Marshmallow Critiques [OPEN]

By _SilverSpider_

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Hime and Empress bring you another sweet and fluffy treat, the Marshmallow Critiques! What more could you ask... More

Welcome
Rules
Request Form [OPEN]
Critic Sign-Up [CLOSED]
Evaluate Your Critic!
Critic Emme {unavailable}
Critic Brianna
Critic Manasa
Critic Krishnan
Critic Krissy
Critic Rea
Critic Alex
Critic Ashley {unavailable}
Critic A.W.
Critic Hallie
Critic Frankie
Critic Savage.Nerd
Critic Sound
Critic Pari
Critic Toriel
Critic Whoyoume
Critic Ava
Critic Joey

Critic Octavia

705 34 192
By _SilverSpider_

Octavia critiques Fantasy, Historical, Teen, Horror, Mystery, Adventure, General and Short Story. She accepts LGBT and mature stories and is online everyday!

The maximum chapters per single request she takes is three anywhere throughout your story.

Three is also the maximum amount of requests she takes at any one time and will complete her critique usually within a week after payment is complete.

Payment:

- A read on 'Everything Included' and some honest feedback (the more the better although she does not have a set amount)

Octavia thinks marshmallows covered in chocolate and skewered on sticks are the absolute best!

Comment your form into this chapter if you would like Octavia to critique your story and don't forget to tag her--OctaviaLocke--so that she knows ^^

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