IT HURTS A LOT (COMPLETED)

By Ohheyythereee

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In this story there is misunderstanding between manik and nandini... that's why there are not together.... na... More

Prologue
chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5(A)
Chapter 5(B)
Chapter 6(A)
new story update
Chapter 6 (B)
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Promo
Chapter 21
new os update
Chapter-22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28 YEH LAAL ISHQ
Chapter 29
Promo
Chapter 30
LAST PART (A)
LAST PART(B)
EPILOGUE...

Chapter 31

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By Ohheyythereee

Sorry guys... This is next part... Then is last part (A)

Soon everyone left for villa...

They all were sitting in the hall n partying for sucess.. Praising each other n also nandini...

It was late night...

Manik:Guys ab party bohot hogayi... Let's go to sleep.. Waisey vi kal time sey uthnaa hain..

Cabir:Time sey..?? Y..??

Manik:We hv a flight for Mumbai..

Mukti:Mumbai..??

Manik:Haa mumbai.. U forget we belong frm mumbai..

Mukti:Arrey i knw that bt itni jaldi wapas..

Manik:Toh aur kyaa.. Puri life yahi issi ghar mey bitaaney kaa irada hain kya..?? Aur waisey v jis kaam k liye aaye they its completed so..

Rohan:So u decided bas chalejaana hain... Common manik be here for some more time naa... Waisey v i was thinking for some promotional events...

Manik:see i respect u bt try to understand we came over here leaving so many so many works n now we need to complete that.. N raha promotional event ki baat to jis din events hongey jst inform our schedule we will fly over here..

Rohan:Choti yeh toh meri baat maaney sey raha tum hi kaho naa..

Nandu:Jisko jaana hain let them go vai...waisey v ek naa ek din jaana hi hain naa..

Cabir: did u guyz fought..?? I mean interview k time v manik was answering quite strangely n now nandini..

Manik:Kya honaa hain..?? Kuch v toh nahi.. M going to sleep.. Kal subah 8 am ki flight hain get ready..

Cabir:Tuney booking v karli..??

Manik:Hmm.. Saying this manik left

Everyone turned toward nandini...

Cabir:Kya hua hain..??

Nandu:Manik ney bolaa toh kuch v nahi hua.. U guyz go n sleep .. Kal subah flight hain naa.. Goodnight...

Everyone went to their room.. As it was late night so maddy also slept at their place only...

It was morning now.. Everyone were in hall with their bags ready to leave...

Bt still nandini was not there to bid a final bye..

Rohan:Aaj hi jaana jaroori hain kyaa..??

Manik:Sorry bt...

Rohan:Hmmm..

Cabir:Nandini niche nahi aai...

Rohan:Haa.. Woh may be she couldn't see u guyz leaving so..

Cabir:Hmm..

Manik:Lets go guyz...

Everyone then came out... The driver was putting the luggage in the car... While all were jst standing..

Manik was constantly looking toward nandini's room with a ray of hope that at least she would come to see him for last time or to stop him bt still all in vein she didn't show up...

manik pov:

tum yahi chaahti thi naa nandini ki main yaha se chalaa jaau so m going.. i hope u r happy now...??

end of pov...

Driver:Samman sab rakh diyaa hain.. Aap sab v gaadi mey baith jaaye humney nikalnaa hain...

Everyone sat in the car..

Here in nandini's room.. Nandini was hiding behind the curtain near window n watch him for the last time...

Pyar hai ya sazaa, Aye mere dil bata,

Toot ta kyon nahi, Dard ka silsila,

Iss pyar mein ho kaise kaise imtihan,

Yeh pyar likhe kaisi dastan,

(Finally the car started.. Manik was crying silently.. While nandu was jst quietly watching him going far away frm her.. Soon the car went away frm her sight..

She then sat on the floor leaning against the wall murmuring"Chala gaya woh.. Chala gaya manik...")

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar

Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

(Maddy came to her room..n saw her sitting on the floor.. Maddy ran toward her n ask her to get bt she refused.. Ao he also sat beside her..

Maddy:Nandu samvaalo apne aapko... Get a grip of urself...

Nandu:Maddy ...manik chala gaya..!!

Maddy:Nandu...!! He gve a helpless look to her..)

Ho pyar hai ya sazaa,Aye mere dil bata,

Toot ta kyon nahi, Dard ka silsila,

Kaisa hai safar waffa ki manzil ka,

Na hai koi hal Dillon ki mushkil ka,

Dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein,

Sansein sansein tooti bandhishein,

Kahin toh har lamha honthon Pe fariyaad hai,

Kissi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai,

(Here in car everyone were sitting sadly as none of them wanted to return bck..

Manik pov:

Yeh kya hogaya.. Pal var mey sab bikhar gaya.. U ruined everything betwn us in a nicest way.. Kyu kiya tumney.. Y u hurted me ... Y did u punished me for being nyonika's son.. Where's my fault that m her son... Kyu chod diya firse tanhaa jiney k liye... Is this the end... Par aisaa kyu lag raha hai still smthg is there.. A truth hidden for me.. Kyu meraa dil baarbaar keh raha hain ki tum jhoot bol rahi ho... The song u sang y i felt u were singing it for me asking me to remember u every time everywhere..

End of POV..)

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

(Here nandini was crying badly.. Maddy was trying his bst to console her..

Maddy:Agar itnaa hi dard horaha hain uske jaaney par toh jaaaney hi kyu diyaa ussey..??

Nandu:Tum jaante ho naa i hv no option left rather than letting him go away frm me...

Maddy:Really.. N u think doing this will keep him happy..

Nandu:Happy toh woh nahi hain... I knw he is in pain par dheere dheere samvaal legaa...main khudko uski aadat nahi banney deysakti thi..

Maddy:Nandu ek baari ussey apni problems share karke toh dekho...

Nandu:Tum kyaa chaahte ho maddy k main usske paas jaau n kahu ki manik m dying.. Bohot jald mar rahi hu...

Maddy:Nandu tumsey kisne kehdiyaa that u r dying..??

Nandu:Maddy tum jaantey ho naa doctors ney kya kaha.. My right side is slowly getting paralyzed.. fir atlast my whole body will get paralyzed n than my internal external everypart will stop working along with heart.. N once my heart stops working fir toh...!!Wahi they naa tum fir vi puch rahe ho...!!

Maddy:Doctor said still there is 1 percent chance of ur survival..

Nandu:Yaa right 1 percent.. Do u think iss 1percent sey i will survive.. No naa.. Toh fir agar ek naa ek din mujhe manik ko chodkar jaana hi hain toh y not today.. Jitni der main manik k saath rehti utni takleef hogi judai par... So its better to hurt him by lie that's y i asked for ur help.. That's y i asked u to pretend kissing me infront of manik..taaki manik ko nafrat ho mujhse.. N then he can move on...)

Koi na sune sisakti aahon ko,

Koi na dharre tadapti baahon ko,

Aadhi aadhi poori khwahishein,

Tooti phooti sab farmaishein,

Kahin shak hai kahin nafrat ki deewar hai,

Kahin jeet mein bhi shaamil pal pal haar hai,

The car reached airport.. Everyone took out their luggage while manik was jst lost in himself...

Manik pov:

Kya nandini kaa kaha maan kar main firse koi galti kar raha hu.. Y hv u made everything so difficult once again...

Manik trance was broken by dhruv's voice..

Dhruv:Buddy kaha khoyaa hua hain... Chal airport aagaya hain..

Manik:Hmmm.. Saying this he came out of the car...)

Ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

Ho ya rabba, de de koi jaan bhi agar,

Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar,

All of them entered the airport n sitting in waiting area...

Manik was still lost in his thoughts..

No manik tu aisey nahi jaa saktaa.. Firsey wahi galti nahi dohoraa saktaa..Firsey puri baat jaaney bagair aisey toot kar nahi jaa saktaa.. Firse apni pyaar ko itnaa kamzor nahi soch saktaa.. U knw nandini aisi ladki nahi hain.. There's smthg u need to knw... Not again nandini iss baari tumhe akelaa nahi chodungaa... M coming...!!

Saying this he ran frm there..

His frnds were shouting n asking where was he going bt he rushed quickly..

Ho Pyar hai ya sazaa,Aye mere dil bata,

Toot ta kyon nahi, Dard ka silsila Ho-o,

Here nandini once again started to cry badly...

She then got fainted...

Maddy shouted for rohan... He came in the room n found nandini in such state... They both were trying to wake her up bt all in vein.. She didn't even responsed little..

They then rushed her to hospital...

Na pooch dard mandon se,

Hansi kaissi khushi kaissi,

Musibat sar pe rehti hai,

Kabhi kaissi kabhi kaissi,

Manik took a taxi n rushed to the villa...

In no time he reached n rang the bell.. A servant opened the door..

Ho rabba, rabba,

Rabba ho-o-o,

Ho-o-o rabba.

Serv:Sir aap yaha..?? Kuch saman chut gayi hain kyaa..??

Manik:Nahi.. Woh mujhe kuch kaam thaa..

Serv: par ghar par toh koi v nahi hain... Rohan baba aur maddy baba nandini babyji ko lekar hospital gaye hai...

Manik:Hospital..!! Par kyu..?? Nandini thik toh hain naa...

Serv: pataa nahi.. Woh aaplogo k jaaney k thodi hi der k baad babyji behos hogayi thi.. Kitni kosis ki fir v hos nahi aaya toh hospital lekar gaye hain...

Manik:Thik hain main dekhtaa hu.. Saying this he left frm there...

He again sat in the taxi n left for hospital...

Manik in no time reached hospital...

Through reception he got to knw abt nandini's room...

Manik rushed toward her room... He entered the room n found maddy n Rohan sitting beside nandini while nandini was still sleeping..

Rohan:Manik tum yaha..??

Manik:Nan...nandini kaisi hain..??

Rohan:Filhaal toh thik hain bas so rahi hain...

Maddy:Par tum toh chaley gaye they naa fir yaha..??

Manik:Woh .. Actually.. Nandini sey kuch baat karni thi so ghar gaya thaa n servant told me sab idhar ho..

Par nandini ko hua kya thaa.. Y is she in hospital..??

Rohan:Haa woh bas faint hogai thi...

Manik:Faint..?? Par kaisey..?? Kuch hua hain nandini ko..?? Doctors ney kya kaha...??

Both rohan n maddy were quite..looking here n there thinking what to tell..!!

Manik:Dono chup kyu hain..? Tell me naa kya hua hain nandini ko..??

Maddy:Woh.. Kuch v nahi ..woh doctors told she fainted coz of weakness.. Thats it..

Manik:Hogaya.. Now tell me the truth.. I knw there's smthg which u both r trying to hide...

Due to manik's loud voice nandu woke up..

Rohan came towards her n asked "Choti uth gayi.. How r u feeling..??"

Bt she was quite n jst staring at manik..

She then finally spoke"Manik... R u in real...??"

Manik then moved towards her n hold her hand to make her sure that he is in real...

Rohan n maddy look at each other n decided to give them some alone time so left the room...

Manik :Nandini.. How r u feeling now..??

Nandu:Much better.. Par tum yaha..?? Tum toh chaley gaye they naa..!!

Manik:Aisey kaisey chala jata.. Iss baar firse wahi galti nahi kar saktaa thaa.. Purey sach jaaney bagair tumhe chod kar nahi jaa sakta thaa...

Nandini:Kaisaa sach..??

Manik:Pls nandini not again.. I knw tumney kal jo v kaha sab jhoot hain... There's smthg u r hiding frm me...

Nandu:Oh god manik plz don't start this again.. I told u yesterday only.. Fir y is it hard for u to accept the truth...!!

Manik:Truth accept karne k liye truth pataa vi honaa chaahiye naa.. Don't u trust me enough to share ur problem.. Kya hum itney dur ho chukey hain ki ab tum mujhse kuch share v nahi kar sakti..

Nandini was silent.. She didn't knw what to tell..

Manik:Chup kyu ho.. For god sake..speak up dammitt... Kuch toh bolo...

Nandini:Kya bolu.. Haa yahi ki bohot jald main khud tumsey dur hojaaungi.. Kya bolu ki m badly sick.. Haa bolo naa what should i tell yahi ki m dying...!!

Manik was totally numb listening all this...

Both of them were staring at each other... Both were in pain..both were in tears..

Manik:Yeh..yeh..k..y..a ke..h rahi ho...!!

Nandu:Manik m dying.. M badly sick.. Doctors ney kaha hain there's very less chances of my survival..

Manik then took her for a bone crushing hug ... Nandu also hugged him bck.. During the hug he was continuously saying"Tumhe kuch nahi hogaa.. I won't let u go far away frm me.. Not this time.."

Manik was sitting beside nandini holding her hand n said..

Manik:Nandini...!!

Nandini:Hmmm...!!

Manik:Y did u lied me yesterday...??

Nandu:I didn't hv any other option manik.. I wanted u to move on.. Main nahi chaahti thii ki mere jaaney k baad tum rotey raho so i thought by creating hatred for me in ur heart will help u forget me n move on.. This was the bst idea that came in my mind..

Manik:Nandini u trust me right..??

Nandu:Kyu tumhe aisaa nahi lagtaa..!!

Manik:Lagtaa hain..!!

Nandu:Toh fir kyu puchaa..

Manik:Bas aisey hi..

Everyone entered her room ... Including fab5 navya too..

Manik :Guyz tum sab yaha..

Cabir:Haa ab jab tu airport sey bin bataaye bhaagaa toh hum v tere piche piche n came here n got to knw abt all this...!!

Manik:Hmm..

Navya:Waisey nandini ab kaisey hain tabyat tumhaari...

Nandini:M fine now..

Manik then went near rohan n ask him to come out..

They both left the room..

Rohan:Haa manik kaho..

Manik:Mujhe doctor sey baat karni hain.. Aap chalogey..

Rohan:Ofcourse.. Waisey v main jaane hi wala thaa.. So chalo.. Both left frm there...

In doctor's cabin..

Manik:Doctor what had exactly happened to nandini..??

Doctor:Dekhiye nandini buri tarikey sey bimaar hai.. Her internal body r not working properly.. Jo bullet ussey lagi thi it had effected her body alot.. Infct unhe pehle v kuch injuries hui thi.. Like mainey nandini sey puchaa thaa abt it n she said ki uska kuch saal pehle accident hua thaa n she was badly injured dat time..

Rohan:Yaa.. Woh car accident hua thaa.. It took alot time for her recovery..

Doctor: Exactly aur uss accident k waqt unka nerves affect hua thaa.. N ab jo bullet lagi thi it had again affected the nerves so her nerves r not working properly.. Jiski wajahse uski body mey blood circulation mey v bohot problem horahi...Dheere dheere unki body kaam karna band kardegi n once her brain n heart stops then u knw ..what i mean to say..

Both were numb at their places.. They didn't knw how to react or what to say.. Finally manik managed to speak..

Manik:So ab kya karna hai.. Like woh theek kaisey hogi..??

Doctor: M scared.. Humey nahi lagtaa hain she can cured... Woh kaafi bimaar hain...

Manik:Aap doctor ho naa.. Aap kaa kaam hota hain patient ki jaan bachana.. Aap aisey kaisey keh saktey hain ki u can't cure her...

Doctor: we understand u bt aap v toh humey samajhney ki kosis kijiye...

Manik:Kya samjhu main.. Haa kyaa..

Rohan:Doctor aap kuch toh karsaktey hain naa..??

Doctor: We can try... Operations karna padega bt bachne k chances will be only 1 percent which is really very less..

Manik:Kab karna hain operation..??

Doctor:After 4 months.. For 3 months hum much medicine prescribe kardenge uske baad for 1 month unhe hospital mey admit karna padega.. Her treatment will be going on in this 1 month n fir operation...

Manik:Hmm..

After some more discussion both of them came out n headed towards nandini's room..

Nandini was sitting on bed n chit chatting with everyone..

Manik went near her n spoke.. "I need to say smthg.."

Cabir:haa bol na..

Manik:Nandini i knw this is not the correct place n time to say this bt will u marry me...??

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