SHRAMAN FF-Soulmates (on Hold)

By prietyp

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This story is about suman tiwari and shravan malhotra, both was not willing to get married but destiny played... More

prologue
Soulmates-Chapter1
Soulmates-Chapter2
Soulmates - chapter 3
Soulmates - Chapter 4
Soulmates- chapter 5
Soulmates - Chapter 6
soulmates - Chapter 7
Soulmates - Chapter 8
soulmates- chapter 9
Soulmates - chapter 10
soulmates -chapter 11
soulmates chapter 12
Soulmates- Chapter 13
soulmates chapter 14
Soulmates Chapter 15
Soulmates - Chapter 16
Soulmates Chapter 17
Soulmates - Chapter 18
Soulmates - Chapter 19
soulmates- chapter 21
Author Note
Soulmates- Chapter 22
Soulmates- Chapter 23
Soulmates-Chapter 24
Soulmates - Chapter 25
Soulmates - Chapter 26

Soulmates - Chapter 20

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By prietyp

Hi all, hope you remember me and my story, guys sorry to you keep you all waiting for so long but i am really not able to decide about this story.

There are so many things i am thinking about this but really not satisfied with the response received on the previous parts, please read note at the end its important

This part is dedicated to my bimar kiddo @Tinna28 and @sweptiii

So now no more wait , have a nice time while reading

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Chapter 20

Continuation.....

same time vandy & Varun's room

vandy and varun changed into nightwares, varun was checking his important business mails on his laptop when vandy joined him on bed

"Varun baby suno na" vandy called her husband sweetly but he completely ignored her since was so engrossed in his laptop

after finding the didn't responded she again called him out sweetly but little bit louder than last time "varun suno na pleaseeee"

this time he just hummed in response "Hmmm"

Finally understanding her husband was so busy in his laptop she just closed his laptop hardly and kept it aside with anger

varun startled with her action and was about to snap but stopped in between seeing his wife's angry face, after all no men have enough guts to mess with his angry lioness

"kya hua vandy why you are so angry" vanrun asked with best innocent face as if nothing was happen

"really varun you are asking me, i was calling you from last 5 mins and you are not at all giving any heed to my call" vandy chided and folded her hands across her chest with angry pout

"beta varun tune to bhadka diya hai apani sherani ko ab chal start monofying session of your pissed wife" he thought and moved close to her

he hold her one hand and kissed her knuckles lovingly "baby aisa nahi actually you know na you are so beautiful that i can't resist if you are around me so esiliye i was thinking ke before i forgot all world and get lost in you i should complete this work, you know na once i start then nothing can stop me" he winked with a impish grin

vandy blushed and slapped on his chest playfully "varun aap bhi na" she smiled shyly "eti aur ehan yahi pe soye hai" she pointed her two babies sleeping peacefully on their bed

varun turned his gaze toward his two rock stars and wished them by kissing their foreheads one by one "are haa vandy mein to bhul hi gaya puchana ki aaj ye dono yaha kyu soye hai, apane room me kyu nahi soye?" varun asked her as this was so unsual for him since his child's love to sleep on their barbie doll and car's bed

vandy chuckled remembering her child's demand "are varun pata hai eti kya bol rahi thi?" varun gave a questioning nod "ki aaj bhi use suman chachi ke sath sona hai"

varun started laughing on his princess demand "he bhagwan eti bhi na thank god nahi to shravan to pagal hi jata" he slapped his forehead by imagining shravan's face seeing eti sleeping with sumo

"oh god i know how i managed and convinced her and worst part was ehan bhi shuru ho gaya tha ki agar eti chachi ke sath soyegi to i will also sleep with chahchi, thank god mummyji and badi maa ne sambhala merese to sambhal hi nahi rahe the" vandy heaved in relief remembering how many efforts they took to coax her princess that not to sleep with her beloved chachi and finally agreed when vandy promised her that she will tell her 5 bedtime fairy tale stories

"on serious note vandy muze nahi lagta hai ki ab shravan London jayega" varun said with determined expressions

"kyu varun why you think he will not go?" vandy asked confusingly because from past 2 years she witnessed many wrangling between shravan and other family members specially bade papa, badi maa and dadi

"are abhi see he mingled very well here, aur see suman ki achhi job hai yaha yeh chodake thodi na wo jayegi usake piche piche" varun cleared her doubt by telling her his pov

"hmm hope so , i really don't want they should go to london, after all etane salo ke bad jethani banane ka chance mila hai" vandy pulled her imaginary collars proudly and winked

"wah kya baat hai yaha bhi apana fayada" varun murmured under breath but didn't went unnoticed by vandy's sharp ears

"kya kaha tumane varun" vandy kept her hands on hips and glared him

"are kuchh nahi actually mein yeh bol raha tha ki hum log shravan aur suman ko kya gift de?" he skillfully changed topic

"are haan varun kya de un logo kuchh classy hona chahiye okay?" vandy replied excitedly and varun sighed that he successfully saved himself from her wrath

"yes baby i was thinking to give them honeymoon package to Hawaii" varun suggested anxiously since he was not sure that this destination will fit or not in his wife's ever so classy places list

"ohh my god varun its such a beautiful destination honey, pakka they will love it" vandy squealed while clapping her hands out of excitement totally forgot about her kids were sleeping in their room today

eti stirred in her sleep due to vandy's voice "vandy dheere bolo" varun patted eti's forehead gently "they are sleeping baby be careful"

"oops sorry, i just got excited" vandy bit her tongue "but i really like your idea i think no one else gonna think about this, you are the best hubby" vandy gave a quick kiss on his chick

"not bad wifey, shravan ke gift ke liye muze yeh gift" varun winked and gave a flying one in return "okay but seriously keep your mouth shut okay, nahi to excitement ke maare don't split out everything in front of others until we gave them surprise okay" varun being very well aware of his chatter box wife tried to warn her without her feeling offended. that is the bliss in relationship when its got older with time partned started knowing then inside out enough that without hurting them you calmly can make other understand your point

vandy nodded "yeah varun don't worry i won't spoil your surprise and even i am excited to see their reaction, i am damn sure they gonna love it" vandy blinked in assurance that their surprise was safe and she will not split it out

"okay vandy i think we should sleep now it's too late" vanrun suggested while adjusting eti under duvet so that he can make proper place for himself

"haan baby, you are right aur kal waise bhi suman ka first day hai usaki muh dikhayi bhi hai na bahot kam hoga, i need to invite my many friends they are dying to meet suman" vandy get up from her place and moved toward the other side and adjusted herself beside ehan under duvet

"Good night" varun wished and slipped under covers and closed side lamp by calling it a night, it was already a tiring day for everyone

"Good night" vandy wished him back and closed side lamp on her side and soon they drifted off to deep sleep

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on the other hand same time in Kamini's and Lalaji's room

Kamini and lalaji were changed into their night wears, they were talking about random things as what all happen during marriage and all, kamini also told lalaji about eti;s wish to sleep with sumo and how they convinced her.

Same thought about shravan was arouse in lalaji's mind as varun and he also told kamini that he was sure now that shravan won't leave for london he will just dump the idea of leaving delhi since now he have suman with him and she won't leave everything behind like that for him

suddenly something stuck to "suniye waise mein soch rahi ki hum log ko na shravan aur suman ko kuchh gift dena chahiye na kya sochate ho aap?" kamini raised brow suggestively

"haan ji aap bilkul sahi soch rahe ho, hum logo ko kuchh dena chahiye" lalji rubbed his chin thinking about what they can gift

"muze kuchh samaz me nahi aa raha hai, matlab ghar me sab kuchh pahalesi hai, aur didi ne ab toh shravan ka room bhi renovate karane ka socha hai suman ke hisab se , toh hum log kya de?" kamini questioned lalaji but it was more like she was talking to herself

"Ohh soniyo why to worry when you husband is here, mennu ekdam badhiya idea aaya hai ji" lalaji stared kamini with ecstatic smile,

she stared him back with question mark on her face "soniyo mein kya soch raha tha na ki hum log un dono ko honeymoon package dete hai, kya kahati ho aap?" lalaji gleefully suggested hoping his wife will like this idea

"are waah lalaji kya khub gift socha hai, suniye hum un dono ko na switzerland ka package dete hai" kamini exhilarated with the idea of switzerland honeymoon package for newlywed, her eyes twinkled reflecting her excitement

"kya baat hai ji aap etane khush lag rahe ho ki jaise aap hi honeymoon pe jane wale ho" lalji stared his overexcited wife with mischief as he was still unable to find reason behind it

"sachhi bolu, woh kya hai na mera hamesha se sapna tha ki mein na apane honeymoon pe kahi snow wale place me jau, ab aap to nahi le gaye toh shravan ko hi bhej denge hum log" kamini replied coyly sharing her wish

"oye hoye soniyo makhana de doliye mein mar jawa aapki in adao pe, bilkul ji hum switzerland wala hi package denge kal hi mein baat karata hu" kamini was completely flattered on her husband's consent, lalaji walked close to her "waise aap kahe to hum log bhi jaa sakate hai swizerland" he whispered in her ear stressing switzerland which turned her into complete red resembling with human tomato

kamini hit him on his chest playfully "app bhi na, kuchh bhi aiveyehi" she walked toward bed to hide her blush and slipped into the covers

lalaji scratched back of his head and walked toward bed with small smile crept on his face "lekin kamini dhyan rakhan kisi ko hum logo ke gift ke bare mat batana nahito sab gudgobar ho jayega, specially vandana puttar aur parjayijiko" lalji warned her knowing she will easily spilt out everything if someone tried to get it smartly

"bilkul nahi ji, kisiko nahi batana meine, lekin vandy se puchaungi ke woh log kya de rahe hai?" a cunning smile played on kamini's lips thinking it will be easy to get information from her so bholi bhali bahu "muze pura yakin hai lekin ki etani mast idea sirf aapko hi aa asati hai, baki koi to soch bhi nahi sakta hai es bare me" she were totally impressed with her husband's brilliant idea

"changa ji, chalo so jate hai bahot late ho gaya" he closed all lights and both drifted into sleep

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Nirmala and Rmanath's room

Ramnath and nirmala changed into the normal clothes and got busy into their own work

Ramnath started flipping through some important case files as he was not able to concentrate on them from past 1 week because of marriage preparations and now he have lot many things in his bucket to finish on priority

Nirmala was busy in arranging her jewellery and clothes, she arranged plate with saree and jewellery which she was supposed to give suman to wear for her Muh dikhayi

They also had conversation about eti's demand in between their work, finally nirmala perceived time since it was too late

"ram chaliye na so jaeiye bahot late ho gaya hai, kal suman ki muh dikhayi bhi hai bahot kam hai" she arranged bed by clearing all the stuff

"tum so jao muze thoda time aur lagega abhi yeh file dekhani hai badme so jaunga bahot imp case hai" ramnath replied still looking into his files

she moved toward him and closed all files furiously, ramanth just stared his wife confusingly "kya? raat ke ek baje hai aur aapko kam ki suzi hai, aaj waise bhi din bhar kitna kaam hua hai, chaliye" nirmala enjoined him strictly

ramnath was really not in the mood to mess up with his wife at midnight knowing where it will end, so he raised his hands in defeat and marched toward bed without any protest, nirmala suppresses her smile and joined him on bed, both laid down on bed

"ram suniye na mein kya soch rahi thi" nirmala called out him while glancing up to the ceiling and waited for his reply

"bol hi do madam bina bolo manogi toh nahi" he mocked knowing that she won't let it go without telling him

"majak mat kariye" she stared him with 'I-AM-DAMN-SEROIUS' look which was enough for him to concentrate on her words

"haan bolo" this time his voice laced with real seriousness

"mein soch rahi thi ki hum log suman aur shravan ko kahi bahar bhej de honeymoon ke liye?" she raised brow

"hmm, sahi bol rahi ho, ek kaam karta hu Paris ke liye honeymoon package book kar deta hu, thik rahega?" he cocked a brow in question

"haan paris thik rahega, ek week ke liye kar dijiyega" nirmala gave consent to ramnath's proposal

"thik hai to fir kal hi mein sab arrangement karwa deta hu"

"ji thik hai chaliye ab muze sona hai bahot der ho gayi hai Good night" nirmala wished him and turned to side closing bed light and soon drifted to sleep

ramnath smiled at his wife and shut down lights and soon sleep engulfed him while thinking about how to make all arrangements for SHRAMAN's honeymoon trip

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Midnight 3 AM SHRAMAN's Room...

SHRAMAN was in deep slumbers when shravan's sleep broke by some noise, he stirred on his place changing side but still whatever that noise was still there, he tried to hide his face by placing pillow on his ear so that he can get rid of those noises but still all went in vain, finally he woke up and started searching for the source of the noise irritatingly by switching on his bed lamp, he started searching at each and every place in room

"are yaar yeh kya pareshani hai ab ye kaha se aawaj aa rahi hai" he exasperated by hearing those noises "wait yeh to snoring ki awaj hai ek min" he stared sumo suspiciously and moved close to her, then he realised his beloved wife was literally snoring and sleeping peacefully by destroying his sleep, he kneeled down infront of her and started adoring her dreamily

You're amazing

I adore your every move

Infatuated, by every little thing you do

My heart's on fire

And it's melting into you

You're amazing

I'm gonna be true

I'm gonna be true

I've been afraid to say it, say it

But I really truly feel it

There's no way I can ignore it

I've gotta say it today

Don't want you slipping away

I've gotta let it go and say it

'Cause I really truly want it

There's no way I can ignore it

I've gotta say it today

Don't want you slipping away

Say it

Say it

"yaar kitani cute lag rahi hai, man to kar raha hai gale laga lu" he thought and beautiful smile automatically crept on his lips

You're so graceful

You've got me hanging lost for words

Intoxicated, can't get enough of what I heard

The search is over

'Cause I can see myself with you

You are so graceful

It's gotta be you

It's gotta be you

I've been afraid to say it, say it

But I really truly feel it

There's no way I can ignore it

I've gotta say it today

Don't want you slipping away

I'm gonna let it go and say it

'Cause I really truly want it

There's no way I can ignore it

I'm gonna say it today

Don't want you slipping away

Say it

Say it

"yaar i just hope i can take her in my arms and sleep whole night by cuddling her" there was a hair strand falling on her beautiful face, he raised his and and tucked that behind her ear and his fingers lingered on her chick for little longer than required

Didn't think that I would lose control

But you're speaking straight into my soul

I don't ever wanna let this go

That's why I'm gonna tell you now

Say it, say it, say it

'Cause I really truly feel it

There's no way I can ignore it

I've gotta say it today

Don't want you slipping away

I've been afraid to say it, say it

But I really truly feel it

There's no way I can ignore it

I've gotta say it today

Don't want you slipping away

I'm gonna let it go and say it

'Cause I really truly want it

There's no way I can ignore it

I'm gonna say it today

Don't want you slipping away

Say it...

Suddenly sumo stirred in her place which break his trance "shravan what was that hug and all huh? are you crazy what you are thinking? stupid you moron behave yourself?" he chided himself mentally and slapped on his head

"lekin ab ese uthau kaise yeh madam to mast kharrate marke so rahi hai waha meri neend kharab karake" he irked as she was sleeping so peacefully without any effect "yeh to kumbhakarani hai, kaise ghode bechakar so rahi hai" he raised his hand to wake her up but in next moment he took it back "are yaar kya karu man bhi nahi kar raha hai uthane ka, kitane sukun se soyi hai, man kar raha hai aisehi dekhate rahu" again his heart made it difficult for him but finally his mind got hold of him and he slightly tapped on her shoulder "sumo..." he called her in low voice

she turned her side and snuggled in her pillow completely unaffected by his call

"are yaar kya karu, yeh madam to uthane ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai, aur aise hi chalata rahega to mein raat bhar nahi so paunga, OH God please help me" he glanced ceiling and begged to almighty to help him, he again tapped her shoulder and her out but little louder that last time "sumo"

she stirred little bit and slowly opened her big doe eyes, she gave him cutest smile and closed her eyes again but a sweet smile was still playing on her lips as if she was dreaming about something very good "yaar kya karu mein es ladki ka" this time he shook her by her shoulder and called her out in real loud voice "Suman..." he said annoyingly

"huh" she literally jumped at her place and started looking here and there "kya hua? kon hai,? earthquake aaya kya? bachao bachao" she panicked and started shouting

"are yaar chup chilla kyu rahi ho, sare ghar ka get together karna hai kya?" he whined covering his ears with hands

sumo came back to her senses and registered her surrounding finally, she gazed him apologetically "sorry, i didn't mean that" she started biting her lip

he removed his hands from ears "its okay, leikin madam can you please let me sleep peacefully" sumo looked at him confusingly

"meine kya kiya shravan?" she asked innocently in sleepy tone

he really melted at her innocence but within next moment he composed himself "are madam kya kiya kya kiya? you were snoring and because of that i am not able to sleep" he irked on her obliviousness

"i don't snore" she fumed on his accusation but little she know reality because this was the first time she was sharing room with someone , yeah sometimes preeti used to sleep in her room but she never complained something like this

"what?" his eyes widen on her reply "do you think i am mad or something who is sitting in middle of the night and telling you to stop snoring" he stared her amusingly

finally realization dawned to her and looked down, she remembered masi just told her she was snoring on the day of sangeet when masi shared her room because she had a small fight with mausaji, but it was because she was tired and its was not like she used to snore daily "woh actually i don't snore, but agar mein bahot thak jati hu to kabhi kabhi thoda snore karati hu" she replied sheepishly while fidgeting with duvet in her hand

"ohh toh madam agar thaki ho toh snore karati hai, aur kya kya situations hai jab yeh hota hai?" he quipped while suppressing his smile

"sorry i will try not to snore but woh mere haath me nahi hai na, haan lekin sirf jab thaki rahati hu tabhi hota hai" she replied still avoiding to face him

he felt that she was not comfortable and decided to let it go "okay thik hai" he moved to bed and closed light and both slept

This time sumo didn't snore much and both slept peacefully

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Morning 6.30 AM shraman's room

Sumo came back from her jogging as per her daily routine and entered to room, shravan was sleeping peacefully on his tummy with slightly open mouth

she shook her head in dismay "ab tak so rahe hai lad sahab, pata nahi kab exercise karta hai, subah subah uthana chahiye nahi lekin enako to sona hai?" she thought and moved toward couch and started removing her shoes

"Shravan please, utho kitane der tak sote ho already 7 baj rahe hai" she whined and moved toward him but as expected he was unaffected by her call

"are yaar kaise uthau es qutubminar ko, etana gigantic hai ki mein agar use shake bhi karu to kuchh pata bhi nahi chalega, aise so raha hai jaise salon se nahi soya ho?" she murmured under breath, and poke her index finger on his shoulder which was so negligible for him just like some feather, "Good Morning Sumo" he opened half eyes and wished her with cute smile but in next moment turned his face to other side and snuggled more into the pillow

"uff yaar kya karu mein esaka, ensan ko morning me uthake thoda exercise karani chahiye lekin en mahashay ko dekhiye kumbhakaran ki tarah so rahe hai? fat hota to at least yeh to bol sakati thi ke fit hone ke liye karo but don't know how he managed all those 6 packs and all without any exercise, mere hi palle bandhana tha ese bhagwan" she started muttering while looking toward ceiling and with her raised hands

"ahem ahem, sumo how do you know i have 6 packs?" his sudden response startled her, she moved her gaze from ceiling to him and scene in front of her were enough to pop out her eyes from their socket.

He was all awake and sat on the bed wrapping his hands around his folded legs and staring her with his most famous smirk playing on his lip, she turned into deep shade of red and wish the ground would swallow you up as unable to face him more, he wiggled his brow while waiting for her reply "umm nahi to....mein...mein...kab....tumhe dekha rahi thi...woh...woh.. haan tumhe misunderstanding hui hogi" she stammered

"ohh really Mrs Malhotra, agar muze misunderstanding hui hoti to why would you have stammered huh?" he raised his brow mischievously

"i was not stammering, aur ab utho jaldi ready ho jao see what is the time?" she tried to pretend cool as a cucumber but failed miserably as her chicks betrayed her and behaved in the exact way which he want...

he was about to reply when he realized what she was wearing "sumo!!!" he squawked, sumo stared him confusingly "have you went for jogging?" he was stupefied by seeing her in jogging suit

sumo was in puzzle with his reaction, she just watched her clothes as if something there or what which made him to react in this way but there was nothing so she again moved her gaze to him

"Sumo are you out of your mind?" he chided her

"what the hell why you are shouting on me?" she retorted annoyingly

"to aur kya karu stupid koi ladki apani shadi ke pahale hi din subah 5 baje uthake jogging ke liye jaati hai kya?" he whined and slumped on bed holding his head in between his hands

"what you are ....." she stopped as she realized what gaffe she did, her eyes went round and she just stared him for solution

"ab muze kya ghoor rahi ho sochana chahiye tha na ki as per our family kal hum logo ki suhagrat thi, koi tumhe aise dekh lega to kya sochega? har waqt apani sumoness dikhana jaroori hota hai kya?" he was really annoyed and at the same time tensed on her act

when she heard him something striked her "haan dekh liya maa ne..." she gasped and clasped her mouth with both hands and his eyes came out from sockets and his mouth turned into complete O

"IF SHE DOESN'T SCARE THE HELL OUT OF YOU A LITTLE, SHE IS NOT THE ONE"

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Okay so finally done with it i know it's small one as compared with my earlier updates. Please vote , comment and share if you like this update , i really love to know your reactions through the comments

So about the story as i said i am really not satisfied with the response which made me to come to some conclusion so here i have 3 choices, please help me deciding in between them

1. End this story in next 1-2 updates

2. Continue with real slow but large update

3. continue with small updates but almost weekly or in 10 days

Let me know what you think but yeah still it depends on response.

Thank you so much who all following this story from day 1 and for 10k reads

P.S. please pardon me for mistakes and spelling errors

Till then Take care

Priti


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