I Live You ...

By TheWhistlingThrush

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•1st Runner Up at DevAkshi Awards 2017• Highest rank #97 in Fanfiction (on 5.7.17) Catch Devakshi fall in lov... More

The Introduction
A constant irritant
A comedy of 'terrors'
The coffee cure
Towards a new friendship ...
MISADVENTURES #1
Misadventures #2
A Bizarre Encounter
The Journey
At the Taj
This is love
New Cover
Something's burning
Bewdeshwari😉😉
Headboy!!!
Baarish☁☁☁☁
Trouble!!Trouble!!
Heartache💔
Birthday Bash
Party time
Maa & Dadi
The Fiction Awards 2017
Farewell Party
The Diary
Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
11 years later
The last ray of hope
Behind the bars
Revelations & Realisations
The Lunch Date
Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Gaye
The cute agreements❤
The forced 'I Love You' ❤
Phas Gaye!!
Bhoot aaya!!😎
Dekho rootha na karo
Supporting each other
Balancing on hope
Towards the climax
The E-mail
I Live you!
Rings of love
Rang of Henna
Singing our saga
Singing our saga #2
Help & Acknowledgements
The unbreakable knot
Yeh laal ishq
Epilogue
Something good is gonna happen
'The awaited good'
Won an award?!!
Smile
Bonus - •The Original Draft•

A walk through hearts

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By TheWhistlingThrush

Devakshi hired an auto rickshaw. The journey was draped in an awkward silence. There was still something going on in Sonakshi's mind which wasn't letting her meet Dev's eyes. Dev was getting restless because of this unusual silence from her side. After a heated debate inside him he decided to ask her

Dev: Sonakshi...

Sona(Still looking down; not lifting her eyes):Hmmm

Dev: Are you feeling uncomfortable?

Sona: No

Dev: Nahi if you feel so tell me

Sona: I'm ok Dev

Dev: If there is any problem you can tell me

Sona: Thanks but I'm fine

Dev: Look if you didn't want me to drop you, you should've told me

Sona: I never said so!!!

Dev: If you are feeling uncomfortable I'll get down you can take the rickshaw

Sona( finally looks up & shouts): BACCHE KI JAAN LOGE KYA? YE KYA UNCOMFORTABLE LAGA RAKHA HAI ... MUJHE NAHI JAANA HOTA TO MAI BOL DETI... ZUBAAN HAI MERE PAAS...DEKHO

Sona sticks her tongue out and Dev starts laughing.

Sona: What Now?

Dev: What what ? Can't I even laugh

Sona: Nahi haso zor zor se haso ravan ki tarah haso gabbar ki tarah haso... bolo HAHAHA

Dev: Why should I?

Dev sits quietly

Sona: Now why are you sitting quietly?

Dev: What is it Sonakshi? What do you want? You girls are so confusing. You .....

Sona(Cuts him off): I am confusing! I am confusing!

Dev: Yes YOU are confusing.

Sona: If I am confusing then you are ... you are ... yes ... Mr. Devrath Dixit Tumi eakdum IMPOSSIBLE... You are one rude person... Mr. Obhodro!

Dev: Sonakshi I could understand from your behavior the very first day that you are not from this planet but that doesn't mean na that you'll use your language on Earth. See if someone from ISRO sees you they'll take you for research...

Sona(hits him with her bag): How dare you! How can you make fun of my language? This is Bengali. The sweetest language ever used by mankind, this is even older than Hindi & ...

Dev: Oh! It's older than Hindi even you are older than our civilization. Where did your parents find you? Harappa ki khudai me?

Sona: YOU...

Dev: YOU...

The auto came to a sudden halt. The auto driver who was red with anger shouted

AUTO DRIVER: UTRO UTRO ABHI UTRO MERE AUTO SE! SATYANASH,SARVANASH KAR DIA HAI MERE DIMAAG KA. PEHLE BOL NAHI RAHE THE AB BOL RAHE HO TO CHUP HI NAHI HO RAHE.GALE ME SILENCER NAHI HAI KYA?

Both of them got out of the auto. Dev took out his wallet to pay him. Sona could clearly see change in his wallet. Then why didn't he give change to the flower seller?

Dev: Chalein?

Sona: Where?

Dev: To open the chamber of secrets. Chalogi?(The ones who have seen/read harry potter would know)

Sona: Very Funny

Dev: Really? Then Haso ... what did you say ... Haso zor zor se haso gabbar ki tarah haso ravan ki tarah haso bolo haha

Sona first tried to act that she was really cross with Dev but the expression on his face was such that she couldn't resist & she started laughing. There was something magical in her laughter. Seeing her laugh, as carefree as a child, made Dev's temper vanish. There was something about Sona that was drawing Dev more & more towards her with each passing second. They were quite close to their homes so they decided to walk ;partly because there was no conveyance nearby & partly because they wanted to spend more time with each other.

It was autumn, the fallen leaves of the trees adorned the roads. A subtle yet mystic fragrance of wet mud filled the air. The clouds were painted in shades of pink and orange. Tall trees on the sides of the road were dying to witness a fragment of this beautiful love story.

SONA'S POV

Ms Sonakshi Bose stop smiling like an idiot. How can I when he is with me? He stood up for me today. I thought that all of them left me to face the danger alone but no, he came, Dev came, all alone. He didn't even care about his reputation. He just came to save me & defend me. Sona stop staring him it's bad manners. After living a life full of hardships it feels amazing when someone stands for you. He is not that bad infact he is too good, so generous he gave extra money to the flower vendor so that he could fill his stomach & I ... I've always been so rude to him. SONA SHOW SOME GRATITUDE... OKAY SONA YOU CAN DO IT... 1,2,3 SPEAK

Sona: Umm Dev... I was saying ....

Dev: Yes...

SONA'S POV

Don't look at me like that I'm going weak in my knees

Sona: Dev

Dev: Hmmm

Sona: Uhh ...aaa ...clouds .... The clouds are so beautiful na

Dev looked at her & just smiled listening to her observation which came out of the blue.

SONA'S POV: Wow ! Clouds ... very good Sona, tumse na ho paayega

DEV'S POV

Clouds are beautiful but have you ever looked at your eyes Sona they are the best things my eyes have ever seen. Mr. Dixit ... control ... but how do I control this storm of emotions that is running inside me. I don't know what made me go to Lady Bacchan & tell that story. I wouldn't have done this if even Jatin was in danger. Then why for her? For once, I felt that she didn't care for my sacrifice but no she made everyone own up & take the detention. DEV YOU SHOULD APOLOGIZE TO HER for being rude to her without any reason. Come on man up

Dev: Uhh Sona

Sona: Bolo(Speak)

Dev: ummm... aahh .. you ..

Sona: yes

Dev: Yo... Yogi Aadityanath ... Yogi Aadityanath ka naara ... bol raha hai ... UP saara.. Vande mataram

Sona: Are you okay?

Dev: Noo... Yess ... Yess

DEV'S POV: SHABASH! Mr. Dixit very good. Yogi Aadityanath where did he come in between? Tumse na ho paayega

They kept on walking. Dev spotted an ice-cream vendor & they decided to stop and have an ice-cream. They bought their ice-creams & sat on a bench nearby.

Dev: Sonakshi... I need to say something.

Sona lifted her eye brows & asked " what?" She still kept licking the ice-cream.

Dev: That day when I first met you in the bus I made a remark about your merit. I am sorry for that.

Sona stopped licking her ice cream & sat alert.

Sona: Go on

Dev: I was in a hurry that day you know I had to give a speech in the assembly & in my nervousness I shouted at you. From the very first day we've been fighting... that too without any reason and I want to end this Tom and Jerry relation of ours ...

Sona: I've already forgiven you after what you did for me today. Thank You Dev! If you had wanted you could have left me with Lady Bacchan but you came back & took all the blame on your head. You even risked your reputation for me...

Dev: No reputation is important than you... & all my friends (He quickly covered up). Now that we are friends let's follow the Salman Khan policy?

Sona: ??

Dev: No sorry No Thank You No formalities in our friendship

The moment was worth freezing still both of them got up, reluctantly & continued their walk

Hum jo chalne lahge

Chalne lage hai ye raaste

A ha haan

Manzil se behtar lagne lage hai ye raaste

Aao kho jaaye hum

Ho jaaye hum yun laapta

Aao milon chalein jaana kaha naa ho pata

Hum jo chalne lage

Chalne lage hai ye raaste

They were walking, stealing glances, smiling everything had in a fraction of minutes became magical for both of them.

Suddenly Sona saw something & screamed. She ran & hid behind Dev & clenched his shirt tightly.

Dev: What happened?

Sona: There is a dog right there. It will eat me. Shoo it away

Dev: Eat you? Have you seen your size? I will not shoo it away. Why to disturb the poor soul

Dev had an idea he gently banged his head with Sona's

Sona: What was that?

Dev: Now horns will grow on your head & you can fight with the dog when it comes to eat you.

Sona was in no mood of joking. She still looked afraid.

Dev: Okay. Give me your hand

Without any hesitation Sona held his hand tightly & they continued their walk

Hoo... Aise kaise baithe baithe

Koi rasta naya sa mile

Tu bhi chale mai bhi chalu

Honge kam ye tabhi faasle

Aao tera mera na ho kisi se waasta

Aao milon chale jaana kaha na ho pata

Hum jo chalne lage

Chalne lage hain yeh raaste

Manzil se behtar lagne laga hain

Yeh raaste!!

Finally they reached Sona's home... hand in hand ... it was time to bid goodbye.

Sona's POV: I don't want to leave your hand Dev

Dev's POV: please don't leave my hand Sona

Still they said goodbye. Sona went inside her home while Dev continued his walk

CAUTION: ISHJOY AHEAD

PS- This is one of my favorite chapters ... So just because of that ...to make the writer happy can I for once get atleast 30 votes ...I am not too much into target setting but just for this time all those who read & like the ff vote/comment

PPS- Special nd bada walla thank you to Aamu031 for the recommendation of this book that you gave in your FF ... Love you

Thank You all who have been voting & commenting for the previous episodes it's only & only because of you guys that I manage to get time out of myself & write these stories

Lastly (pakka last hai😆😆), I am writing another book Love is round the corner give it a try if you can get time

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