I Live You ...

By TheWhistlingThrush

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•1st Runner Up at DevAkshi Awards 2017• Highest rank #97 in Fanfiction (on 5.7.17) Catch Devakshi fall in lov... More

The Introduction
A constant irritant
A comedy of 'terrors'
The coffee cure
Towards a new friendship ...
MISADVENTURES #1
Misadventures #2
A walk through hearts
A Bizarre Encounter
The Journey
At the Taj
This is love
New Cover
Something's burning
Bewdeshwari😉😉
Headboy!!!
Baarish☁☁☁☁
Trouble!!Trouble!!
Heartache💔
Birthday Bash
Party time
Maa & Dadi
The Fiction Awards 2017
Farewell Party
The Diary
Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
11 years later
The last ray of hope
Behind the bars
Revelations & Realisations
The Lunch Date
Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Gaye
The cute agreements❤
The forced 'I Love You' ❤
Phas Gaye!!
Bhoot aaya!!😎
Dekho rootha na karo
Supporting each other
Balancing on hope
Towards the climax
The E-mail
I Live you!
Rings of love
Rang of Henna
Singing our saga
Singing our saga #2
Help & Acknowledgements
Yeh laal ishq
Epilogue
Something good is gonna happen
'The awaited good'
Won an award?!!
Smile
Bonus - •The Original Draft•

The unbreakable knot

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By TheWhistlingThrush

After an extremely tiring Haldi ceremony Sona had come to wash away the yellow paste from her body. The ceremony was going on perfectly when crazy Elena came up with a super crazy plan & converted a normal tameezdar Haldi ceremony into a Holi party. Sona was so fed up after removing the Haldi that she won't like to listen to any word that starts with H.

Dev: Hello Mrs.  Dixit

Sona: Dev? What are you doing here? Did you climb the pipe to reach my room? Awww... That's so sweet

Dev: Oh Madam! I simply came from the main door! There was no one downstairs so no one noticed me

Sona: By the way Mr Dixit don't you know that you are not supposed to move out of the house after this ceremony?

Dev: After this ceremony... Bua Maa said that I can't go after this ceremony the ceremony isn't over yet.

That was when Sona noticed that Dev had still some turmeric paste applied on his cheeks & hands.

Sona: Ye kya hai?  (What is this?)

Dev: Nothing much just raw material to complete the ceremony

Sona: Look...  The ceremony is over here you may leave

Dev: Not now! I'm still left....

Before Sona could register what he was saying Dev pulled her close & rubbed her cheeks against his. Leaving the stains of his Haldi on her. He joined the tip of his nose with hers leaving a cute spot there. All this while their eyes were locked with each others.

Bijoy: Shona beta!!!

Dev:Are Baap re the Baap is here..... 

Dev rushed out of the house in a frenzy.

Bijoy: Koi aaya tha kya?

Sona: Just a jabra doggy!!!!
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Elena: Sooonaaaaaa

Sona: Kaan Phad de mera

Elena: Barat aa gayi...  They have come...  Dev has come!!! 

Sona stood up ... She was still not ready but the excitement in her bubbled up &  she got up & did the famous Michael Jackson OOWW

Sona: I am a disco dancer

Elena: ting ting ti ting

Sona: zindagi mera gaana Mai kisi ka deewana to jhumo to nacho aao mere sang nacho gao

Asha: Sit down Sona! You are not even ready

Dadi: Let her Asha!!! She's too happy

Sona: Maa...  UP wala thumka lagaon Ke hero jaise Nach ke dikhao...  MUMMMYY!!!  Nach ke dikhao billo Nach ke dikhao ...

Elena: Nach ke dikhao gori nach ke dikhao

Sona: Sang sang tujhe bhi nachau ki hero jaise naach ke dikhao

Asha: Nacho nacho...  Let Dev come I'll tell him to marry someone else because Sona is busy dancing

Sona: Noooo!

Sona sat down & got ready in her maroon bridal lehnga.

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It was time for Sonakshi to descend the stairs & give the final touch to her fairy tale. In front of her stood her Prince Charming with a garland in his hand.

Sona ascended the stage where Dev stood filled with pride. The beauty in front of him had chosen him for herself. He indeed was the luckiest guy on Earth.

The garlands were exchanged. In any regular wedding these days it's almost a tradition to keep your head held high so that your partner faces problem in making you wear the garland. It's a mark of showing that who will dominate in the relationship but if the bond is as unique as DevAkshi's it wasn't the dominance but it was the submission that the two fought for. Each one wanted to bow their heads as low as possible to show their submission for each other. Their respective parents gushed because they knew their kids had found the perfect match.

The ceremonies went on with the couple sitting in front of the fire listening to the holy hymns which will seal their bond forever.

Vicky: I'm sorry Elena...  I know I don't deserve you...  I won't bother you any more! May you find the right match who'll keep you happy

Vicky & Elena were standing along with all the guests & were witnessing DevAkshi taking their wedding vows

Elena: Great! I deserve better

Vicky pressed his lips tightly against each other he felt it was time to give up on Elena

Elena: I want a man who can understands me, cares for me, helps me rise & guides me. I want to be loved. I want the right man & I don't see it in the present form of yours

Vicky: Present form?

Elena: I give you another chance THE LAST ONE prove that you can be the best for me ... Give me reasons to trust you...  It's the very last chance Vicky if you lose it ... I'll kill you! Because even I can't get over you. 

In midst of the crowd Vicky got excited & took Elena in a bone crushing hug.

Elena: Slow down!!!

No one noticed this small confession except Karan. He had long ago realised that although Elena was her sweet jovial self in front of him her eyes only looked for Vicky & had distanced himself from her. He was waiting for the right girl, when this beautiful girl came & tripped near him. Their eyes met & sparks flew Karan's heart fluttered & shouted SHE IS THE ONE...  She was a simplesweety...  She was Tanvi

Pandit ji gave Dev the vermilion to apply in Sona's hair partition. Once again by filling her parting Dev completed Sona's soul. As if his existence was never meant to be without her. The mangalsutra that was tied around her neck screamed that now nothing can go wrong

With 7 pheras & 7 vows they submitted themselves to each other. Eyes filled with the tears of joy,  lips curved into a satisfied smile... they never looked so good.

They were married earlier also but these rituals strengthened their bond, binding them into an unbreakable knot.

Finally it was time for Sonakshi to face the biggest dilemma of her life. Should she be happy for finally getting married to the love of her life or should she be sad because this was the official end of her maiden life. It was time for her to bid good bye to everyone. Her family was expanding it included her in laws too this time. Though she won't get to live with her mother anymore she knew that she will always be her darling daughter & the distance between the two houses could never be enough to separate her from her family.

With tear filled eyes Sona's bidaai happened. She stepped into a new life. When she reached her new home & kicked the kalash full of rice she kick started a new responsibility. With the red color of her feet marking the floor of the Dixit mansion she promised to bring new colours to the lives of the people in that home.

It was time to witness Kuch rang Pyar Ke Aise Bhi

It was time to become Mrs. Sonakshi Bose Dixit in all true sense

PRECAP - YE LAAL ISHQ!!!!

THAT WILL BE THE LAST EPISODE & IT WILL BE POSTED TOMORROW & IF NOT TOMORROW THEN ON WEDNESDAY

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