Why I call for help, I don't know.

Page 50 panel 6

Tighter closeup on Shaw's face in profile.  She closes her eyes as she cries out.

Shaw (caption): I know it's already too late.

Shaw: Help!!!

Page 50 panel 7

An even tighter closeup on Shaw's face, eyes still shut tight.

Shaw (caption): I'm dead.

Shaw: Oh God, oh God, oh God...

Shaw (caption): Mission accomplished.

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