The Pretend To Be Agreement

By Cataldinabluebird

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[UNDER MAJOR EDITING] 'So, it's agreed then? If I help you with your financial problems, you'll pretend to... More

The Pretend To Be Agreement
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty-Two
Chapter Twenty-Three
Chapter Twenty-Four
Chapter Twenty-Five
Chapter Twenty-Six
Chapter Twenty-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Eight
Chapter Twenty-Nine
Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty-One
Chapter Thirty-Two
Chapter Thirty-Three
Chapter Thirty-Four
Chapter Thirty-Five
Chapter Thirty-Six (Different Version)
BONUS CHAPTER - 1.
BONUS CHAPTER - 2. HOLIDAY SPECIAL
Epilogue PT. 1
Epilogue - PT. 2
Important Information (FAQ)
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DEAR READERS!!! (VERY IMPORTANT)

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By Cataldinabluebird

Dear readers,

I understand that many are not happy with the way this story turned out. I've had many comments telling me so. I know that the ending to The Pretend To Be Agreement didn't meet the standards of some readers, while others continue to give it praise. I know that there is a lot of people who love this story. I do, too. But here's the thing that I would like to tell my loyal readers: I, like others, are not happy with how this story turned out.

I am unpleased with how I had written this story. The ending just didn't seem right. Things don't make sense -- but this isn't all. As I went back and read through the chapters, I found a lot of plot holes and gaps in the story. Parts of the story are missing and I realized that there could be more to this story. That it could be more. Be better.

So, I've come to the decision -- which has been in the works for the past couple of months -- that I will be rewriting TBTBA. I would like to state right here that I am not doing this to please the readers that have a problem with TBTBA.

I have begun the rewriting process a while ago, and although I am unsure of when all of the rewritten chapters will replace the old chapters, I can tell you all that some parts of the old chapters will remain the same but just written better and longer. I'm hoping that with the rewrite, those who didn't find closure in TBTBA will find it in its new version. I'm also hoping that you, the readers, my lovely loyal fans, will love the rewrite just as much as you loved the old version.

That's all I can say for now on the subject, but if you have any questions, leave in the comments and I will do my best to answer them.

Thank you for reading!

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