IT HURTS A LOT (COMPLETED)

By Ohheyythereee

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In this story there is misunderstanding between manik and nandini... that's why there are not together.... na... More

Prologue
chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5(A)
Chapter 5(B)
Chapter 6(A)
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Chapter 6 (B)
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Promo
Chapter 21
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Chapter-22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28 YEH LAAL ISHQ
Chapter 29
Promo
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
LAST PART (A)
LAST PART(B)
EPILOGUE...

Chapter 14

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By Ohheyythereee

Finally manbir reached bck to villa... They headed inside...

Rohan n nandini were in the hall discussing abt smthg...

Rohan noticed manbir so he spoke...

R: So u guyz r bck.. Kaam pura hogaya..??

M: Hmm.. Bohot hi acche se...!! He said looking towards cabir n cabir gve him assuring smile..

R: Oh so kaisa raha trip..??

C: Yaa it was gud.. Bt it was exhausting too

R: Okay.. So now jst go n get freshed.. Thodi der main dinner lagne walaa so aajaanaa..

C: Ofcourse...

Manik for once also didn't look towards nandini.. Manbir went their rooms n get freshed...

In no time they came down n dinner was set..

Fab5, navya, nandu, rohan Everyone settle themselves around dinning table...

Soon the dinner was completed n everyone headed towards their room...

In manik's room...

Manik was sitting on sofa covering his face wid his palm...

Cabir came...

Kya hua manik.. Aisey kyu baithaa hain.. ?? Chal nandini ke paas jana nahi hain kya..???? Asked cabir.

Hmm!! Jaana hain naa par do u knw wat mujheme himmat hi nahi horahi naa

n.. Main toh nandini ki taraf dekh vi nahi paaraahaa.. M so ashamed of myself.. Toh baat kaisey karungaa..?? Said manik in low tone...

I knw manik its really hard.. Jo galti humney ki hain nah uske baat nandini se nazre milaane mein vi bohot ashame feel hotaa hain.. Par hum aisey chup nahi reh sakte ney... !! Said cabir in determined tone...

U r right cabir... Hum aisey nahi reh sakte.. Mujhe nandini se baat karni hi hogii.. Joh galti uss raat mainey ki thi woh main sudhaar kar rahunga.. Main nandini se baat karungaa... Said manik

Toh fir chal..?? Lets go... Cabir said.

Hmm..!! Manik said standing frm his place...

They both were now infront of nandu's room..

Cabir knocked the door..

Come in..!! A voice came frm inside..

Chal.. Said cabir giving a assuring look..

Both entered the room..

Nandu was sitting on her bed facing her bck to them.. Actually she was arranging the pillows..

She finally turned around n saw them..

Cabir..!! Ma.a..n..!! She mumrmer

Bt she ignored manik n asked " Cabir tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?? Kuch kaam thaa..??

C: Haa..!! Actually mujhe kuch baat karni hain tumse..

N: Yaa.. Tell me..!!

C: Woh actually hum dono ko hi baat karni hain tumse.. Manik ko vi..

N: Mere paas muft kaa waqt nahi hain.. Jisko joh kehna hain kaho n jst leave..

Cabir gave jst-say-it look to manik..

Manik nodded in a yes..

M: W..o..h.. Act..ua..lly... Muh..je.. Yeh.. Ke..h..na.. Tha..ki..ki.. W..o..hh.. !! He was jst stammering... He was so ashamed that he couldn't even speak infront of her..

Nandini was standing folding her hands n looking away..

Cabir i don't think tumhara yeh dost kuch bol paayegaa.. Mere paas itna waqt nahi hain ki ..!! She was cut off in btn by manik

M sorry nandini..!! This time manik said showing some confidence in his voice...

Hogaya. ..?? Now u may leave...!!! She said in a cold tone..

Manik gve cabir a helpless look..

N cabir gve him bck jst-try-some-more look..

Main kahi nahi jaa raha.. I need to talk to u... Said manik in calm voice..

Dekho manik mujhe naa tumhaari koi vi baat sunne main interest nahi hain.. So it will be better if u leave... Nandini still said it maintaining a cold tone in her voice..

Main aaj baat kiye bina nahi jaaungaa... Said manik

Thik hain nah toh tum raho yaha m leaving frm here..

She was abt to leave bt manik hold her hand n nodded in a no.. Nandini was trying hard to free her hand bt his grip was really tight...

Cabir thought he could ask a sorry later bt now he need to give them some alone time so he left giving manik assuring smile..

Nandini called him.. Cabir..!!! Bt he didn't stop coz he knw its bst to give them some time alone..

NANDINI : chodo mera haath nahi toh...!!

MANIK : nahi tho

Nandu looks him seriously.

Manik: Bolo naa nahi toh kya karogi..??

She tries to push him away but he holds her hand more tightly..

NANDINI : chodo mujhe leave

MANIK : nahi aaj nahi..

NANDINI : listen mujhe tumse bath nahi karni hain aur na hi tumhara chehra dekna hain and finally freed her hand and moved a little backward..

NANDINI : tum mere paas nahi aaoge aur na hi mujhse bath karne ki koshish karoge

MANIK : suno toh meri puri baat...

NANDINI : mujhe kuch nahi sunna hain tum tum yaha chale jao ...

Manik nods his head in disbelief and moved forward..

She doesn't allow him to come close to her and shouts on him continuously.

MANIK : fine tum chahthi ho na ki main yaha se chela jao tho teek hain main chela jaonga bt apni puri baat khatam kar kar jaaungaa...

Nandu turns her face without saying anything

Manik plz leave frm here... Iss tarah se tum mujhe aur gussa dilaa rahe ho... Nandini said in a high voice..

M:Gussa aaraahaa hain toh gussa hi sahi bt listen to me.. M sorry ... I really mean it..

N: Huh..!! Sorry.. Bt for wat Mr.Malhotra..?? She said as if she don't knw wat he was talking abt..

M: Yeh tum vi jaanti ho wat m sorry for.. M sorry for that night..

N: Mujhe nahi pata Mr.Malhotra aap kis raat ki baat kar rahe ho..??

M: Nandini plz don't behve this way.. Ek baari let me speak full.. Mujhe meri baar explain karne do...

She left a sarcastic laugh.. N said explain karney du.. Tumhe apni puri baat karney du.. Really?? Pata hain manik yeh scenario dekh kar nah i remembered same scene jo kuch saal pehle dekhaz thaa..

M: I knw nandini uss raat tum vi aisaa hi ek maukaa maang rahi thi n i didn't gve u n m sorry for that.. I should hv given u.. Bt pagal thaa main.. Bahot bada waala woh thaa..

N: U should hv given par diya toh nahi nah.. Let it be nah manik kyu iss baat ko baapas khada kar rahe ho..?? Joh hogaya nah woh hogaya.. Its gone..

Waisey vi ab meri life mein woh sab baatein matter nahi karti...

Bt it matters to me.. It really do... Shouted manik..

Agar itna hi matter karta naa toh u should hv listened me that day... Aur waisi vi aaj achaanak itney dino baad aisaa kya hogaya manik that u r talking wid me regarding this matter.. Wait wait talking nahi actually u r asking for a sorry... Hua kya manik..??

Woh nandini aaj main mumbai gaya thaa it was to knw the truth.. Aur mujhe vivaan ne sab kuch bataya ki how he n nyonika planned everything to separate us.. How they used ur innocence... Aur they manipulated me against u... I knw everything.. M sorry for not trusting u that day.. I knw mujhe karna chaahiye thaa par nahi karpaya.. M so sorry for not being able to stand wid u that day.. M sorry for blaming u, insulting u, n more over for not believing in ur love.. M so so so sorry nandini plz mujhe maaf kardo.. Plz..!! Said manik in a pleading tone.. Tears were rolling down frm his eyes all this time..

Nandu turned towards him.. Shr could see his tears bt she didnt gve any reaction to it.. Infact she remain silent.. She didn't even a utter a single word... She was standing there with emotionless expression..

" Nandini plz aisey chup mat raho..!! Kuch toh bolo..!! Kamse kam daato par not this silence.. Its killing me more..!!" Said manik looking helplessly at nandu..as she didn't said anything to manik

N:Kuch bolu..?? Kya bolu..?? Jab bolna chaaha toh tum sunney ke liye taiyaar hi nahi they aur aaj jab mere paas kuch kehne k liye baaki nahi hain toh u want me to speak... Thik hain i will jst say a word to u plz leave..

M: Nandini u didn't answer to me.. I m asking for a sorry n u r asking me to leave..!!

N: Toh aur kya kahu.. Wat do u want to listen..??

M: Nandini...!! He gve a helpless look...

Bol liya jitnaa bolna thaa.. U want me to listen nah sunli mainey tumhaari baat now jaao yaha se.. Said nandini maintaining a cold tone in her voice...

Nandini m asking for a sorry aur tum keh rahi ho ki jaao..!! Said manik

Nahi toh kya karu.. Khusi ke maare party karu, tumhaare liye song banaau, yaa naachu bataao nah kya karu... Asked nandini in hell angry tone

Manik if u r really sorry nah toh jst leavr frm here... Plz..!! Nandini said in a cold tone..

Thik hain nandini for now i will be leaving bt remember a thing i will try my bst to seek ur apology.. Main haar nahi maanungaa,... Gudnite..!! Sweet dreams..!!

Saying this manik left frm the room

Manik went inside his room.. Cabir n other came in his room.. Actually after cabir left the room he went to others n told them everything... Everyone were disappointed on their own so they also came to ask for apology bt seeing manik heading toward his room they thought to talk yo him first...

C: Manik kya kaha nandini ney..??

M: Kuch nahi.. He said still standing wid blank expression..

D: Kuch nahi.. Par u asked for a sorry nah toh..??

M: She asked me to leave..!!!

Navya: She asked to leave aur u leave.. Arrey tumhe aur kosish karnaa chaahiye thaa naa..!!

M: Tumhe kya lagta main thodaa aur try karta toh woh mujhe maaf kardeti...?? Nahi..!! We should give her time... Kya lagtaa hain nandini ney joh 4 saalo mein suffer kiyaa woh itni jaldi vul jaayegi.. Nahi naah..?? Agar main thodi der aur waha rehta maa toh she would think ki mujhe naa uska dard nahi dikhtaa.. She would think ki all i want is jst myself...

C: Manik sahi keh raha hain.. Kisi ke liye vi itni badi cheez ko vulaana asaan nahi hotaa.. Main vi agar nandini ki jagah hotaa toh mere liye vi asaan nahi hotaa tumsab ko maaf karnaa.. She had suffered alot.. She really do needs some time.. N we need to give her.. Hum ek hi baari mein uspar pressure nahi daal sakte iss tarah se woh aur hate karegi humey.. Humey har roz thoda thodaa karke ussey maafi leni chaahiye.. I knw we only hv 14 days left bt isske alawa we don't hv other option.. We will try our best till our last breathe...Okay..??

Navya: Thik hain cabir.. Waisey vi humne nandu ko dard vi toh itna bada diyaa hain..

D: Par agar usne humey maaf nahi kiyaa toh..

M: Its her decision.. Agar sach me hum maafi deserve karte hain nah toh to woh hume jaroor maaf karegi...!!

Chaahe uskaa decision jo vi ho we will hv to respect it...

C: So lets do it frm tmrw...

All unison " Okay..!"

Now everyone left manik room sadly thinking abt kal kya hogaa..!! How wilk they all face nandini..!!!

Apne roothein, paraaye roothein

Yaar roothe naa

Khwaab tootein, waade tootein

Dil ye toote naa (x2)

( cabir was walking toward his room.. His pov;

Finally nandini aaj sab ko sab sach pataa chal gaya.. Sab jaangaye u r innocent.. We knw tum humey iss cheez ke liye kavi maaf mahi karogi bt plz jst try once to forgive us plz.. We all hv realized our mistakes... I knw tum humse naraaz ho bt plz iss dil mey ek umeed hain that u will try to forgive us yeh mat todnaa.. Plz maaf kardo hum sab ko..)

Roothe to khuda bhi roothe

Saath chhoote naa (x2)

O Allah Waariyan

O main toh haariyan

O tooti yaariyan mila de oye! (x2)

( Navya was sitting in her room weeping badly n saying" Kaisey kaiseu hum apni bst frnd par sak kar sakte hain.. Jab vi humey uski zaroorat thi woh humesha mere saath thi { saying this she remember how nandu help her n stand for her to deal wid fab5.. How she help her to knw the truth of that jerk harshad} par jab humaari baari aayi toh humne uske saath yeh kiyaa.. Uski dosti kaa aisaa silaa diyaa.. Hum bohot burey hain.. Humne apni bst frnd ko yeh sab kaha.. Hum naah tumhaari naraazgi hi deserve karte hain...)

Udte patangon mein

Holi waale rangon mein

Jhoomenge phir se dono yaar (x2)

Waapas to aaja yaar

Seene se laga ja yaar

Dil to huey hain zaar-zaar

( Dhruv was sitting on his balcony trying to play his guitar...

Dhruv POV;

Main nandini main toh tumhe clz ke first day se jaantaa thaa... Infact we were like bst frnd { saying this he remember how they bcame frnds n shook their hnd in terrace for frndship...} toh how could i do this to u... Matlb i also blamed u... Oh god main kitna buraa hu.. Bohot hi buraa frnd.. Plz forgive us nandini.. Plz.. Plz laut aao humaare paas...)

Ho apne roothein, paraaye roothein

Yaar roothe naa

Khwaab toote, waade toote

Dil yeh toote naa

Roothe toh khuda bhi roothe

Saath chhoote naa

Mukti was sitting on her bed resting her head on headboard..

Mukti POV;

Yeh kyaa kardiyaa humne... Jis nandini ne humeshaa humaara vala chaaha usske saath itnaa buraa kiyaa.. Nandini ney toh tab meri help ki thi jab main ussey apna accha dost tak nahi maanti thii { Saying this she remember how nandini help her wid that campaign against rocky n his brother..}

Bt wat we did.. Its definitely not done.. M sorry for that day nandini m really sorry...)

Roothe to khuda bhi roothe

Saath chhoote naa

O Allah waariyan

O main toh haariyan

O tooti yaariyan mila de oye! (x2)

( Alya was also sitting oh her bed thinking abt past days..

Alya POV;

Tum jab humaare saath thi sab kuch thik thaa... Infact u came n changed us frm bad to good.. How evil we all were bt u came aur tumney Humey sahi dhang sey jeena sikhaayaa bt ab dekho tumhaare jaaney k baad sab messed up hogaya hain.. Plz nandini forgive us n cme bck to our livr aur firse sab thik kardo plz.. M really sorry nandini m sorry...!!! Ek tum hi ho jo fab5 ko wapas ek kar sakti ho.. Its ur frndship which can bind us together once again.. U r really a true frnd woh toh we were the one who were stupid.. Hum stupids ko maaf kardonaa plz..!!)

End of song...

Nandini was sitting on the floor leaning her body on the door..

Tears were rolling down her cheeks..

No nandini u can't be weak.. Ronaa nahi.. U hv to be strong.. Chaahe usseysab kuch pata chal gaya.. Toh kya.. Ussey lagta hain ki woh aakar ek sorry kahegaa aur sab thik ho jaayegaa.. No aisaa nahi hogaa.. Main fir se itni badi galti nahi karungi.. Bcoz of all these i lost everything.. My family jinki koi galti vi nahi thi.. Main yeh nahi keh rahi ki i lost them coz of u bt i lost them bcoz of my mistake.. The biggest mistake which is u manik.. Aur main mistake repeat nahi karti...

Tears were still rolling down.. She was continuously wiping them away..

Stop it nandini u can't cry.. Bilkul vi nahi.. Tumhe nahi ronaa hain.. Nahi.., saying this she started to cry badly..

Its not easy manik its definitely not easy.. Tumhaare aasu i could see them infact i wanted to wipe them away bt nahi hogaa mujhse nahi hogaa.. Ab itni strength baaki nahi rahi ki kisi ke aasu pochu... Nahi hogaa mujhse..

I hv lost myself.. Main woh nahi rahi.. So this sorry is of no use..

Waisey vi ab main koi vi nahi hu joh tumhe maaf karey.. Kyuki maafi ussey maang tey ho jo kisi kaa kuch lagta hain.. Aur tum mere koi nahi ho.. Not even a stranger.. There's no relation left btn us)

Song being played in bg...

Rabba Hai Rabba

Rabba Hai Rabba

Kisi Da Tu Kya Laage

Lo Tute Kache Dhaage

Phire Dil Mara Mara

Yaar Da Tuta Sahara

Kyun Hai Bhala Ye Dooriyan

Kyun Hai Khala Ab Darmiyan

Rabba Tu Itna Bata De

Haan Bata De Baata De Raaba

Ki Kara Main Hoon Ki Kara Ve

Haan Bata De Baata De Rabba

Manik pov;

Mainey sab barbaad kardiyaa.. Meri wajah se aaj nandini mujhe apna kuch nahi maanti..

I knw nandini joh dard humne tumhe diyaa it hv really hurt u badly.. I knw tumhaare liye bohot muskil hogaa humey maaf karna.. Par plz maaf kardo.. I want to make it up once again..

I want u bck in my life.. I want u bck..

End of pov

Manik phn buzzed.. He checked it was cabir msg " Don't worry sab thik hojaayegaa.. She jst need some time yaar.."

Manik started to touch the photo of nandini which was saved in his phone..

Now manik started to shout sitting on floor " I want u bck nandini.. I want us to be bck.. Tum jo kahogi main karne k liye taiyaar.. M ready to do watever it takes to make it up once again... Maaf kardo naa mujhe...plz forgive me..!! )

Bhaga Bhaaga Phirta Hai Yeh Dil

Hai Jaane Aisi Kya Hain Mushkil

Tere Bina Jeena Nahi Hai

Tu To Meri Saason Mein Shaamil

Ho Teri Duhaiya Tere Sadke Soniya

De De Rehaiya Mainu Dil Se Soniya

( Nandu was sitting on floor hugging her knees n sobbing slowly..

Nandu pov;

Jis cheez ko piche chod kar aaj mein itni dur aayi hu woh kyun fir se mere saamne aagaya hain... Jis past se dur..bohot dur vagnaa chaahti hu kyu ussey firse mere itnaa karib laakar rakh diyaahaib.. Kyun meri muskil aur badh rahi hain,.?? Pehle itne waqt k baad uss raaste par achaanak sab ke saath mulaakat fir yeh album ki wajah se 1 mahiney saath mein rehnaa hain.. Uske baad uss raat ki sacchai., .. No manik woh wqt alag thaa jab main tumhaare binaa jeena nahi chahti thi par ab sayad mujhme tumhaare saath jeeney ki himmat nahi hain... Ab yeh duriyaa hi humaari kismat main hain manik.. Jst accept it..)

Dil Ka Kahi Hai Kya Sahara

Kyu Hai Bhala Ye Dooriyaan

Rabba Tu Itna Bata De

Haan Bata De Baata De Raaba

Ki Kara Main Hoon Ki Kara Ve

Bata De Baata De Rabba

( Manik pov;

Nandini nahi jee paungaa main tumhaare binaa.. Tumhaare alaawaa mera dil ka koi aur sahaara nahi hain... Nandini plz remove this distance.. Mujhe yeh duriyaa qubool nahi hain... Plz nandini do tell me ki main aisaa kya karu ke tumhaara dard kam ho... Kya karu aisaa jo tum mujhe maaf kardo... Plz tell me kyaa karu aisaa...!!)

Tere Bina Jiya Na Mora Laga Tere Bina

Tere Bina Jiya Na Mora Lage Tere Bina

Jiya Na Laage

( Manik pov;

Ab toh tumhaare binaa mera man vi nahkj lag raha... I can't live widout u... Nahi jee paunga nandini main tumhaarw binaa..!!)

Rootha Rootha Rehta Hain Yeh Maan

Hai Jaane Aisi Kya Hain Uljhan

Tere Bin Hasta Nahi Hai

Jaane Mere Kyun Hai Dushman

Ho Meri Tanhaiyan Dase Mujhko Soniya

Hogi Ruswaiya Tere Dil Ki Soniya

Mere Nahi Hai Ab Gujara

Kyun Hai Bhala Yeh Dooriyan

( Nandu's tears couldn't stop themself frm falling... Now she even stop wiping them.. She was letting them fall freely as if she was feeling like she is letting her pain get off...

She was murmuring" Tum chaahte ho ki main tumhe maaf kardu... Maaf karne ke liye naa i need a happy heart jo mere paas nahi hain.. Ab toh meraa man hi mujhse ruthaa rehtaa hain... Kaisi uljhan hain nah manik tumhaare bina main khush nahi hu.. Yeh dil hasta nahi hain...main toh khud ki hi dusman bangayi hu jo khudko saari khusiyo se dur rakha hain... Pata hain ab yeh tanhaai mujhe raas aachuki hain coz ye utna dard nahi detaa jitna u hurted me... So tumse yeh dooriyaan hi thik hain mere liye... I knw yeh tanhaai mujhe khusi nahi deti hasatinahi bt do u knw wat yeh mujhe utnaa rulaati vi nahi...!!))

Rabba Tu Itna Bata De

Haan Bata De Baata De Raaba

Ki Kara Main Hoon Ki Kara Ve

Bata De Baata De Rabba

(Manil was still sitting on floor crying...resting his body on bedside...

Manik pov;

Nandini main sab thik karnaa chahtaa hu bas mujhe ek maukaa dedo., give me a chance.. Tum jaisaa kahogi i will do the same.. Bas ek baari keh kar toh dekho...!!!)

Rabba Hai Rabba

Rabba Hai Rabb

Rabba Hai Rabba

Rabba Hai Rabba

Nandini pov;

Tumne aaney main bohot der kardi manik.. Bohot der...

Manik pov;

Kyaa mujhe aaney main der hogayi nandini..??

Murmuring this both drifted in sleep on their same position i.e nandu sitting leaning on door n manik leaning on bedside...!!!!

Screen divided on two parts showing both of them..

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