IT HURTS A LOT (COMPLETED)

By Ohheyythereee

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In this story there is misunderstanding between manik and nandini... that's why there are not together.... na... More

Prologue
chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5(A)
Chapter 5(B)
Chapter 6(A)
new story update
Chapter 6 (B)
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Promo
Chapter 21
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Chapter-22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28 YEH LAAL ISHQ
Chapter 29
Promo
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
LAST PART (A)
LAST PART(B)
EPILOGUE...

Chapter 16

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Navya: Nandu ko toh kuch fark hi nahi padh raha.. Arrey nandini toh  iss baremey baat karne ke liye taiyaar vi nahi hain...!!

Mukti: Yaa guyz our sorry its not affecting us..

Manik: No mukti its jst she is ignoring us.. Bt we r not really sure that whether our words or our presence really don't matter to her...

Alya: Matlb..??

Cabir: Matlb yeh ki we hv to knw ki whether our presence is affecting her or not.. Right manik..??

Manik: Hmm..!!! She is definitely noticing us n our each move.. We hv to jst make it sure..??

Dhruv: Bt guyz how r we gonna do it.. Matlb kaisey karenge..??

Cabir: Actually i hv an idea...

N he told everyone abt it..

Everyone in unison" Let's do this guyz"

Nandu was sitting in the hall  when navya came wid her baby..

Navya: Arrey mera baby.. Meri angel bhuk lagi hain.. Chalo lets do some pet pujaa.. Hmm kuch khaate hain..

(Now pari is abt 3 yrs n 9 months so she definitely can speak..)

Pari: Okay mumma... Jaldi kalo( karo) naa bohot vuk lagi hain..

Navya: Okay mera baccha toh aap  naa milk piyo issey naa aap bohot jada strong ho jaao gey..

Pari: Wow mein stlong( Strong) ho jaaungi.. Yeah.. Fir main cabil( cabir) papa ko vi halaa( haraa) dungi..

Navya: Hmm..!! Okay... Aap yehi betho main aati hu milk lekar..

Saying this she left pari there wid nandu..

Actually pari was playing wid a doll sitting on sofaa beside nandu.. 

Mistakely the doll fell down frm her hand..

Nandu saw this n picked the doll up

Nan: Yeh lo apna doll.. She said wid a smile on her face..

Pari: Thnq.. Waisey mela(mera) naam pali(pari ) hain aul(aur) aapkaa..??

Nan: Mera naam nandini hain..

Pari: Aap mumma ki dost ho...??

Nandini didn't knw wat to answer... She was looking here n there..

Pari: Kyaa huaa aap mumma ki dost nahi ho..??

Nan: Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hain.., main aapki mumma ki dost hu..

Pari: Pal(par) mainey toh kavi aap ko unsey baat kalte(karte) nahi sunaa.. Aap log baat nahi kalte(karte).. Aap mumma se katti ho..??

Nan: Woh.. Darasal.. ..she was thinking of an answer...

Pari: Agal( agar) ho naa toh aisaa mat kalo.. Aap mumma se baat kallo( karlo).. Mumma bohot acchi hain... Aul (aul) waisey vi mumma kehti hain naa ki kisi sey jada del(der) gussa nahi lehte(rehte)..!!

Nan: Accha aur kya kya kehti hain aapki mumma ..?? She asked her wid a smile..

Pari was abt to answer bt was stopped by navya's voice" Arrey mera baccha.. Chalo dudh aagaya.,. Let's hv it.. Aur strong grl bantey hain okay..??

Seeing navya nandu again got engrossed in her file...

Navya was abt to make pari drink the milk bt was stopped by nandu voice..." Navya stop... Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum..??"

Nav: Kya kar rahi hu..

Nan: Pagal ho gayi ho kyaa.. Dudh se vaaf(vapor) nikal raha hain.. It means its too hot... Tum pari ko yeh pilaaogi..

Nav: Woh actually hum phn pe baat kar rahe they toh pata hi nahi chala ki dudh itna garam kardiyaa... Thnx..

Nand: Its alright par agli time se dhyaan rakhna..

Saying this she left frm there..

As soon as she left all came towards hall..

Manik: Dekhaa mainey kaha thaa nah nandini notice our each n every move.. Chaahey woh jitni vi dikhaaley ki she ignore us but she still do care abt us..

Nav: Haa humey toh laga thaa ki  nandu apni file main bzy hogi par woh humaari saari harkat yaad kar rahi thi..

 Cabir: It means we still do hv some hope..

Manik: Yaa we hv... Thodaa saa hi sahi bt we hv ,...

Mukti: Toh guyz aagey kyaa karnaa hain.. 

Navya: Humaare paas nandu ko manaane kaa ek tarikaa hain,,

Cabir: Kyaa..??

She told her plan to everyone...

Manik: Guyz aisaa karney se nandini aur naraaza ho jaayegi..

Mukti: Arrey manik its our style of asking for apology so let's do it.. Aur tuney hi toh kaha thaa u don't want to miss any of the chance to get her forgive ness.. So  lets give it a try..

Cabir: Yaa manik lets do this..

The brk got over n nandu came to jamming room..

As soon as she entered she saw dhruv standing infront of her wid his guitar...

He slowly started to play it... N also started to sing...

One, two, three!

I am a fool, I am a fool

I am a fool fool fool!

You big heart, you big heart

You got very big heart!

I come near, I come near

I come near near near

You go far, you go far

You go very very far

( Dhruv sang the 2 lines n then alya n mukti join him n sang together)

Arey thanda rakh kaleja

Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja

Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free

(Nandu  avoided them n walk towards her chair... When cabir came wid a sorry card n sang these lines..

He gve her the card.. Nandu was holding it in her hand..)

( Manik came near her n gve her a rose.. She didn't take it bt manik made her hold it... )

He than sang..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya ( he sang this line catching his ears..,)

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bache ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya ( he sang this line gesturing her to smile..)

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Bache ki loge jaan kya ( he sang making a dead face)

I know you love me and You know I love ya

Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya

I want a big big smile and

I want it only only now

Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav

(Now dhruv brought a teddy n made her hold it... He sang this line n ask her to smile by his act..)

Aise kaai ko atka

Tere ghar ka jhadu katka

Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!

( Navya came near her n gve her chocolate n sang this line..)

Now everyone came at a place n sang together..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya.. ( all sang catching their ears..)

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bachche ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya ( all sang gesturing her to smile...

Manik came to near her a showed a wall in the room fully covered wid papers in different shape written sorry in it..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bache ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Bache ki loge ...

They were stopped by a voice" Jst stop it" ... It was nandu's voice.. 

Band karo apna yeh natak..

Enough is enough.. Main keh kar gayi thi naah ke jab i will be bck i want to all to stop all this crap but nahi...

Yeh yeh sab dekr ..aisey gaaney gaakar... Yeh chocolate.. Roses...card dekar kya faidaa... U think tumlog mujhe ye sab dogey aur sab kuch thik hojaayegaa toh tum log yeh galat faimi mey jee rahe ho... Let me clear u that ab in sab chizoo kaa koi matlb nahi hain... Plz mat karo yeh sab...

Navya: Par kyun nandini..?? Hmm maante hain ki humsab ne bohot badi  galti ho gayi hain.. Par ek baari humey woh galti sudhaarney kaa maukaa toh do..

Nan: I said nah stop this topic.. Tumlog nah kuch vi karo it doesn't affect me so..

Mukti: It affects u... It do warna woh thodi der pehle pari.. ..??

Nan: Oh so it was all ur plan.. Like seriously tum log apni matlb ke liye.. Ek nanhi si jaan ko tum log woh garam dudh pilaa rahe the..

Manik: Its not like that nandini ki hum pari ko woh dudh pilaa dete... Agar tum nahi rokti toh navya khud hi ruk jaati ...

Nan: Woh toh i knw.. Bt still how can u involve a small child in ur stupid plans...

Manik: Toh aur kyaa karey nandini.. We needed to find whether our action our move u r noticing it or not..??

Nan: Aur uske liye tumne yeh sab kiya.. Oh god u guyz r really gone...

Tumlog nah ek galti sudhaarne k liye dusri galti kiye jaa rahe ho...

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