Marshmallow Critiques [OPEN]

By _SilverSpider_

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Hime and Empress bring you another sweet and fluffy treat, the Marshmallow Critiques! What more could you ask... More

Welcome
Rules
Request Form [OPEN]
Critic Sign-Up [CLOSED]
Evaluate Your Critic!
Critic Brianna
Critic Manasa
Critic Krishnan
Critic Krissy
Critic Octavia
Critic Rea
Critic Alex
Critic Ashley {unavailable}
Critic A.W.
Critic Hallie
Critic Frankie
Critic Savage.Nerd
Critic Sound
Critic Pari
Critic Toriel
Critic Whoyoume
Critic Ava
Critic Joey

Critic Emme {unavailable}

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By _SilverSpider_

Emme (Hime and Empress) critiques Action, Adventure, Paranormal, ChickLit, Poetry, Fantasy, SciFi, Short Story, Teen, Mystery and Humour.

We are online at least once (if not more) per day and we critique mature and LGBT books ^^

The maximum chapters that we allow from a single request is three and we accept chapters from either the beginning or later ones--but that will mean that we are judging on that chapter alone since we won't know the characters or the storyline.

We accept up to five requests at a time and will complete the request about a week after you complete the payments (please complete your payment within a week after acceptance or you will be dropped).

Payment

- A permanent follow

- Check out our Marshmallow Book Club and share it with others (we have no real way of confirming this, but it would be very much appreciated if you try to by any means you have ^^)

- Feedback on the first two chapters of our story, Dusk at Midnight (doesn't have to be in depth, just how you feel as a reader)

Marshmallows are awesome! After all, we did name both our Book Club and Critique Book after it ^^

Just an extra reminder from the two of us, we also admin a Book Club which can be found on our profile. If you would like to get further feedback each week, feel free to join!   

Waiting List:  

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We spend a lot of time on our reviews so it would make us very happy if you could take what we have said into consideration and use that to improve your stories! ^^

edited: 4/3/17

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