I Live You ...

By TheWhistlingThrush

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•1st Runner Up at DevAkshi Awards 2017• Highest rank #97 in Fanfiction (on 5.7.17) Catch Devakshi fall in lov... More

The Introduction
A constant irritant
A comedy of 'terrors'
The coffee cure
Towards a new friendship ...
MISADVENTURES #1
Misadventures #2
A walk through hearts
A Bizarre Encounter
The Journey
At the Taj
This is love
New Cover
Something's burning
Bewdeshwari😉😉
Headboy!!!
Baarish☁☁☁☁
Trouble!!Trouble!!
Heartache💔
Birthday Bash
Party time
Maa & Dadi
The Fiction Awards 2017
Farewell Party
The Diary
Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
11 years later
The last ray of hope
Behind the bars
Revelations & Realisations
The Lunch Date
Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Gaye
The cute agreements❤
The forced 'I Love You' ❤
Phas Gaye!!
Bhoot aaya!!😎
Dekho rootha na karo
Supporting each other
Balancing on hope
Towards the climax
The E-mail
I Live you!
Rang of Henna
Singing our saga
Singing our saga #2
Help & Acknowledgements
The unbreakable knot
Yeh laal ishq
Epilogue
Something good is gonna happen
'The awaited good'
Won an award?!!
Smile
Bonus - •The Original Draft•

Rings of love

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By TheWhistlingThrush

At Bose House

Juhi : Sona Dev se naraz hai ... Dev se Sona se naraz hai... Ele Vicky se naraz hai... Vicky Ele se ... Ye sab aaj karna zaroori hai kya?

Elena: Vicky be wajah gussa hai...  I have done nothing ... NOTHING

Juhi: It's not about you Elena! It's about DevAkshi...  It's their engagement today & look at them muh fula ke baithe hain dono
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At Dixit Mansion

Jatin: What do you guys think of yourself bolo? You will fight & Juhi & I will act like fire extinguishers!! Say sorry to your partners
Vicky: Sorry Jatin but uss Dr. Karan ko yaha bulane ki kya zaroorat thi use? Elena ne notice kia ki wo kaise dekhta hai usse

Dev who was standing in a corner took an apple & chewed on it like nothing had happened.

Dev: Pyaar se dekhna kehte hain use Vicky! Tu to Ele ko aise dekhta hai Vicky jaise kha jaayega tu use.

Jatin: It's not about them. It's about you & Sona. You guys are fighting on the day of your engagement!!
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Sona: Ladti nahi to aur kya karti Juhi! Maine sirf itna Kaha tha ki we will play nineties wedding songs in our wedding dance performances & he said ki nahi hum aaj kal ke gaane use karenge

Elena: Ye koi ladne wali baat nahi thi. Gussa to mujhe aa raha hai.  Vicky is behaving as if I...  I am cheating on him... Karan is a good friend & I can't ignore him because of Vicky's assumptions.

Juhi: Why are you getting affected Elena?  Vicky is no one for you na?
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Jatin: Your fight is baseless Dev

Dev: Dekh Jatin...  Shaadi hai meri gaane to meri marzi ke bajenge
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Sona: Meri shaadi hai...  Dev ko to court marriage karke hi saari satisfaction mil gayi thi...  It was I who wanted a big fat Indian wedding...  So technically it's my marriage & I will decide which songs will be played. THAT'S IT!
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Far away from all this, outside Birla Mandir Bijoy was waiting for Ishwari! Ishwari had told him to meet her at the backside of the temple. She had called him to discuss something really serious but Bijoy who was living in his own LA LA land was assuming romantic reasons for the meeting & was merrily singing
Maa ka phone aaya Maa ka phone aaya
& when a passer by looked at him with eyes full of suscipsion on his sanity he said
Meri Maa ka phone Teri Maa ka phone sabki Maa ka phone...
Just then Ishwari made an entry. Her face didn't have any joy on seeing Bijoy

Bijoy: Ishu!! Aakhirkaar tum aa hi gayi mere pass Ishu

Ishwari: Chup kar pagal do rang ke baal wale buddhe

Bijoy became conscious of his looks

Ishwari: Tu Sonakshi ko apni beti manta hai na?

Bijoy: Haa

Ishwari: Good even I love Dev like my own son.

Bijoy: Waah Ishu you have learnt English.

Ishwari: Jungle's gorillas taught me everything. That is not the point. The children are married. Uss rishte se hum samdhi-samdhan huye! Dare you create any trouble because of your monkey like tactics in the life of my beta-bahu

Bijoy: Pyaar chup nahi sakta lakh chupane se

Ishwari: Dekh! If you try messing up with me I'll not spare you. Tera Bi aur joy alag kar dungi. Samjha kya?

Ishwari didn't wait for a response from Bijoy & moved away holding the edge of her sari.

Ishwari's sad background tune Oho-Oho -Ohhhoho, played in the background.

Before leaving the premises of the temple's backyard Ishwari ordered Bijoy

Ishwari: Aaj se I'll call you Bhai Saheb & you'll call me anything but not Ishu!

She walked away with her declaration leaving behind Bijoy who's heart broke yet again.

Bijoy: Mai to tumhe ab se 'wo Ishwari Dixit' hi bolunga. Bewafa nikli Ishwari! Ishwari Dixit Bewafa hai
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It was time for the Boses & their relatives to leave for Dixit Mansion. They had to reach there by 7:30. The rings would be exchanged at dot 8 pm. Everyone was getting ready for Sona's big day but what was Sona doing?

Sona: Ele bas ho gaya na aur kitna makeup?

Elena: Shut up & straighten up Sonakshi! I will do whatever I want to if you don't want to look like a ghost keep quiet.

Elena was busy giving Sona the final touch up for the day.  Asha came into the room looking for Sonakshi. 

Asha: Sona... Shona are you ready?

Sonakshi got up & turned around. Asha got emotional looking at her daughter who looked no less than a princess in her pink anarkali with golden work on it. Elena had neatly rolled her hair into a side bun. She was the first witness of DevAkshi's love story & had noticed how Dev looked lovingly at that strand of Sona's hair which fell on her face so she purposely kept it loose & let it fall on her face. Sona's jewels glittered but their shine couldn't match with the glow of her face. Just then Dadi entered the room

Dadi: Kitni sundar lag rahi hai Humari Sonakshi...  Ek kaam karo

Elena: Nazar na lagne ke liye tikka laga dun?

Dadi: Na Baba! Ek selfie khicho to!!

After the praising session got over the ladies descended down the stairs & joined everyone to leave for Dixit Mansion. Karan, being a friend of SoLena (😂) was a part of the ladki walas, when he saw Elena he couldn't control himself & complimented her

Karan: You look stunning Elena!

Elena smiled feebly.

Elena: Thanks & so do you. Chalein?

Karan: After you
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Dev who had got ready by now in his golden sherwani was getting desperate to see Sonakshi. He thought of video calling her. Sonakshi who was in the car with Asha, Bijoy & Elena didn't find it an appropriate place to pick his phone up disconnected the call & left a whatsapp message for him

"Car me hu...  Can't pick up your call"

Dev was quick to reply

" So you'll make your prannath wait?"

"Prannath!!  I thought we got over this phase long back!!"

"We didn't
Chalo send me your pic I want to see how my wife is looking"

"Would be wife"

"Not technically"

"Fine wait"

When Sonakshi was about to send a picture of hers to him she remembered that they had a fight in the morning & Dev had still not agreed to play her choice of songs in the functions. She typed a reply instead

"I forgot ki we had fought in the morning say sorry or else I'll not send the pics"

Dev who had got excited on the sound of a notification alert from his phone sulked on seeing her reply

"Mai kyu bolu sorry"

"Then keep on waiting Mr Dixit...  It'll take 20 minutes to reach your house"

"Fine. Mai bhi koi mara nahi jaa raha hu!"

"Grand!! Happy waiting"

She went offline & chuckled imagining his expressions now.  Elena looked at her then smiled seeing her behavior. Sona composed herself

On the other hand, Jatin came to tell Dev that the guests had started arriving & he should be down in the hall by now. Dev dragged his feet like a reluctant school kid who didn't want to go to school. Only if Sona would have send her picture he would have enjoyed the ceremony till now.

Jatin & Juhi were wearing green & looked good together. They were busy in attending the guests & Dev had to sit on that big thrown like chair & get bored

(To find a picture of Jatin is so difficult on the internet😅)

Finally the Bose family arrived & Dev got stunned looking at Sonakshi's beauty. He felt proud that she was all his.

Even Sona's Masi & Mesho looked amazing

When the Boses entered Dadi & Maa (Ishu)  came face to face. Dadi quickly fled at her sight. Another ignore game was on between Vicky & Elena.

Sona was made to sit beside Dev. Although they wanted to speak to each other but the guests kept disturbing them. Many of their old school friends had arrived which included Nikki, Riya, Neha, Bunty. Even Sona's Sourabh Dada had arrived. Vicky's parents Radha Rani & Baldev Tripathi were busy chatting with Dev's parents. The ones who were free were busy taking selfies with DevAkshi

Every time Dev tried speaking to Sona she started singing 90's wedding numbers. Dev looked for his friends to help him out but Vicky was busy giving death glares to Elena. Vicky & Karan had both turned out in white & were complimenting Elena. Finally the  Devrath Dixit took charge of the situation himself he got up & stood in the centre of the hall. He told the DJ to play lyrical version of Enna Sona coz he wanted to sing that song for his Sona

Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya
Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya (*2)

Aavan jaavan te mai yaara nu manavan (*2)

Enna Sona
Enna Sona
Ooo

As the music played Dev pulled Sona towards him & made her dance. In moments when both of them looked into each others eyes Sona's anger vanished

Kol hove te sekh lagada ae
Dur jaave te dil jalda ae
Kedi aag naal rab ne banaya rab ne banaya rab ne banaya

Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya
Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya
Aavan jaavan te mai yaara nu
Manava(*2)

Enna Sona (*3)
Ooo

In between the hall, amongst the guests Dev bent down on his knees & made Sona wear the ring. Sona too exchanged the ring then & their. The claps that thundered around them was an echo of how their hearts fluttered.

Tap lage na katti jandani da
Saari Raati mai oos chidkawa
Kinne darda naal rab na banaya, rab na banaya, rab ne banaya

Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya
Enna Sona kyu rab ne banaya
Aava jaavan te mai yaara nu manava(*2)

Enna Sona(*3)
Oooo

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Precap- Mehendi-Sangeet. What do you think whose choice of songs will play?

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