When i first met you

By Margarette_320

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A girl name Jillian who always got bullied but when she found a friend name Max things change.. But Jillian i... More

When i first met you
Trouble and Jealousy
Forgiveness..
The New Girl
Cinderella Trouble
Who are you?
First Date Disaster Love
Am In Love With Him..
Taking Care of you
The New Guy
Preparing Valentines Day!
A day without Max :<
Valentines Day Trouble
New Friend Jealousy
Visiting Max Parents
Prom Planning Max Trouble
Prom
Is this the end? part 1
Is this the end? Part 2 {ENDING}

Happy Birthday Max!

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By Margarette_320

hi guys this is the continues of the story.. hope you will enjoy..

jillian woke up and remember max's birthday! .. jillian prepares to go to school  with a pack of lunch for max as a gift.. jillian arrives to school and saw max..

hi max! happy birthday! ^_^

oh hi there jillian.. hehe thanks..

meet me after class okay.. at the canteen..

okay...

bye max..

bye *cute smiles*

jillian goes to her room.. and the teacher enter and they greet her.. then the bell rang jillian goes to the canteen .. she saw max waiting..

hi max did you just arrive here awhile ago? ..

no i just arrive .. so why are we here?

*opens lunch bag* here.. gee thanks jillian..

sorry i dont have any money to buy you a gift so i'll make you a sushi with squid balls and rice.. ^_^

*smiles* hehe its okay .. so lets eat..

*nods* okay..

jillian and max eats and while they were eating they talk to each other..

so tomorrows your birthday right?

yeah..

so its your aunt going to surprise you?

well my aunt is still in china.. so i should not celebrate my birthday this year..

oh.. how come???

nothing .. its just a birthday.. its okay with me not to celebrate..

oh okay..

~ring!!

oh i have to go now max bye..

okay bye!

jillian goes to her room.. after their class all the students went home... jillian walks and arrives home and she opens the mail box and she saw a letter with a gift.

*0pens letter*

oh its from auntie ..

Dear Jillian,

Advance happy birthday! sorry cant come.. still busy here in china doing work.. so i will send you a gift.. hope you will like it..

                                          Love,

                                        Auntie

jillians wents inside their house and opens her gift.. only to found out its a 'PHONE'

oh its a phone? mmh..

jillians on's the phone and the phone rang ..

oh aunties calling.. hello?

hi jillian, did you like the gift?

uhm yes auntie, thank you.. :D ..

jillian and her auntie talked then ended.. after they call jillian wents to the kitchen and eats goes to her room doing her routine...

~January 1st

morning rise, jillian goes to school.. when she opens the door she saw max..

hi birthday girl!

:D hehe thanks max..

^_^ so lets go to school..

*nods*

max and jillian goes to school together..

~arrives school..

jillian and max were talking but james showed up ..

hi jillian! *gives present* happy birthday!

gee thanks james :)

james smiles and saw max besides jillian..

oh hi max (-_-**)

hey their james (-_-***)

~rings..

gotta go guys bye!

am jillian wait!

yes max?

uhm..

*rings phone*

oh wait a sec.. hello?

O_o? she has a phone?

okay auntie bye.. so what are you gonna say?

uhmm.. meet me at the canteen later.. okay?

okay bye. see yeah later then..

after their class ended jillian goes to the canteen but suddenly  amber and her friends showed up..

hey!

o_o.. oh no *walks*

where do you think your going!?

uhm..

girls! take her to the pool!

0_0 let me go.. >_<

the girls takes jillian to the pool ..

hehehe >:) lets go for a swim jillian.. >:) ..

wait no NO .. let me gooo!! *struggling* ..

the girls throws jillian.. jillian doesnt know how to swim so she gasp shouting for help.. the mean girls laugh then leaves jillian.. meanwhile in the canteen max was waiting for jillian to come..

arghh whats taking her so long am hungry..

max goes to jillians room and ask if they saw jillian..

uhm excuse me did you saw jillian?

no.. sorry

oh okay thanks..

max was so worried she search jillian everywhere until he reach to the pool..

where are you jillian? :'(

max was watching the pool and he saw something ..

0_0!!? JILLIAN!! *jumps to the pool*

jillian? jillian? oh god... uhm help!

max was scared, until james were walking around the campus and heard max shouting..

MAX!? WHAT HAPPEND TO JILLIAN!?

i-i dont know i just saw her here in the pool..

lets take her to the clinic..

james and max takes jillian to the clinic..after that max and james waited for jillian to wake up..

come on jillian.. pls wake up..

am going to get her things..

okay..

max wents to the room and gets the things of jillian, then suddenly the phone rang max answered..

uhm hello?

hello? who is this?

uhmm am a friend of your niece ma'am..

well can i speak to jillian..

uhm jillian is in the clinic right now ma'am..

what? what happend to her?!

i saw her in the pool ma'am.. and i didnt know what exactly happend..

okay okay.. if she wakes pls tell her am coming home..

okay ma'am

thank you for the info..

max end the call and goes back to clinic...

i got the things ..

good..

*rings phone*

hello mom?  give me for a sec..

sure

james goes outside while max was in the room..

max..

yes?  -_-

i have to go now my mom wants me to go home .. can you take care of jillian?

(great timing mom -_-**)

sure (hahaha his a mama's boy?!)

james left.. so max take cares of jillian .. then after that jillian screamed!

ahh!! no!! no!!

jillian wake up wake up!

:'s *hugs max*

(=°_°=) ... *smiles* there there..

after that max takes jillian home.. they were walking, they talk each other..

sooo..

*silents*

max looks at jillian .. and she was sad ..

jillian?  are you okay?

*silents*

:/

max grabs jillian ..

max? where are you taking me?

you will see..

max covers jillians eyes..

max?

wait..

max? this is creeping me out.. max?

max on's the lights...

SURPRISE!!

jillian saw the table field with food and specially a birthday cake..

wow! thanks max :'D ..

so jillian and max had a bonding together.. after that max takes jillian to the park and sits on the bench..

thanks max for everything :) you really make my day.. thank you :)

*cute smiles* ..

oh a shooting star.. make a wish max.. hurry before its too late..

*smiles* max stares at jillian ..

what? come on max..

i dont need to make a wish because my wish already came true.. *cute smiles*

whats your wish?

uhm my wish was, that to see my girl of my life..

well i hope you will meet her someday.. :)

well she is here.. right by my side..

(=•_•=) jillian was surprise..

hahaha!! you must be joking right?

no am not..

(=•_•=)  woah.. i should be going now max bye..

wait! *grabs jillian's hands and beguns to hugs her*

max whispered jillian and says..

you were the only one who always makes me smile and everyday you got in trouble i will always be there for you and when james hugged you my heart broke into to pieces but seeing you get hurt by bullies i was more heart broken seeing you crying all day and also i was super scared to confess you to say my feelings to you... JILLIAN ............

..I LOVE YOU..

(=•_•=) jillian was really surprise saying all those words .. so max turned red and take her home..

while they were walking they had an awkward moment.. no talk.. but when they arrive at home.. jillian started talking to him..

uhm max?  ..(=•_•=)

yes? (=•_•=)

uhm .. i have to confess to make..

what?

am really sorry but...

but? what?

me and james are in a relationship..

oh really.. when?

when the day .. you saw him hugged me.. am really sorry..

max was in shock and runs..

MAX?! :(

max cried while he was running .. max run and run and bump to someone..

oh am so sorry .. i wasnt looking sorry..

max was shocked when he saw a girl..

okay guys this chapter will end here .. but dont worry am gonna make some more... soon!!

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