I Live You ...

By TheWhistlingThrush

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•1st Runner Up at DevAkshi Awards 2017• Highest rank #97 in Fanfiction (on 5.7.17) Catch Devakshi fall in lov... More

The Introduction
A constant irritant
A comedy of 'terrors'
The coffee cure
Towards a new friendship ...
MISADVENTURES #1
Misadventures #2
A walk through hearts
A Bizarre Encounter
The Journey
At the Taj
This is love
New Cover
Something's burning
Bewdeshwari😉😉
Headboy!!!
Baarish☁☁☁☁
Trouble!!Trouble!!
Heartache💔
Birthday Bash
Party time
Maa & Dadi
The Fiction Awards 2017
Farewell Party
The Diary
Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
11 years later
The last ray of hope
Behind the bars
Revelations & Realisations
The Lunch Date
Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Gaye
The cute agreements❤
The forced 'I Love You' ❤
Phas Gaye!!
Bhoot aaya!!😎
Dekho rootha na karo
Supporting each other
Towards the climax
The E-mail
I Live you!
Rings of love
Rang of Henna
Singing our saga
Singing our saga #2
Help & Acknowledgements
The unbreakable knot
Yeh laal ishq
Epilogue
Something good is gonna happen
'The awaited good'
Won an award?!!
Smile
Bonus - •The Original Draft•

Balancing on hope

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LB: Such a hectic day it is!!

Elena: Indeed Aunty

LB & Elena were the last ones to leave the house. Sona's seniors had reasoned with her that the hillsmen will never believe that a treatment up here will be as effective as that in the plains. To make her seniors reconcile she had to change their mindset at any cost & for that she had to do something. So she decided to organize a medical camp offered by Dev's company of course, where she along with some other doctors would diagnose patients who'll attend their camp for just 5 rupees. They didn't make it free 'cause free things are not valued, so to add some value & respect to this motion Sona decided to charge just 5 rupees which was almost free. After a drive of 10 minutes LB & Ele reached the camp

Ele: What's the good news?

Dev: Koi nahi aaya subah se...  Sona baithi hai waha akele...  I don't know how to cheer her up

Elena went towards Sona

Elena: Eh Sona... 

Sona: Hmm

Elena: Log aayenge yaar bas tu tension na le

Sona: Mai kaise tension lungi jab meri ye pagali se friend hai na mera mood thik karne ke liye

Elena: That's like my good girl

Jatin: Kya baahein chal rahi hain?

Jatin & Juhi had gone to bring refreshments for the patients, attendants & doctors

Vicky: Kya laaye?Kya laaye khane ke liye?

Dev: Gaon basa nahi bhikhari pehle aa gaye

Vicky narrowed his eyes & glared at Dev.

Dev:Mazak kar raha hu bhai

Dev patted his back. Elena saw Vicky bonding with the rest & didn't want to spoil their mood so she left that place & went to help LB with some arrangements. Juhi followed her.

Juhi: Koi problem?

Elena: No

Juhi: Everyone deserves a second chance Ele... Vicky too..

Before Juhi could complete her sentence Elena walked past her. Juhi looked back at the rest of the group & made a sad face

Vicky: Bahut tedhi kheer hai ye ladki...  Waise kheer se yaad aaya khane me kya hai?

Sona: Aren't you dieting? Jatin to keh raha tha ki you are surviving on protein shake

Vicky: Woh...  Elena bahut tension de rahi hai mujhe to stress hota hai & stress se bahut bhook lagti hai

Dev: Tujhe bhook lagne & nahi lagne me difference Pata chalta bhi hai? Bhookad of the first order.

Everyone had a good laugh but Sona just smiled feebly. Her eyes were fixed on the road ahead. "Hard luck Dr.  Bose ... I doubt ki ab koi aayega.
bhi...  We are sitting here since the past one hour & not even a stray rabbit has come here. I guess I am asking for too much" Sona's thoughts were turning pessimistic.

Dev: Don't sit like this Ms. Kharghosh

Sona: Kharghosh?

Dev: Yes Kharghosh...  Ab I won't wait for something big to happen to give you a nickname

Sona: OK Mr. Aubhodro!

Dev: Look at the brighter side of the fact that no one is coming

Sona:Accha!?! What is it? May I know? 

Sona held her face in her hand & her elbow was resting on the arm of the chair on which she was sitting. She looked straight into Dev's eyes

Dev: Pehle to meri eyes me aise mat Dekho I'll forget what I have to say

Sona laughed at this statement. It had been a long while since she laughed whole heartedly. Her ear-rings swayed in perfect sync with the soft breeze.

Sona:Bolo bhi

Dev who was still lost in Sona didn't get what she was saying & continued staring at her face until she snapped her fingers in front of her face

Dev: I was saying that till the time someone comes let's at least sort Vicky & Elena's matter.

Sona nodded & got up to fulfill mission Velena

Dev sat back staring at her retreating figure. She was going to fetch Elena to kick start their plan. " Ajeeb ladki hai. She is suffering silently but is eager to help others... Auron ko to har dam sayaa deta hai wo dhoop me hai khada khud magar...  The line suits her perfectly... Even if the situations are unfavorable but I'm damn sure Sonakshi that you'll succeed... We'll succeed together" Dev thought

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Elena: Sona kahan hai tu? This is strange she has sent me back to Suman Aunty's house to help her bring something important that she has left here but where is she herself?  Let me check upstairs
...
...

Yahan pe bhi koi nahi hai

Elena was standing at the threshold of DevAkshi's flat. She turned around to go back when something hard fell on her head

Vicky: Surprise surprise!!

Elena looked at Vicky first & then at the things that had fallen on her head.  A stethoscope, few syringes & numerous medicines had fallen on her head

Elena: May I know what nonsense is this?

Vicky: Pasand nahi aaya tujhe

Elena: Idiot can't you see that it has hurt me?

Vicky: Woh... I thought that you are a doctor to tujhe flowers ki jagah ye sab pasand aayega

Elena: Seriously? Aatein kahan se aise ideas tumhare dimaag me

Vicky looked at Elena with innocence & then mumbled under his breath "Dev had said that do something which Elena loves & I heard her saying that she loves her profession...  Ye to ulta hi ho gaya"

Elena: Did you say something?

Vicky: No not at all

Elena: Good. I am going

Vicky: Elena ruk to yaar! Sun to Sahi

Suddenly out of no where they heard a guitar being played

Elena: What is this now?

DevAkshi were standing in the backyard of the house & Dev was playing a guitar. Sona whispered

Sona : Do you think are plan would be working?  Vicky ne mana lia hoga na Ele ko?  Abhi Sahi time hai na gaane play karne ka

Dev: I don't know Sona but romantic songs always help. Even if they won't have reunited this song will help

Hasi chahta hu
Khushi chahta hu
Tere sang yun zindagi chahta hu

Sona joined him

Teri hi sada main ban ke rahu
Tu hai sabse badhkar ab ye kahu
Har pal tu har jagah mere saath hai
Kaise kahu
Tu kitna mere pass hai

Dev pressed his head against Sonakshi's & stared into her eyes lovingly

Ke mujhme mujhse zyaada hai
Tu mujhme mujhse zyaada hai
Tu mujhme mujhse zyaada hai

To disturb their momentum one after the other a lot of things fell on their heads...

Dev: What is this syringes & medicines?

Sona: & a stethoscope too!!!

They didn't had to think much as Elena who had thrown all of this shouted from their balcony

Elena: Sona, Dev tum log Vicky ki side ho gaye!!  Now you two too get lost I don't want to see anyone of you

Sona: Ye to lene ke dene pad gaye

Dev: You gave her all this Vicky? You are impossible!!!

Just then, Lady Bacchon called Sona

LB: Hello Sonakshi!!! There is a patient waiting for you

Sona: Really!!  Aami Aaa... Sorry I mean I'm coming

Sona disconnected the call & dragged Dev along with her, leaving Vicky behind

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Sona: There you go!

Patient's mom: Thank you doctor saheb... Matlab Doctor Didi ...

Sona: It was just a normal wound ... Nothing major...  You don't need to thank me

A kid had fallen from a height & had rolled inside a valley to some distance. He got many bruises & had some wounds. Sona just needed to do some dressing but this was the only person who came to her camp & she was super happy and was filled with hope again.

Prevap - Towards the climax

The kind of support you guys are showing post the leap is leaving me overwhelmed!! Thank you so so much

Also,
Tell me what would you guys want -
An epilogue kind of a chapter which be of one episode
Or
A Thoda sa extension of the ff with proper DevAkshi marriage filled with IshJoy moments ...

I can do only one out of the two options because each will lead to a different kind of ending so Jaldi Jaldi reply

Thanks!!!

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